OS: Remembrance Part 2 pg48 Aug16 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Boogleton.Schiz

Do you get some sort of wicked pleasure killing your protagonists? Or separating Maaneet? You sadist! This OS had me completely chocked up and tears are threatening to flow. *Runs behind Jaz with a giant lazer* You shall die, for making me, a poor innocent girl cry! 😡 However I loved your description of Maan and Geet's feelings at the beginning. *kaan pakering*...i sort of gave a disclaimer...i said "jaz is back 😉"...he he...sorry for making you cry...but ive had this idea forever! and i finally got to use it...on the bright side...its out of my system!! 😆

Ugghhh! Why do yo have to right so well? I try to avoid any of your sad pieces (which is most of them) but your impeccable writing compels me to read them, they're addictive! aww...you're too kind!! love you!!!

Originally posted by: sindu555

aahhh .. my tragedy queen is back ... "sigh" kya keron mein tumhara Jaz ... the very title suggested that its a tragedy and when u mentioned about those particular lines in the start .. I knew wat I was getting into ... yes yes yes! im back!!! ...i gave a half warning...but what better way to come back!!! 😛

my mind said " beta Sana mat perh ... tujhay pata hai naa kya honay wala hai aagay ... tu ronay wali hai Jaz ko bura bhala kehnay wali hai .. mat perh" ha ha...your mind is too cute!!! he he...very good reasoning i must say!!

but my heart interrupted "oye chup ker aaj tak madam ne teri baat suni hai jo ab sune gi ... perhay gi OS aur roye gi phir aur shor machaye gi" aww!! i love your dil!! i live for the shor that you make!! thats why i do what i do!! 😛

btw madam jee (thats wat am gonna call you from now on 😊) ... happy wala OS kab aaraha hai humaray liye ? btw u know wat .. u shud write alternate endings for all ur saddy saddy OS / SS ... that tu bhi khush aur hum bhi khush ... acha idea hai naa ... 😃 happy wala...im working on something...its about half done...i might wrap it up this weekend...we will see how it goes 😃

why the hell do u write so welll ... hmmphh .. not fair i try...i simply try!! thanks!! 😳

love

Sana

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi Jaz...welcome back! Was just thinking abt u n u updated lol. Thanks 4 da pm n beautiful emotional OS. Well written...Love the way u potrayed Maan's turmoil n feelings! U made all all cry!!! Maan n Dadi were so devastated. Geet died savin ger husband. She died as a suhaagan. It was sad n painful...u r an amzing writer. Now u owe us a happy OS k...😉

ha ha...what is this..if i do a sad one i must supply with a happy one as well...tauba...yeh toh sara sar naa insafi hai!! 😲 but ill see what i can do

JAZ

Originally posted by: khushi_4ever

😭I feel as if my heart is leaden...well u got the desired effect, ur writting was so ggod that it moved me to tears...God why did she had to die???? U write very well. This is the first time iam reading something of urs.

aww...dont cry luv!! your ID is kushi...toh kush raho 😳...you're a first time reader...wow...welcome to my sadistic world...though on the rare occasion i do happy things as well...hope to see you around more

JAZ

Originally posted by: mchopra

I am gonna kill u over that Jaz..wjt the hell first reya kills me with her saddists and now u..i am gng on a exile this way..

*jaz makes innocent muh*...i gave warning!! i totally did!! meri ghalti nahi hai if you couldnt decipher it!!! 😆...

JAZ

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

you come back only to make us cry...i so hate you...

that was such a beautiful part...

vidushi.

thats why its the best jaz come back!! the tears!! he he😈

JAZ

Originally posted by: anupm04

Welcome back dear
this was awasome
u made me cry yar amazing but sad one

last line was superb

ever since that scene after maneet's wedding ive wanted to do a story like this...and it finally happened...im happy with that..hope you enjoyed it

JAZ

Originally posted by: darkice7_12

That was just evil. Here I am, innocently reading this story, agreeing how Maan could never soften toward her if he thinks that she is married, and you go and kill poor Geet. You made me all teary-eyed! he he...sorry...but it had to be done...the lines i used are meaningless otherwise... 😳

Well, glad to see you back and hope to see some happy Maneet stories from you whenever you get the inspiration. have tons of inspiration...just lack of time to pen it all down...but hopefully they will keep coming 😃