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Posted: 14 years ago
plz update soon.
me dying to know how geet is going to eat.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsum.👏..loving d caring and sweet maan 😍 😍and dev with a caring BIL image😆...light and interesting ff...continue soon dear..add me to ur pm list plx 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome FF read it in one go

plzzz pm me i ve send frd request
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: NANDY_BRU

awesome FF read it in one go


plzzz pm me i ve send frd request

sure i will
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Posted: 14 years ago
wen r u going to update dear
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Originally posted by: ramahesh

eagerly waiting dear

actually i wrote it but accidently dlted it so now writing again
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ssch

actually i wrote it but accidently dlted it so now writing again

Ok dear take ur time
But surely give us an update today
Will be waiting for it
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey thankyou all
updating right now
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hi all
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here is the update
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PART 8:

Maan and geet came home.they went straight to out house.

Doctors were doing Geet's checkup and nurses were arranging home setup

Dev was standing outside the room.it was the last room on the top floor of outhouse.

Oh my my look who is here.kamal ka connection hai apka bro . meeting me bhaite bhaite pata chal gya k bhabhi yaha hai.

Maan rolled his eyes.and moved ahead but then he stopped in his tracks.

What ?

What what?

Geet stomped on his foot kia what what ker re ho ask him mujhe bhabhi q keh ra hai?

Ouch

Bro mujhe lagta hai ap k heart k sath brain bhi gaya hai. Khare khare ouch q ker re ho.

Tum dono pagal ho … maan said frustrated.

Geet pouted

Bro dosra kon? Yaha sirf me ho.

Whatever why r u calling geet bhabhi?

Ab apki wife ko bhabhi hi kaho ga na.

N who told you that k she is my wife?

Just then doc came out.

All set Mr khurrana. She will be fine here. I will be doing daily checkup. 2 nurses will stay with her 24 * 7. call me if any thing happens.

Ji doctor.

Ok doctor but make sure no body learns of her .or else she will be your last case.

Ji . I will take your leave now.

And he left.

Thanks for keeping it secret maan said to dev

Dev smirked and went to geet's side

Wow bhabhi kia jadu kia hai aapne bro per

Ye thanks bol re hai wo bhi mujhe.

Dev I will kill you if u don't stop

Mene kia kaha hai ap sach ki awaz duba nahi sakte.q bhabhi

Dev.

Bro aap na bohat chalak ho itni asani se sab chupaya wa tha.

Bilkul sahee bohat chalak ho geet was sitting on bed with her body.

Geet tum chup raho

Kia bro bechari behosh bhabhi ko bhi chup kara re ho

Kia daikh k inho nai aap se shadi ki.

Kia bhabhi bhabhi lagaya wa hai tell me why r u saying it.

Nahi batao ga.

Nahi batao ge?

Nahi

Maan singh khurrana se takar bohat bhari pare ge

Thk hai I will tell dadi that you married her behind her back

Hahahahaha geet was laughing uncontrollably.

Tere to .. maan charged towards him but he ran away towards the main mansion.

Maan followed him and geet behind him.

Dadi ma was coming for the lunch when she found her two grand sons following each other like tom n jerry.

Ye kai ho ra hai. Maan aap ko kia hogya hai

Ishq… dev whispered.

Maan stomped dev's foot.

Bro what was that for?

For talking un necessarily.

Maan ye sab kia horaha hai?

Kuch nahi dadi ma. Wo wo

Ufu dadi ma bhook lagi thi to hum race leaga re thy k khana k table tak phle kon pohanche ga..

Oh aiye bhaithiye . nakul khana laga do.

They all settled.

Per me kaise khao? Geet asked innocently.

U said you had an idea.

Oh bro wo I was thinking of and he started his weirdest list of ideas. As he thought maan was asking him.

I will come in your body

No he shouted and stood up.

Fine na kare accept me naya idea le ker ao ga

Geet became teary again. Ok fine.

Geet entered his body.

Nakul brought the khana. All desi

Arey nakul ye kia . sab Indian aap ko pata hai maan ye sab nahi khate.

Per maan sir ne hi kaha ye sab banana ko.

Maan

Dadi ma khaiye questions na poche.

And he/she started. All fried and spicey . he/she wd add more spices everytime she wd refill the plate.

Dadima and dev kept on looking at him in awe.

Finally geet felt it was enough bechara maan or kitna dale ga apni pate me? As already he/she has eaten so much.

As she was about to come out of his body when an idea stuck her.

She/He picked up 5 green chillis and put them in his/her mouth. And moved out of his body . the moment she came out of his body he got a jerk and bit the chillis.

He threw them out on the table.

Ahhh he picked up the water jug and tried drinking from it. It fell half on him and half on the table but his mirchi did not subsided.

Geet laughed her heart out. Dev and dadi were looking at maan as if they are sitting in a movie theater and some comedy movie is being shown.

He cd not control any more

Dadima kia karo mirch

Dev started laughing too.

Dev daima glared. Baite kuch meetha khaiye.

He almost ran to the kitchen opened the fridge it and dug in the cake present in there.

He ate it until the chilli sensation ended. And sat down there on the floor panting geet was laughing like mad and then in a flash her hand accidently touched the bowl full of flour and it fell directly on maan's head

Geeettt… maan shrieked gaining attention of both dev and dadi

PRECAP:

#1 Maan catching Geet's chori

# 2 bedroom fight
# 3 maan trying to make dev tell why he calls her bhabhi
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Posted: 14 years ago
this is awesome...n it was so funny...dev calling geet bhabhi...dadi ma seeing her potas like tom n jerry...lol...n then geet enteting maan's body...n being naughty...she purposely ate that chilli...poor maan...

continue soon n thnxxx...

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