FF: You & I...Collide 2 Prt21 Pg132 Oct26 - Page 10

Originally posted by: euphoric

Hieee🤗

See as promised I'm here 😳

yay!!! im so happy!! 😃

That makes my first monday morning task... thank God my boss is not around😕😆 Hmm' lets start with the name' "You and I collide" lol...you are one of us too...hiding IF from your boss!! isnt it awesome!! but my bosses are cool...as long as the work is done...they dont mind 😃

Collide' collision that usually results into friction and friction that causes sparks and the ultimate result is destruction' either the two bodies are burnt to ashes or are crushed against the massive force! And from where I see in this story it's the clash of ideologies' clash of pride to ego' clash of the two strong minded people' standing for they see is right' where evidently one is right and the other blinded and thus erroneous!

wow!! what an analysis!! i love it!! so beautifully put...now this would have been the perfect teaser at the very beginning before i started the story!! this is awesome!!! im going to save it!!! 👏

Jaz I'll be honest when I first read in one of the comments that its not going to be Maaneet I was hugely disappointed and wondered how you would be carrying the story' coz the way we have been seeing these two its very difficult to imagine them with the other people' you may kill one but bringing in the other person kills the notion of forever that these two have made us live in' and that's the reason I shifted myself to HS first' hehehe' you remember you asked me how I was going to read this first but landed on HS ;) well tht was the reason but I must say I love the way you have carried off with the topic'. I'm still sulking though for you to break their bubble of forever! 😆...oh so thats why you stopped...lol...maneet ka breakup ka sadma tujhse bardasht nahin hua? 😛...but i get it...i really do...we are so used to maneet 24/7 that to not have then isnt justified (in the eyes of the reader)...im with you on that part...😳

Lets come to the characters first'. lets! he he

Maan' a protective and ever indulging brother' a caring husband' a successful business man' the ypical angry young man' but but but' the fiercely egoistic persona with an inflammably impulsive nature' there were times I pitied him and the other when I felt angry at him' relationships he cherished when it came on his terms' opposition and rejection he could fathom and handle' I will not cut him a slack here for he deserves none as far as I'm concerned! very aptly put...he is all of those things...the best and most loving person in the world...but cross him...and go against his plans/ideas...then Babaji save you and the relationship you have with him...

Geet' a level headed female who had her priorities set' who knew what she wanted' a loyal daughter' a caring lover' an angelic guardian' I loved her completely' and I m all going to support her for what she did no one would. The prick in her heart pricked me several times and I felt sorry for her many times and proud of her stance in life. She deserves to be happy and if that happiness is away from the man she loved' so be it!

see...you used the word correctly...LOVED...past tense...if that man couldnt support her in her life...why be with him...why be with someone who wants things their way or no way at all...right? she did suffer a bit after the breakup...how could she not...but...she's come out stronger on the other side...though same may not be said about maan 😉

Naintara' ok I'm going to cut a slack for her' An insecure and scared kid with no one to look upto other than her brother but she maintains her positivity' she stays in her bubble till fate permits' ok I do feel angry at her at times but I don't blame her entirely' and then what happened with her' I deeply feel sorry for her' she didn't deserve it! im with you on naina...there are still levels to her persona that havent been introduced...she knows what she did was wrong...and a decision made on impulse by her is haunting her...her whole life revolves around that one decision..and she's feeling the consequences for sure

Sameera' what do I say about her' I can never imagine how difficult it would have been for her to be in a loveless marriage' her marriage is purely a marriage of convenience and now is based on trust and understanding' I feel sorry for her.

many marriages are lost on love...but the understanding, trust and care that is there is enough to last a life time...because at the end of the day all we want is a companion who accepts us for who we are...and she went into it with her eyes open...😳

Hmm' now to the story' hmm..dekhte hai...kitne joote padne wale hai 😕

When Naintara was brought into the hospital as a victim' I always wondered what a girl barely in her twenties would have done some 10 years down the line that she felt so guilty about' and yet she came back to the only person whose trust she had broken' for she couldn't trust anyone then' fabulous! I was so sorry to see her in that state' no one' no one deserves to go thru the pain that she went through' a victim of wrong choices! And it was truly touching the way Geet looked after her' yes she was a doctor but in many places she was more of a guardian that she had been years back than just being a doctor there' hats off to her!

yeah...it took me a while to figure out how to plot out this story...and how i would have Geet/NT interactions...because after what NT did...it wouldnt be off to see Geet being rude to her...but in this story...Geet is an out and out professional...every patient is a patient regardless of their past...and when she saw a girl she loved so dearly in such a state...how can she not use her heart in her actions 😭

