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Chapter 1: Conclusion of current track into Marriage
Part 1
PS: This is continued from Friday's episode 😉
The news spread like a wild fire in Dheradhun:-
'The town's most famous business mens: Mr Raichand and Mr Dobriyal kids caught making out in Mount College Library'

This was the headlines in every news paper, Breaking news in every news channel.
May be this was the revenge the media had taken for Abhay's aggressive behaviour towards them or may be it was somebody's well thought and executed plan?
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@Dobriyal's House

(The main door was attacked with press reporters who were throwing questions after questions at the Dobriyals.

"Aren't both Raichands and Dobriyals business rivals?"
"Is there any partnership chance in near future?"
"Is Piya Dobriyal dating Abhay Raichand?"
"Or were they just having fun?"

The questions were getting too annoying and Mr Arnab Dobriyal had no option rather than calling the guards and pushing the press reporters out of the gates)
Piya: Dad, trust me...its nothing like that *she tried to explain herself*
Arnab: I don't need any explanation... Off course I trust you than any stupid news channel
Panchi: Dont worry Piya... the news is hot now but as soon as these reporters get any other news... this issue shall cool down...
Madhu: News shall cool down...but what about Piya's reputation? *who was sitting silently tensed for soo long, finally spoke up* And its not only Piya's reputation... I have two other unmarried daughters for Heaven's sake... who is gonna marry them after this?
Misha: DUH AH MOM!!! *bangs her head* Why are u talking like a old lady from a old 80s hindi movie? We are in 2000s.The more our family gets hyped.. The better proposal shall we get :D
Madhu: Misha!!! Yeh mazak karne ka time nahi hai!!! Arnab, tum kuch karte kyun nahi??
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@Raichand's Mansion

(Almost the same atmosphere was in the Raichand's house too)
Chand: We had asked Mr Sharma (Mt College new principal) to apologise for his wrong statement given to the press...but he seems just not to bother.
Abhay: He is gonna regret big time for this.
Haseena: Abhay!!! You are not gonna do anything... Did you hear me? Already you are under the glaring eyes of the media... I don't want you to act impulsively and ruin this matter further.
Chand: Your mom is right! And this matter is no longer under Mr Sharma's control... The media has already blown it out of proportion. We have no other option rather than staying still till the matter cools down. People shall forget about it in few days...
Abhay: No dad, Piya will have to hear alot because of me..
Haseena: Stop blaming yourself for everything...Its not your fault.
Abhay: *speeds into his room and bangs the walls in order to vent out his anger. He blames himself completely for leaving the chit on Piya's desk. But he was just trying to protect her from jay!!!!! whenever he wishes to do something good for her, he always ends up hurting her? Why? Why? Why? All this and more was going on in his mind*
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@Next Day: Mount College

