OS: Remembrance Part 2 pg48 Aug16 - Page 5

Originally posted by: amita5

nice ff. u made me cry while reading it...please pm me when u write the next one

please dont write such sad stories it is depressing...already reya writes such depressing stories

hope to read the next one

i have catch up on Reya's stories...everyone keeps saying she's a sadist too!! eee!! 😃...

JAZ

Originally posted by: MsMovielover

ohh that was so sad you killed geet 😭
after reading u & i and now this i;m feeling so depressed 😭
off to read best friend epilogue to feel better 😆

thats why i said read that one last!! cuz it will bring up your spirits!! he he...😃...hope it did...

JAZ

Originally posted by: acjanfeb1

That was really sad . but jaz , i must congraluate to take one line and webbed such a beautiful story and giving the true emotions and meaning to those lines. awesome jaz and keep going and give us more beautiful and fabulous stories .Even though , u r tragedy queen , we all luv u and ur writeup , waise bhi zindagi dukh or sukh ke tane bani se hi judi hai . u give us beautiful yet the most true emotions of life we do face in our daily life .

omg...best comment ever!! im so glad that you appreciate the emotions that i try to weave into the stories...😳...its those one lines that kill me most of the time...and to be able to attach an entirely new story to them...in a whole new context...im glad that you see that

JAZ

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

hayyooo rabbaaa Jazzy...back to ur Sadist mode ...

sherya was blasting me for being a sadist in my story...but see sherya...no body can beat the Jazzzy girl 😆 aare...let shreya blast...i saw...the best stories are the sad ones...cuz those are the ones you remember because they are the ones that really make you feel the emotions...no? 😳

oh honey...i have a weakness for sad stories because i believe that they have a beauty of their own..and this OS captured the beauty...honey u have penned this flawlessly...it was just perfect...

the way u emoted Maan and Geet's emotions...and of course Dadi was just too good...

this made my heart heavy because Geet died...Maaneet will live on...because Geet lives in Maan's heart... YES!! omg...you are my new best friend (dont tell guli)...cuz i believe the same thing...sad stories have their own beauty...and to portray one is amazing!! just...it leaves me speechless when i read sad stories...maybe thats why im a nicholas sparks fan...but i just love them too!!

Loved it... thank you!! 😳

Originally posted by: cue1

I just have one thing to say to you...I HATE YOU FOR MAKING ME CRY!!!!!!!!!!

but...I LOVE YOU!!! 😳

JAZ

Originally posted by: mchopra

Sana: Maine sirf chaar trageides likhi hai aaj tak..come on..yeh toh har FF/S/OS mein kisi na kisi ko maarti rehti hai..

JAZ

Originally posted by: Kkadss

U left me crying once again!!!
Bt mst admit it was awesome!!!
The fact I like abt ur writings is that u maintain the essence of the story.. All stories are nt suppose to have a happy ending...

-Kads

im happy that you see that yaar...not all stories can have happy endings..a.nd since almost everyone else on IF is doing happy happy stories...i thought...why not give them the other side! 😛

JAZ

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Di mana hum realistic world me rehte hai par plz hamari stroies toh fantasy ho sakti hain na

Isme Geet ko maar diya usme Maan aur Geet ko alag kar diya😭

Aap hamesha mujhe rulate ho😭😭😭

aww...but...what is the tragedy is my fantasy!! 😛

JAZ