MANNEET MOHABETEIN {THREAD _3} - Page 22

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...

plz dnt separate them...

make sure twist is positive...
evashrestha thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
superlike...
waiting 4 the next part...
wahts the twist..???

monikaseth thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Super duper update 👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part/...

another twist..ab kya hone wala hai..??

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey abhi
thanx for pm and update
and now wat the twist here yaar 😊
hope it is the turning point of the story update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
me ready for the twist
as long maaneet together
fascinating part
love it
wow maan in hurry to claim geet
to his wife
love wrried about geet his charm
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART:56
that night mann is restless becoz he is going to say geet about the engagement...
but he dont no whether she is ready for that or not
so soon...
but he knew that geet ll say yes for him...she is also waiting for that moment only...
he want to say now only so he entered her room...but she is no where on the bed
he is worried about her where she can do this night
he had seen whole KM but she is not there
at that moment he can see geet in nikhil's room...
he saw the talking something
he can see geet head on nikhil's lap and he is caressing her head
what happened geet ?
why are u so worried...
i dont bai i feel today my heart says is something wrong is going to happen
i feel myself that i lost someone today...
i know what are u thinkind
tommrow chachi {geet's mom}ki barsi hai
so ua re thinking about her...
yes bai!
i dont no but today i want her more bai!
i want to see her,hug her,talk with her, luagh with her,
i m missing very much...
i want to see her bai!
mann is listening to everything...he knew how much geet loves her mom and she is missing her much
and tommrow her mom's barsi...and he want to say about the engagement how can he say?
i ll wait sometime and say about this...he is at the door and listening
and geet is crying
no geet today u cant cry
u know mann pick u up in his hands and take to ur bed
he loves u lot
i m very happy to see u both like this
and even chachi is happy to see that
she only want ur happiness as we all want
more mann geet !
he loves u more than his life...he can do anything for ur smile
so dont make him sad for anything
no bai i know he loves me a lot...
but sometimes i feel that will i can give the same love to him
can i love the same way?
geet love is not buissness that how much share of love u are sharing with eachother
it is the connection of the heart where u share ur heart beats...each and everyword which is realted to u...
this is love
wo bai...becoz of pari even u knew what is love
actually i missed her
she only came once and left us
dont worry she ll come back dear u know she loves u also much...
so how can she leave u and go?
she ll come back for sure...i know she comes bai!!!!!!

at that time mann comes and say
sorry if i had been disturbance between lovely bro & sis
yes u are mr.khurana how can u hear our words like that
oh i m sorry for ur kind info i m his frd and future huby of u
so i have right to come
geet blushes listening to the word huby
both mann & nikhil say ohhh!
shirtup u guys...
mann u here at this time?
ay i want to meet geet so i did not find her in his room so i checked all around and found with u...
geet if i ask tommrow it is ur mom's barsi
so now only asking u
what?
i want to make u my finace soon
so pls...r u ready for the engagement...
she comes out of the bed and satnd before him
and say
r u ready now mann?
he is dumbstick...
mann no need to ask me this
i m urs u can just say get ready then i ll
never...try to ask me anything about us
becoz i feel u dont have any rights on me ...he puts his index finger on her lips
geet never say that
i have only the rights on u
so never dare to say that

if u guys are stop this even i m here
are u both want me to sleep on the couch in the hall
if u want to do anything pls go to respective ur rooms
not in my room
it is reserved so plsss
and one more thing mann tommrow morning we leaving to SM so u and all come there
i think u knew what is it?
he signals mann that dont want to take that name
he assures that...
sure
so madam shall we
they both leave


geet ! do u really feel ii dont have rights on u
never dont say mann...u are only the person i can go for any extent...
i just want to be in ur arms forever mann
they both hug...


precap:twist


pls do comment
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i m coming back from vacation so i think i cant update till monday
but if time permits sure i ll...



Renu13 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb...waiting for the twist!!
blueopal thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey nice update yaar...
waiting for the twist...looking fwd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
so its her mom's barsi...
i think her father is going to come and thats the twist...
pl cont soon

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