When Maan came in and he saw her evidently he was struck between mixed emotions' at one end he felt pride and other he felt that grudge' but was the grudge directed towards her or her profession or her success' No! in many ways his grudge was aimed at her choice' her priority and her preferences in life' its not her fault that the man she fell for was not as level-headed as she had been and not to forget he felt all those even after a decade' after being happily married to someone, he was even jealous to see her with Adi' somewhere it was thus evident that his heart still yearned for her but the doors had been shut a long while back and he had no one but himself to blame to. his grudge is aimed at it all...at her for leaving him...at her profession because it was her priority and her success because it means that she'd made the right choice for her...for both Maan and Geet...old feelings came to the surface when they collided with each other...that doesnt mean they are real feelings that they have now...but feelings that were left unresolved...and to now have that person in front of you...those feelings rushed back...

She came into his dull life to brighten his world' she became his friend and his companion' she understood him perfectly' she stood by him in the time of his need' she became his moral support' she became the caretaker of his home and the guardian and elder sister to his younger sister' when she loved him' she accepted him as a whole' without any probations' without any reservations'.

what can you say...she was Geet Handa...she'd give nothing less and we expect nothing less from her 😳

I loved the way she gelled up with the little Naina' in lot many ways she understood Naina like no one did' she was the one who was balancing and guiding her' she was teaching her right and wrong' she was not only her friend but also a mother-figure to the girl whose parents preferred to stay out of the sight for most of the times' had it been only Maan could he have ever handled naina the way Geet did? No! coz he never attempted to see things through the eyes of the little girl' he never understood her' he gave and spat the truth in front of her without ever realizing what he was psychologically doing to young developing brain of his sister' but it was Geet who changed it all to provide direction and a sense of holding into the Khurana house' she was their anchor in every sense' had it been someone else in her place at that young age would have simply refused to take responsibility of these things' but she did it' she did it for them for the ungrateful! can you imagine Maan trying to raise an adolescent Naina by himself!! omg!! the sex talk alone would be hilarious!!! 🤣 ...for him...before Geet came into the picture...his responsibility was to keep nahin safe and secure...her feelings didnt really play a role...and of course...his hot headedness doesnt help matters...but for sure...they'd be lost without her...totally up the creek without a paddle!!

From the perspective that I see this story I see Maan as a failed man' he failed both the women he loved' Geet as well as Naintara' how did he fail NT? im curious...he gave her what he wanted...but i guess as a mentor and parental role...he didnt instill values in her...or certain values at least...or are you referring to the fact that they havent spoken in over a year?

It doesn't matter what he did was to fulfill his sister's demand' or to put her young insecure mind to rest' for the end result was disaster' his sister is in a neck deep mess' as a brother he proved to be a disaster! Being kids we demand several things from our parents' some rational while some irrational' what matters the most to a kid is the fulfillment of his or her wish and not the broader context or implication of those demands' it's the parents prerogative to decide what wishes are to be fulfilled while what requires some serious introspection' if a child decides to play with fire' however indulgent the parents and the siblings are you never allow to do that' for that you would deny their wishes' scold them or even let them cry for they know the momentary disagreement is better than the long-term pain that the child would endure' or simply some things are beyond reach' if a child loves puppets one doesn't install a live puppet at home' but in Maan's case he failed to see the root behind his sister's request' oh you explained it here...lol...ignore my previous remark then...😆 ...he could never know the root behind his sisters request...he had no idea that her insecurity didnt lie in not having a traditional nuclear family but in Geet herself...for him...his relationship was geet was to end in their marriage...that was the culmination that he saw in the future...he figured that getting married a bit earlier wouldnt be a big deal...that way his future was still intact and at the moment, Naina got what she needed...

Naintara was no fool' she was a smart kid and that time and again you have proved' yet she was kid who didn't realize the implications of her actions' she was just trying to keep her brother to herself' she was refusing to share her brother with anyone and had her brother acted a little sensible and mature he could have talked to her to make her secure' even she never imagined that Maan would go a step further and marry a random girl' she failed to see the results' not her fault' her thought were confined to today' to the matter at hand' she didn't realize she would hurt the two people she love to such a great extent' the happy dance just proved the innocence of her age and heart' she was blinded by the words her brother had so casually uttered' she didn't realize she was actually playing with the two lives' I won't blame her as much for if someone would have chosen to use their brains the situation could have been handled. exactly right...she figured that by getting Geet out of Maan's life..she'd have him all to herself...that was the end of the plan...simple...but she failed to take into account that her brother would do anything for her...ANYTHING for her...and if she said she needed a family then that is what he was going to give her...her happy dance celebration was very short lived!!