(Piya was walking in college corridor with Misha. She can feel almost everyone's eyes on her and can hear all the whispers going around about her and Abhay.)
Misha: Hey Bhaggu!!! These bimboz have no other work...than putting on make up and gossiping... *turns around and looks at them* SHUT UP ALL OF YOU...AND MIND YOUR OWN BUSINESS...DONT INTERFERE IN... *before she says anything further Piya holds her mouth and pulls her away from there to the class*
Piya: Its ok Misha.. It does not affect me any further.
Ruhi: Hiii Piyaaa!!! Is it true that you and abhay and coochie coo??? *asks excitedly* Tell us about it
Misha: C'mon Tracker !!! You too???? You know long long time ago Abhay has broken up with Piya... right???????? *making things loud and clear*
Ruhi: Yea right and then he was dating you and then Panchi and then its Piya again *she gets confused with what she is saying*
Random College guy (classmate): So Abhay Raichand dates the dobriyal sisters turn by turn.. mom-tue, its misha... wed-thu, it may be panchi... fri-sat, Piya huh
Misha: Hahahhahaha... that was not even funny... !!! Now will you shut the dash up or should I fill your mouth up with my shoe???? *warns the random guy*
Another guy classmate: So Piya, your list goes like Kabir, Jay, Abhay... Add me to this list too !! *winks*
Piya: *feels like bashing that guy but her anger just flows out in form of a single tear*
Abhay: *just enters the class n holds both those random-commenting-guys by neck and bangs them against each other*
Misha: Dudeee !! *pulls Abhay away from the guys* Just leave them!! Kiss Kiss ka sarr aise bang karte rahonge??? Literally, the whole college is gossiping about you and Piya. So Lets just ignore them
Abhay: I don't care who says what... I can ignore everyone but I cant ignore...*looks at the tear in Piya's eyes* but I cant ignore... *he finds it difficult to complete his sentence but Misha understands what he wants to say*
Misha: Wo tho main bhi ignore nai karr sakhte but we have no other option...
Abhay: We do have !! *holds Piya's hand* Lets go?
Piya: Where?
Abhay: Just away...from everyone...from this mess...just you and me.. where no one shall disturb us?
Piya: *looks into his eyes..confusedly* but...??
Abhay: You trust me?
Piya: *nods yes...dazzedly*
Abhay: Then lets go
Piya: *holds Abhay's hand tightly*
Misha: uhu uhu *butts in b/w* HAVE YOU'LL LOST IT? The media are all eyes on you both and you wanna go some lonely place so that they get a chance to gossip further??? Ok Whatever You'll can go anywhere BUT not to the library or locker room...PULEZZ!! You'll have turned the Library into Mt College's Taj Mahal.. 'Icon' of "Love".. Everyone has been checking it out since morning and if you'll happen to go there..Patha nahi kis kis ka sarr you will end up banging :/
Abhay: *raises his eyebrow*
Piya: Shut up Misha!! *Abhay helds Piya and they disappear within a few seconds leaving Misha amazedly confused*
Misha: What?? Where did they go? 😕
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(Abhay takes Piya to a lonely place, far away from the city, into the deep forest/the ends of the forest where a river is flowing. All one can hear is the water sound and birds.)

