Maaneet.. Just like Heaven UPDATING

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi all
Samra here .
I am starting a new fiction. a total hiarious one.as i thought that we need fictions and posts where we can laugh and forget our worries so here i am starting this one. NO sad updates for this one and that is for sure.😉
hope you like it .
here is the prologue. a short and simple one.
from part 1 onward the real story wd begin. this is based on a concept from a movie just like heaven.
PROLOGUE:

Aadi aik kaam bhi thk se nahi ker sakta.. uper se vickey ka kuch pata nahi chala kia jawab do ga dadima ko ab me.kia karo. Ye kaam bhi zarori hai . abhi nikalta ho subah tak delhi pohanch jao ga .

He took out his phone

Hello

Mere kaam ka kia hua tum ne jo information mujhe di thi wo galat thi.

Mujhe tumhare koi fazool k bahane nahi sunne. Agli bar mujhe sahee info chahiye or wo bhi jaldi.

Maan singh khurrana ko na sunne ki adapt nahi hai hai so better be careful

He crushed the coke can in his hand taking his frustration out on the poor can.

He sat in his jeep and started it. He zoomed out of the area .

This place is weird . sab log pagal hai yaha I m never coming back to hushiarpur again.

He drew for another 4 hrs . it was 1 am he was getting drowsy and tired . he had been up since 5 tracking vickey and now this long journey . ab is andher wirane me kuch mile ga bhi nahi.

Coke hi pe laita ho.shaid kuch bhter lage. I have to reach delhi in time .. he reached for his bag that was on passenger's seat to get the soda when a road bump made it fell.

Ahhh. He checked the road ahead it was clear no traffic

He bent down to get it when suddenly a truck beeped

He looked up to see a truck coming his way the truck driver pulled the truck in other directon and he in another but a girl just appeared out of that thick forest in front of the truck she was looking back and did not notice the traffic

The truck hit her and she flew and fell on his car. He lost control and hit the nearby tree.

They both lay unconscious holding hands
Please press the like button and comment . i promise this is not a sad fiction so dont worry about the accident.😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Character sketch:

Maan singh khurrana:
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same like in show young rich arrogant msk

Geet handa:
bubbly cute fun loving girl. is in coma and only maan can see her spirit and can talk to her.😉
rest of the characters same as in drama
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Posted: 14 years ago
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me likeyyy
cont soon!
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey ..
luved it alot..
plz..post next part soon ...
ttha concept is amazing ...
thanks for the pm ..

~ love savie
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very good samra.. tumne inka accident bhi karvadiya. but holding hands.. lol.. love the beginning.. cont sooon yaar.. aage aage ab hoga kya? lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats for the new fiction🥳
awesome part👏
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#7
awesome updt
pehle hi accident & holding hands?
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting
continue soon
i am in😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats for new ff
tumne inka accident bhi karvadiya. but catching hands
loved it
nice begining
cont soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#10
awww so it's inspired from "Just Like Heaven"..I am sure it's gonna be fun reading this...
can't wait to read it...
plz add me to your PM list..

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