OS: Remembrance Part 2 pg48 Aug16 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
R u sure we should be happy that u r back???? 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
U made me cry all over again and I hate u for this as always...
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Y do u always do this Jaz... I cant live without reading ur stories and end up crying after reading it... U just pour down the emotions so clearly and the way that I can just feel that everything is happening arnd me... I just wish I could do something which could take away Maan's pain here... Deaths and separation are the things which I can never ever bear in life... I am a strong girl to the world but these two things even though being facts of life make me shiver... I cant even think of these two things... Ur writings make me feel as if I m facing it somewhere close to me... 💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔

Great writing as always... Please make me feel good and lively writing a happy update like Best Friends... 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
Love u as always
and eagerly waiting for nice happy updates frm u...
Sakshi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
Awnsomely written. I am at my daughter's school to pick her up, cannot even shed tears.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73


I hate you too aww 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
mindblowing update
no words
👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
LO ji mera no bhi kat gaya..REYA this is so not fair...me and guli are gonna go into depression after this..😭 he he...dont go into depression yaar...hug...i still loves you!!! 😳
Double timing..hawww..ek decide kar...😡
Jaz hello wht was there to laugh in the other comment..i was serious..i just have 4 tragedies on hand nd people call me vampire..woha i wonder wht they call u..😆 lmfao...i too wonder what they'd call me!? do i even want to think of the possibilities!? 😲..poochoon...apni wall pe post karti hoon poll..ya nhi IF pe..phir mazaa ayega..hehe😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
Ok the first thing that actually passed through my head when I read the title is who died? If anyone. Oh Jaz...you better not have killed my Geet. You can kill Maan as many times as you like and even get him married off...but don't you dare kill my Geet. That was a bit mean wasnt it? Now I cant even apologize...
- Nobody died!!!! HURAAY! This OS is a win! LOL. Great...now I just feel like something's wrong if all the characters are alive.
- You know what...it must be hard for Maan. To have all these feelings for a girl that he doesnt understand and for a girl he thinks he doesnt know.
- Sigh...he should just ask for her surname...but then things would just get more complicated.
- When you wrote that paragraph about Maan remembering her tears...i actually remembered something. When my Massi started watching Geet for the first time, she HATED Maan. Actually, I think she still does (she loves Geet though). She could never get away from the fact that he was such an arrogant jerk that made Geet cry all the time. But at that time I told her that he's the one who wipes away her tears too. At the time, we were watching that scene where she comes running out of the party after Kurbaan Hua where her sari rips and when he actually does wipe her tears afterwards. I miss that Maaneet.
- Great, you're in the midst of killing my Geet. All that ranting at the beginning for nothing :P
- ...baas issi tarha aakhri saans tak main aapni Maan ki saath rahoon...jaan nikle toh baas...inki bahoon mein...
*cries*
- You actually DID kill my Geet! *smacks her forehead* What am I going to do with you? But I know better than to be angry...like the good child I am, I'm going to finish with my un-biased commenting :P
- ...Geet ki zindagi ka faisla toh ussi din hogaya tah...jis din woh Maan ki dulhan baani thi...ussi din saab kuch tai hogaya tha...Geet suhagan baanke iss ghaar mein aayi hai...aur suhagan baankar hi jayegi...
OMG! I remember her saying that to Dadi! I was so touched during that episode where Dadi says she'll understand if she leaves and Geet refuses. That was one of my top Geet (as in the character) moments ever!
- I don't really know what else I can say...so I'm off...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: ajenn

Jaz... This OS reminds me of ur arrival!!!!
The Dramatic Destruction Queen's arrival!!!!
It looks like u r competing with Reya to win the title. 😆
ha ha...what title...you act like its a competition...its not..its just us being us...and making you cry!! 🤣

I truly loved this OS.
Thou it was so sad sad cry cry part.
The best part was, the way u recall back his moments with his Misti.
It was really the best scene...
im glad you liked it...there are so many Maneet scenes to add i was hoping i picked all the right ones...didnt know what to use and what to leave out...😳

Thx for this such a painful yet wonderful OS
sorry and thanks! 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Lily201

I've loved a lot of your FFs and OSs even as a silent reader- your writing flair is truly fab!!😃 This one is really well articulated and when Maan finally reminsces his past with Geet -it touches one's heart

But Geet's dying and that too in such a state - especially the funeral part made me pained

thank you for breaking your silence!! he he...😆...im glad you liked that part...i wasnt too sure about it myself...😳..the funeral part was hard to write...i got chocked up myself...😭

JAZ

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Posted: 14 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

ya...sad stories...u remember them for a long time to come because they is something to take away from the story...

okay sweets...my lips are sealed 😉 guli won't find out😆
and OMG...u wouldn't believe it...i am a huge nicholas spark too...his way with words is just ⭐️⭐️
i have a collection of most of his books...but the Notebook and A Walk to Remember are my absolute favs...

oddly...i havent read those two..i've only watched the movies...but they are on my reading list...my favs are The Choice and his Message in a Bottle...i read something recently...which for some reason just didnt really click with me until the end...the end was shocking and shattering...but the entire book i was a little annoyed with the characters...have you read "At First Sight"...the last quarter or so of the book had me hooked but the other 3/4 just didnt do it for me...oh and Dear John seriously peeved me...cuz he separated the two of them..and i know...im such a hypocrite!! 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: bansipatel

OMG Jaz...
u made me cry...god n this tears don't seem to stop...😭...
sorry! 😳
beautifully written jaz...!!!
thank you! 😳
m left speechless...dnt know what to say...👏
just loved the way u recalled all those maaneet moments wen maan's memory was on its way...!! he recalled everything
i wasnt too sure about that part...i didnt know if it turned our right because there are so many important maneet scenes...but im glad that it fit... 😃...geet smiled wen she heard him say he remembered everything n how he forgot his mishti..😳...n that is wen she closed her eyes...forever...never to open them again...😭... yes...at least she died knowing that her maan remembered her and her love for him...thats all she wanted...was for maan singh khurana to be her maan again...😭
it lurched my heart...to see geet die...
awesome just awesome...!!
tho it was a sad one...but it was outstanding...

it was beautiful...
i choked up wen i read the part where geet is dying...n that's wen the tears din seem to stop...😭..
sorry!! he he...but the funeral part got to me as well...writing about how important Geet was to the Khurana's was hard...God forbid if the CV's ever do something like this...im think im going to die crying because add the sensitive matter to the superb acting skills of GC and DD! oh we'd all just die!! 🥺
but it was a wonderful OS...can't resist ur sad stories cz even if i want to avoid the sad ones...i still end up reading them...
it was simply beautiful n marvelous...😳
thank you once again!! 🤗

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