FF: You & I...Collide 2 Prt21 Pg132 Oct26 - Page 11

Originally posted by: Lip-a-Licious

oh Jaz... I ate too much... i have a stomach ache now !!!!!!

ooohhh a lovely surprise huh... now i'm very eager to read the next part 😆

😡...tauba...yahaan meri jaan jaa rahi hai...aur tu...hmph!! my stomach is rumbbling and you are telling me how you stuffed yourself!! not done...its only 330...iftar is at 8 😭

JAZ

Originally posted by: flowergirl_O

hey fuppi...i finally am commenting on your amazing creation i was so surprised to see your comment!!! eee!! 😃...also i finally caught up on your updates and i have to say that it is sooo much better when i read it than when you tell me oh ya...of course...cuz when i tell you...its just like ideas that im playing with...but when i put words to the ideas...its totally different! 😆...out of everything the one thing i liked the most was how you showed maan and sameera's relationship and the way you potrayed sameera as a individual...when you first told me that you were going to show that maan was married to sameera, i acted like it could work but in my head i was like i am going to hate sameera but now after reading it i just can't hate her... 🤣 you acted like it was ok!! 😲 well you had me fooled for sure!!! he he...i wonder if guli acted as well...hmm...im going to have to ask her!! 😆yes at first i was very stubborn on geet ending up with maan but now i don't want that to happen at all...i don't know exactly why but i love sameera and maan as a couple...i agree...i think i can accept the idea of SaMaan because of how great Sameera is!! i love her!! 😳but the most important thing i wanted to tell you is that your teaser left me craving for more...and it made me extremely excited to read about adi and geet...i tried to imagine how you are going to show adi and geet and if you are going to show them end up together or not but i stopped as soon as i realized whatever you do put will not be anything close to what i come up with... im excited in posting the next part...i really want to see what everyone thinks about Adeet as they are all calling Adi and Geet...lol...cuz i totally love Adi!! 😳basically i just want to say that everything you have put so far and everything you put in the future has and will continiue to leave people speechless and it was lazy of me not to leave comments and just have you tell you what was happening in the story because you deseve to be complimented...i will see you later at you house tonight aww...thanks!! you're so sweet!! love you!! and yes...see you soon...im starving!!!

OMG!!!!!!! i almost forgot to tell you that i learned how to pray...there are a few things i still don't know but i know most of it...i didn't want to but was forced to...now i have been forced to pray...but there's only one more month left because once school starts they cant' force me to and if they do i'll just say that i have homework...that is the reason i so badly want to go to school and plus i miss my friends a lot...i just realized i could have told you all this when i met you... thats awesome!!! i know its forced now...but as you grow up your ideas might change...so better to know it...cuz its your parents responsibility to teach you...and if you dont learn...they have to answer to Allah...so good...im proud of yoU!! 🤗

Originally posted by: hopehot

my 1st pm for this ff ...going to start from 1 part

kool!! i better get a comment for each chapter...thats 13 so far!! he he

JAZ

Originally posted by: ajenn

Jaz... Ramadan wishes to you. Happy fasting 🤗 What the menu for the day.. 😉

too much food yaar!! itna khaya maine...if i talk about food im going to throw up 🤢

JAZ