And then when Maan got Sameera home the result was she could never accept her' she could never accept her as her bhabhi' for her she was only her brother's wife! Sadly she drifted away from Maan' was it guilt? To a certain extent yes but also probably she couldn't fathom the fact that Maan so easily gave her GG's place to someone else' deep down' she probably felt the betrayal that Geet lived in' for she knew that place rightfully belonged to only one female'Geet! and she just couldn't accept anyone else taking her place' no wonder she couldn't even allow Sameera to come so close to her for her comfort zone was with Geet' where Maan could give the place to another girl' Naintara stuck her loyalties to Geet! Maan failed yet again! why NT and Maan drifted apart will come out in the right time...but you're on the right path here...its so much thats going on in her mind and heart...when she realized the implications of her little plan...it was too late...there was no going back...and only then did she realize the crushed the heart of the one woman who not only made her brother happy but her happy as well...

The ultimatum Maan put Geet through was horrendously insensitive' more that Naintara's wish his ego was bruised' in an instant he forgot what that female had been doing for him nd his sister' he forgot the love support and comfort she so selflessly showered upon him' the girl who bridged the gap between him and his sister' he forgot all' I just couldn't fathom his actions there' it was outrageous the way he trampled on her wishes asking her to choose between him and her mother's last wish' using the power of his money to intimidate her' offensive! he was quite pig headed in this situation...i had to choose his lines carefully to make sure that he came off that way...or else it wouldnt justify his means...for him NT is everything...and unfortunately Geet got trampled in the process...Yet she understood his perspective like no one could' and what she got in return? She was thrown out like a trash' there was no attempt from his end to come to consensus... he didn't try to talk to Naintara' he couldn't wait for her for few years' I'm sure if he would have tried to negotiate and buy some time there with Naintara' she would have realized that Maan and Geet will never put her on the back burner' and all her life she knew that at least Geet will never for in the time of her need' years later too' she turned only to her! But Maan instead of making some makeshift arrangements he passed on his verdict that broke a beautiful relationship that was to be nurtured' Is that how a relationship works where the muscular partner expects you to bend and follow his wishes and ways if they were meant to work' I wonder what if she would have given in' I don't think this would have been an end to this' this situation would have cropped up again where she would be put to test to choose' jo ek baar hua' woh dobara kyun nahi ho sakta? I wonder if he ever respected or if he would have ever respected her wishes! He failed as a lover for even when she saw through Nainatara and tried to tell him' he didn't believe her! that is where Geet's heartache lies...she doesnt fault him for being there for his sister or for choosing her over Geet...she knew from the minute she met MSK that for him his sister and his responsibility towards her is what mattered most...everything else and everyone else was second place...what Geet couldnt fathom was that he didnt give her a chance to explain the vastness of the messy situation they were in...Geet will have her day with MSk...just you wait 😉

The only relation now he has intact is with Sameera who's his wife' the marriage of convenience' if it wouldn't have been Sameera it would have been someone else' it's a sorry state to stay under a roof to know that you would never be loved by your husband so dearly for his heart is ruled by another woman' and yet she stood by him' great round of applaud to her' and then when she said she would have quietly left' it was so sad' the pain she have been through was just so evident. I hope Maan takes on wisely with atleast this relationship and the responsibility of a child.

i wont comment here about the love or lack there of in SaMaan's relationship...stay tuned for part 15...many questions will be answered and much more information will be brought to light 😛

And what shall I say about Geet' the woman is marvelous' she put even her self-respect behind to give him and them a chance when she went back the other day' she still stood up for her sister and now is treating his wife' for no fault of hers she's living a life that is so sad and gloomy' I'm angry at Khurana's for coming back into her life' for putting her through all this again' and I'm glad that atleast she had Adi' if Adi can give her the happiness she has been devoid of' than be it' she didnt put her self respect aside...not the way i look at it...like you said earlier...she was clearly the more level headed one...she knows how temperamental he can be...so she went back as a mature adult to talk it out thinking he's cooled down some...little did she know that he was still riled up and still on edge...because yes he was a jerk and he said all the wrong things...but...life as he knew it...it was being threatened and he could see it start to fall apart...that put him more on guard and thus...he became an even bigger jerk 😕