Abhay: *looks straight into the sky*
Piya: Abhay?
Abhay: *he doesn't answer her nor looks back at her* Sorry!
Piya: What? For what? Its not your fault neither mine.. It just happened
Abhay: No ! Its my fault... May be you don't remember but I have to remind you that whenever I have come or been in your life I have always caused you problem, I have always caused you pain and tears, you have landed in dangers because of ME
Piya: *hears all that he says, keeps quiet for a while and then says what she feels* But as far as I remember you have saved me from every problem or danger *recollects abhay saving her from the 4 guys who tried to take advantage of her, abhay saving her from the falling branch and in the forest etc* You say your presence have caused me pain and tears but those pain and tears are nothing front of the heartache I lived when you were not here..and when I see you with someone else *realizes what she is saying and stops*
Abhay: No Piya!! Tum jaante nahi main kaun ho!! Im a monster, who is just made for destruction and not to love
Piya: phir aisa kyun lagta hai ke Im made to love you... to love the monster? Why do I feel time and again that Im made only to love the human hidden inside this monster? *she just blurts out her true feelings without thinking what she is saying*
Abhay: *gives a sharp look at Piya* Watch your words.. You dunno what you are saying.. You don't know anything about me
Piya: tho phir batao mujhe!!! *holds Abhay's arm and turns him towards her* I wanna know!! Aur jhut math bolo... I know ke tum Misha aur Panchi se pyaar nai karte... You are just doing this to keep me away from you. Why??? Tell me... I want to know? *looks straight into his eyes*
Abhay: *gets annoyed at the questions piya throws at him but a small smile plays at the end of his lips seeing his detective-piya-full-of-questions* I have the answers to all your questions...
Piya: then Answer me Abhay !!! Jawaab dho mujhe...
Abhay: But Im no mood to answer you *says putting on a hard face and attitude*
Piya: Mood??? So everything works according to Mr Abhay Raichand's mood?? Jab chaha mujse pyaar karr liya phir chod ke chale gaye phir wapis ah gaye phir mujhe jay ke pas jane ke liye majbor karr diya phir kaha jay se doorrr raho.. and if I ask WHY? Abhay Raichand is in no mood to answer my question? *asks him irritatedly*
Abhay: *looks in her eyes ' thoughts run in his mind: "No Piya No..control your emotions..Emotions have ruined my life and I don't want the same to happen to you. You cant love a monster. Chahta tho tha tumhe khud se dorr rakho thaki tum khush raho par kismat ko yeh bhi manzor nahi... chahte na chahte phir bhi hum pass chale aaye... and I no longer can keep you away from me because you are not safe... you are not safe with Jay."*
Piya: FINE!!! Agar tum mere sawaalo ka jawaab dene ke mood mein nahi ho tho main bhi tumare orders follow karne ke mood mein nahi ho... Jay se door kyun raho? Just because you said? Who are you to tell me what to do and what not to do?
Abhay: Stay away from Jay !! He is not a good guy...
Piya: Oh really? Whats the proof?
Abhay: Trust me *helds both her arms and pleads her yet orders her with his eyes to trust him*
Piya: Trust you? On what bases?
Abhay: *pulls her close to him with a jerk that for a second or two their nose clashes, both nose tips touching each other, looking in each others eyes* What can you see in my eyes?
Piya: *She looks deep into his hypnotic eyes and tries to analysis the blank expression.. yet there is alot of love, concern for her in them. She blinks her eyes and looks down, as his eyes were too intense which made her heart go thud thud thud... One more thud and she would collapse.* What are you doing to me?
Abhay: What am I doing? *asks innocently as he dint realize the effect he had on her*
Piya: Just stoppp it!!! *goes away from him, walks backward and dashes the bark of a tree, closes her eyes and all flashbacks (*after memory loss*:- flasbacks run across her mind: From the time she had seen her angel in his ice-grave to the times he saved her from various dangers to the first time she saw him in college ' the way he tried to put her down and hurt her ' the times he faked his relation with girls and her sisters.) Opens her eyes n finds him right in front of her..starring at her..not even 2inch gap b/w them* You have failed Mr Abhay Raichand
Abhay: I know!
Piya: You have done everything that would make me hate you or keep me away from you but you have failed... I don't hate you *a tear rolls down her cheeks* There is nothing..NOTHING probably you can do that would make me hate you *drags her hands over his chest to his collar and pulls it, giving him a stern expression* DO YOU UNDERSTAND?
Abhay: *he goes even more close to her, she closes her eyes, he feels her breath on his cheeks, her breath makes him feel that he is alive thou he is not breathing.*
(He places both his hands on the bark of the tree, jailing up Piya in b/w his arms and tree, she loosens the grip on his collar and puts her hands around his neck. Both close their eyes, Both wish that this moment could pause forever and Life should have not been so complicated.)
Piya: Lets face it.. *closes her eyes... OK Piya on the count of 3!!! 1..2..3...* I DONT WHO YOU ARE... WHAT YOU ARE.. FROM WHERE HAVE YOU COME... WHAT WAS OUR PAST LIKE...WHAT WILL I FUTURE BE... I JUST KNOW I FEEL EMPTY WITHOUT YOU IN MY LIFE... yes, you are right when you were not there...my life was dot on perfect... but in that life piya was not alive... you give life to me... you give a heartbeat to my heart like no-one did before... Abhay, I really love... *says all this without a pause but before she could complete her last sentence...*
Abhay: *...he kisses her lips gently yet with full force*
(Piya closes her eyes and feels her lips press against his lips, a tear flows from the side of his eyes. It was a passionate lip lock for few moments. But those moments seemed to have stopped like forever. He deepens his kiss to the extent he ends up breaking the tree off its roots, as Piya was leaning on the tree..she goes to fall but he holds her in his arms...and both share a eye-lock again)
I stop here... Will continue soon...
Do comment and lemme know how was it? 🤔
Edited by SnowWhite1618 - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha_ghoriwala

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thanksss 😳 but why you laughing? 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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too gud no words 😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely first chapter. Looking forward to read the story as it looks like you have outlined the plot already and your Misha is as usual a fire cracker. Madhoo always worried about getting the girls married.
Abhay needs to control himself or else he is going to be in a bigger soup.
Bye
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was just mind blowing . . . dnt know what to say, im just lost for words. it was freakin amazing. . i felt pia's and abhay's pain n helplesness, it was beautifully written. .
The moment of passion was so beautifully written

thank u so so much for the pm darling, it means a lot. .continue soon. .tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was too gud...loved it...
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wow yaar awesome update I loved it.Plzz do continue.I love Abhiya romance & wnt 2 read more😊
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oh yr!!!! lovely part 1! Piya and Abhay...it was so sensous...! really great episode!...please continue soon and don't forget to PM me!!!!
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Thanks alot for liking 😳

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