OS: Remembrance Part 2 pg48 Aug16

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: --Nargis--
Another tear jerker...You always do this to us!!!!😭😊

just fyi...i cont count this as a proper Nargis comment...he he 😉

JAZ

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

do get pleasure to make us cry

or sad & painful story to poor readers

but still love it core

yu narrate perfectly

ty 4 pm

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jenny

@ajenn

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Jaz... This OS reminds me of ur arrival!!!!
The Dramatic Destruction Queen's arrival!!!!
It looks like u r competing with Reya to win the title. 😆

I truly loved this OS.
Thou it was so sad sad cry cry part.
The best part was, the way u recall back his moments with his Misti.
It was really the best scene...

Thx for this such a painful yet wonderful OS

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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

just love the os
but it was so sad.
😭😭😭

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mandymore

@mandymore

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Awsome n beautiful prt,although dey r not toghtr anymore but it was too gud n emotional

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Lily201

@Lily201

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

I've loved a lot of your FFs and OSs even as a silent reader- your writing flair is truly fab!!😃 This one is really well articulated and when Maan finally reminsces his past with Geet -it touches one's heart But Geet's dying and that too in such a state - especially the funeral part made me pained

Edited by Lily201 - 14 years ago

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: jnawaz

ya...sad stories...u remember them for a long time to come because they is something to take away from the story...

okay sweets...my lips are sealed 😉 guli won't find out😆

and OMG...u wouldn't believe it...i am a huge nicholas spark too...his way with words is just ⭐️⭐️

i have a collection of most of his books...but the Notebook and A Walk to Remember are my absolute favs...

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: ajenn
Jaz... This OS reminds me of ur arrival!!!!
The Dramatic Destruction Queen's arrival!!!!
It looks like u r competing with Reya to win the title. 😆

I truly loved this OS.
Thou it was so sad sad cry cry part.
The best part was, the way u recall back his moments with his Misti.
It was really the best scene...

Thx for this such a painful yet wonderful OS

Not true...so not true😲...i said it to Sherya before too...nobody beats the Jazzy girl in her sadist ways...

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

OMG Jaz...
u made me cry...god n this tears don't seem to stop...😭...
beautifully written jaz...!!!
m left speechless...dnt know what to say...👏
just loved the way u recalled all those maaneet moments wen maan's memory was on its way...!! he recalled everything...geet smiled wen she heard him say he remembered everything n how he forgot his mishti..😳...n that is wen she closed her eyes...forever...never to open them again...😭...
it lurched my heart...to see geet die...
awesome just awesome...!!
tho it was a sad one...but it was outstanding...
it was beautiful...
i choked up wen i read the part where geet is dying...n that's wen the tears din seem to stop...😭..
but it was a wonderful OS...can't resist ur sad stories cz even if i want to avoid the sad ones...i still end up reading them...
it was simply beautiful n marvelous...😳

Edited by bansipatel - 14 years ago

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Raman

@palsweety51

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#70

Jaz yaar kya rula diya i am sitting here reading and crying thank god noone is in my room or else my parents would be like whats wrong with her it was very emotional and sad that geet is no more..Mann Misthi left him alone very sad yaar...

Raman