Uff' that's a longgg comment now'. Did you reach the end without dozing off in between?

ha ha...i did...i totally did!! no drifting off at all!! issi liyeh i saved it til morning...so i would be fresh!! 😆 ...one observation...you didnt mention Adi or Geet/Adi at all...why is that? he eh

Originally posted by: mchopra

Jaz arewnt we getting a teaser for epi of HS too..isnt that due too..

ya...about that...note to follow soon 😳

JAZ

Originally posted by: sonnal_17

why didn't she accept...Maan did marry and sam is pregnangt..why shouldn't my sweet get her hapiness too...why should she waist her life...adi is such a nice sweet guy...why did she say no...is she still in love with MSK...? ohh pls pls geet should marry adi and i want to see how Maan react...oh why should it bother him...he's ya so happy with sam...i know i shouldn't blame him...still i want Geet to be married and pregnangt with twins...

P.S not to forget Ramadan Mubarak

itne saare sawal...if i answered them for you...story would be khatam!! 😉...so hang in there...but i can tell you...there is more to the story and when you read the update...all questions will be answered 😛...and tauba...pregnant with twins...you did all her family planning for her!! 😲

JAZ

Originally posted by: Lip-a-Licious

Ramazan Mubarak Jaz...

almost 2 hours to go till iftar in the UK and i can feel a slight headache coming on!!!!

anyways Adi Kent-Steamy proposed 😲 and Geet said no

eagerly waiting to read what happens next ...

Nads!! a very lovely surprise for you in the next update!!! 😉 and teri toh...you're probably already eating...i have at least 6hrs to go 😭

JAZ

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

hey jaz...ramadan mubarak...enjoy with the whole family...

coming to the teaser n the FF...

as much as i hate to write this n say...i have to...

i am taking sanyas from this FF... 😲...haw!? you!? say it aint so...kaar diya naa mood kharab!! 😭

i thought i can take it...as in read n bear everything...but this story has really gripped me...i cant seem to take my mind of it...i was actually trying to think what will happen next...all the possibilties while studying...n this defo did not look good to my mom......who asked me what i was doing n replied ...still in trance...adi n geet saath me kaise ho sakte hain ...but maan n sam bhi to hain...to ye possible hai..hai naa...n my mom's face ...well u can imagine...😆 omg!! tauba...ok ok...i take back the mood kharab comment...you focus on studies and all...or else auntyji will murder me for sure!! tauba!!! 🤣 did you really tell her that!? 😲

also as much as i want to c maan n geet together...i am sure this is not going to happen...as sam is really a sweetheart n adi too...n i cant c their heart breaking... no more heart breaks in this story...the breaking of Maneet was more than enough and im sure everyone agrees...Sameera and Adi deserve better 😳

i might be wrong in my thinking ...n i wish i would turn out to be...but what my mind is saying that...YOU N I collided...just to say our final goodbye...like a proper one...without any regrets...without any grudges held against each other...just to bid farewell in a proper manner...to c my love has some1 who will take care n love in d same way as i did n somewhere in my heart still do... ok...im officially stealing that line...possibly for the ending...but that is pretty much the idea im thinking of...but of course...i have other ideas playing in my mind 😳

i know...i am being senti n probably making no sense at all...but i dont know if i can read it furthur... aww hun...you make perfect sense 😃

well u can say...taking sanyas is like a coping mechanism for me...to try to deviate my mind from reading or thinking abt it... take your time...take all the time you need 😳

but i promise...when this story ends...i will defo read all the parts...the ones which i am going to miss...

n dont u dare not send me PMs...i will need them...once i feel like i have it in my heart to read it... will do the PM's...no worries on that...but abhi se keh rahi hoon...i had best see a maha long comment when you finally do decide to catch up!! 😃

enough of my long chatter...

bye for now...

will be back when the story ends...adios...

Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

Ok you do NOT give a teaser like that and then leave LOL

OMG OMG HE PROPOSED! HE EFFING PROPOSED!

39u0wrienofcwobeedgo9939rujnef!#ei9gnf2!!! WAAAHAHAHH.

Z

if you dont fall madly in love with Dr. Adi Mehra by the end of the next update...mera naam bhi jaz nahin!! lol

JAZ

Originally posted by: jnawaz

Nads!! a very lovely surprise for you in the next update!!! 😉 and teri toh...you're probably already eating...i have at least 6hrs to go 😭

JAZ