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ammu5

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Posted: 14 years ago

#631

good geet accepted that she is in luv with maan

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393794

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Posted: 14 years ago

#632

@ ALL

hey guys thanks for ur lovely comemntsand for liking this parthmm it was bit short😳😳 but for the bigger surprise u have to wait na😉i am planning for maneet reunion want it to be diff😆 otherwise me gonna get murdered by u peopleand also i am so much afraid of@ reni tomotoes ...😕😲everyone so admant that this is dev...hmmm.. so just wait n watch😳take careluv ya all

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393794

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Posted: 14 years ago

#633

Originally posted by: Dansindiadans
YOU DON'T WANT ME TO SLEEP NA? How can you do this, yeh damki samj lena.
Ok of you don't update tomrrow then i will not pm my ff.

Amina

Ps just kidding, and pl update fast. Thankd also for like my ff

hey i will kill u if u dont sent ur link😆

or i will spamm ur thread😆

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393794

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Posted: 14 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: jasraj123
update update update
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update update update
update update update
update update update
update update update
update update update

yeh hamara haq hai. hamari maang poori karo😆

Luv you buddy

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vivacious_gurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#635

Aniie am loving this FF... am sorry coz i hvnt been commenting... but i just wanna tell ya that am loving this FF

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#636

Hi thanks 4 da pm n intense, emotioanl n painful update. Geet is in love wid Maan...she cannot find him, She told him to leave n he did. feeling for Geet...hope she finds Maan soon. Who is after Meera?? update soon

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375400

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Posted: 14 years ago

#637

awesome upd dear
fabulous
outstanding
thanx for d pm
do cont. soon

Love
Deepa

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#638

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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Downhill

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Posted: 14 years ago

#639

hiii annie..
sorry for late comment
but my net is hell bent on making my life hell
coming to the update
u have portrayed the anguish, pain,desperation, her realization that she loved maan...so well..kudos to u for doing a fab job sweetie...
loved it to the core...
this update reflected her turmoil and helplessness and the words wer well used and played with to make us realise the pain and sorrow faced by geet, having lost her lov...
i guess next update wud maan's POv...
i am excited to read it..
so geet has confessed everything to meera..and thankfully she is helping her to come out of her depressed state and they are going to meet MSK to search her irresistible kidnapper...😉

i am sure the encounter is going to b full of sparks and sizzling chemistry, and very intense...looking forward to it

now coming to devil update
it was also fabulous..
u maintained the flow of maan's character and it was very good...
the only issue i found is geet with her hilarious ranting...coz when u r in front of a ruthless man who will stoop to any level to get what he wants, the girl will lose her sense of logic, sense of humour and wit...only surrounded by paralysing fear...she has be dead scared of him and not take him lightly as some psycho or romeo...
she shud get paranoid with fear of not knowing when he will strike, what he will do next, and how he will strike...
so keep that in mind...and one more thing is we wud like to kno what maan actually does...like his backstory to make us actually believe that he is indeed a very dangerous man living on earth...
may be his work, family, his past, his dealings with ppl ...such kinda stuff will help in actually creating an impression about the characters...hope i am not being too critical...

but otherwise loved the update
keep writing
love u and ur ffs

i am sorry i am posting the comments of both the ffs in this post as i said, i am not sure how long my net will sustain and it is painfully slow

will be waiting for next part😉

reva

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393794

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Posted: 14 years ago

#640

@REVAhi buddyhere comes the most awaited comments😊hey yaar i am glad u liked the MIK updatenow everything gonna be very intresting in that...where as DIL is concerned.. actually geet's ranting was bcs till then she didnt realize how dangerous he is... n what she has gotton herself into.. she is taking him as mere romeo etc..all she know is that some idiot is crosing his limits.. she dont know he is actually a devil.. but in coming updates she gonna realize that he acutally is a devil n then reality would sink in her... terryfying her...then fear element would be therejust wait for 1 or 2 updates... i am gonna clear all this😳luv yatake careaniee

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