OS: Remembrance Part 2 pg48 Aug16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Awesome OS but a sad one

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Sneha Bhattacharya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

😭I feel as if my heart is leaden...well u got the desired effect, ur writting was so ggod that it moved me to tears...God why did she had to die???? U write very well. This is the first time iam reading something of urs.

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

I am gonna kill u over that Jaz..wjt the hell first reya kills me with her saddists and now u..i am gng on a exile this way..

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lallulal2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

you come back only to make us cry...i so hate you...

that was such a beautiful part...

vidushi.

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Anupama

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Welcome back dear
this was awasome
u made me cry yar amazing but sad one
last line was superb

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sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: mchopra
I am gonna kill u over that Jaz..wjt the hell first reya kills me with her saddists and now u..i am gng on a exile this way..

wah wah kya baat hai ... aik tragedy queen dosri tragedy queens ko tragic endings per dhamki de rahee hai 🤣 🤣 🤣 ...

sudhar jao tum teenon ... Shreya, Jaz and Reya ...

waisay meray idea per ghaur kero ... write sad stuff but give alternate happy end too ... so we all are khush 😃

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Sana

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darkice7_12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

That was just evil. Here I am, innocently reading this story, agreeing how Maan could never soften toward her if he thinks that she is married, and you go and kill poor Geet. You made me all teary-eyed!

Well, glad to see you back and hope to see some happy Maneet stories from you whenever you get the inspiration.

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Tanya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Gosh!! the official tragedy queen of IF is back with a bang !! Jaz darling,I thought after enjoying your vacation,you'd be in high spirits and will give us one happy OS after the other..but here you are..making us lesser mortals cry buckets!!