Thread 2: Surrogate Relations part 19 (17/8) - Page 60

Loved the update Bindu... Loved to see Maan getting sooo involved with the baby and its MOM...HEHEHEHEHh... continue soon :D

hahaha!!!
ye tumhare maan ka dil hi chuhe ki jaisa hai iss story mei... geet's one touch n the guy has his breath skyrocketed ... what happens when geet willingly hugs him or places a tippy-toe kissey on his cheek.. hope he doesnt get a cardiac arrest then!! ;-)
frankly the scan part was awesome... havent read such a different and eventful description of the scan ever... lovely lovely!!!
Maan already wants a daughter who borrows smile and expressions from her mother..awwwieee!!! you know what.. thats one of the most profound lines that you have written in this story... a to-be-father wanting a daughter who not just has the looks of the mother but the character,warmth,love and innocence of the mother.. one who is a complete child, just bodily grown beyond her age and cradling a baby!!...would love to see Geet ask Maan why he wants a daughter and he answers something profound than saying that he wants the daughter borrow her mother's beauty (but much later, when both are hitched n with no point of return.. will only strengthen their closeness) ...want Maan to ask God to give daughter so he can relive a mini-geet everyday of his life... in character,habits,innocence,stature and love!! so he can compensate on missing out on not having geet with him all this while in his life...
hmm so the golgappe is more lip-smacking than the earstwhile icecream and more to Mr.MSK's pallate...
but I am soo much missing DD-like MSK from your story... karo na kuch ki MSK DD-like bann jaaye... n geet ekdum irritate ho jaaye Maan se... fir Maan manayega usko MSK style... which is another endearing tale to read! :-)
Ab mujhe Sat. ka wait nahi ho raha... this geet misses on too many things... missed out on the fact that Maan already addresses her as Mishty in their close moments, kisses her cheeks suggestively, calls the baby "theirs" and calls the daughter as "mine" :D ... ok the last bit was his thoughts... but rest were out aloud words... tumhari geet ekdum tubelight hai?!?! abhi toh thodi der pehle she was having this mind-heart duel... how could she miss out on these BIG NOT_SO_SUBTLE hints!! I wish you write an afterthought for both Maan and Geet where they realize how the day went and ponder over where their heart is asking to tread and where the mind is taking them... will make them act on thier instincts... making Geet run away from Maan and making Maan pursue Geet more relentlessly than the way he has been doing more unconsciously!!
Eagerly awaiting your updates!! plzzz!!!

anu,
superb, simply suberb...
do go on...

awww tht was sooo cutteee... lovedd itt... plz continue asap... 😃

hahaha!!!
ye tumhare maan ka dil hi chuhe ki jaisa hai iss story mei... geet's one touch n the guy has his breath skyrocketed ... what happens when geet willingly hugs him or places a tippy-toe kissey on his cheek.. hope he doesnt get a cardiac arrest then!! ;-)
frankly the scan part was awesome... havent read such a different and eventful description of the scan ever... lovely lovely!!!
Maan already wants a daughter who borrows smile and expressions from her mother..awwwieee!!! you know what.. thats one of the most profound lines that you have written in this story... a to-be-father wanting a daughter who not just has the looks of the mother but the character,warmth,love and innocence of the mother.. one who is a complete child, just bodily grown beyond her age and cradling a baby!!...would love to see Geet ask Maan why he wants a daughter and he answers something profound than saying that he wants the daughter borrow her mother's beauty (but much later, when both are hitched n with no point of return.. will only strengthen their closeness) ...want Maan to ask God to give daughter so he can relive a mini-geet everyday of his life... in character,habits,innocence,stature and love!! so he can compensate on missing out on not having geet with him all this while in his life...
hmm so the golgappe is more lip-smacking than the earstwhile icecream and more to Mr.MSK's pallate...
but I am soo much missing DD-like MSK from your story... karo na kuch ki MSK DD-like bann jaaye... n geet ekdum irritate ho jaaye Maan se... fir Maan manayega usko MSK style... which is another endearing tale to read! :-)
Ab mujhe Sat. ka wait nahi ho raha... this geet misses on too many things... missed out on the fact that Maan already addresses her as Mishty in their close moments, kisses her cheeks suggestively, calls the baby "theirs" and calls the daughter as "mine" :D ... ok the last bit was his thoughts... but rest were out aloud words... tumhari geet ekdum tubelight hai?!?! abhi toh thodi der pehle she was having this mind-heart duel... how could she miss out on these BIG NOT_SO_SUBTLE hints!! I wish you write an afterthought for both Maan and Geet where they realize how the day went and ponder over where their heart is asking to tread and where the mind is taking them... will make them act on thier instincts... making Geet run away from Maan and making Maan pursue Geet more relentlessly than the way he has been doing more unconsciously!!
Eagerly awaiting your updates!! plzzz!!!



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i am so much into sweety maan , i wonder how to turn him DD😆...yeah there is the fact that Maan's heart goes bang bang with simple touches from Geet...but i think of it like ...he is so aware of her nd desires her so much that the impact of her touch is more ...may be influence of reading historical😆...isn't that what happens in the early stages of romance? there is this joke that i heard once...that if a couple placed a bead each time they made love into a bottle during their honeymoon, they won't he able to empty it even if they take out one one each time they made love after the honeymoon period😉😳...as for geet for now physical relation equates to brute force...so she may not understand the turmoil Maan is being put to...he has quite a tough task ahead of him, don't u think?

okay to clear why geet is not taking hints...she knows he cares abt her to an extent...but the care is because she is pregnant with KHurana heir, according to her...her self worth is in shambles...she accepts Maan's gestures but the moment she is alone, she turns ugly in her own eyes...something that can be used nd thrown away😭
i'm not sure abt saturday update...coz Aiden has to be picked frm School...nd there is going to be traffic regulations to the city due to President's visit...so will have to go early...preparing myself to spend and hour or more in traffic block!!
this is why i think , never plan in advance😉
whats more i'm desperate to make an OS on the present track of GHSP

thanx for this sweet update...loved it...maan eating gol gappas that too from geet's hand

very nice part di...👏👏👏👏👏



loved it...



thnx for the pm...:)