WATNA VEY MAANEET part 5-6/pg 15

She was just back from the ball'.emm I love India'.and Indian men'.she blushed'she had seen him the other day in the market'his bronze colored chest'..he was leading a procession' she smiled at his thought'.it was 1942 and the quit India movement was picking up momentum'..little did she know her life would change completely that year'.that very year Lucy had come to India'..with her brother who was a Captain with the East India Company'. '.she had sailed to other lands with her upright brother Edward but India left her breathless'.. She was 19 then'.her entire perception about life had changed that very year

He was born with a silver spoon'his father was a lawyer who went in to become Rai Bahadur under the company rule'.but the Jalianwala Bagh Massacre at the age of five changed this man'..Manavendra by name he was sent overseas by his father'..their family loved the shadow of British rule'.he hated the shadow of whites'.his father adored the queen of England he had a Bhagat Singh's photo at home'.he hated British '.his mother wanted to marry him off but he claimed that he had long wed freedom'..he was 28 his very perception about life had changed that very year

At a time when India was burning with Angrez Bharat Chhoro they met'.but would they stay together? Would love happen? When hatred and betrayal was ruling high how would these worlds meet'..

PART 1 PAGE 4 SURILI ANKIYON WALI

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PART 2 PAGE 9 SATI

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PART 3 PAGE 12 ANGREZ BHARAT CHHORO

PART 4 PAGE 12 Leave me ''we asked you to leave our country you never did

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Part 5 Nihatto pe waar karna humari fitrat nehi hai

Part 6 Desh mere desh mere meri shan hai tu

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I HAVE CHOSEN 1942 BUT ITS JUST A DATE...THIS WILL HAVE LOT OF OTHER INCIDENTS WHICH are relevant in the national movement...this is a period romance I am jittery about the response...not expecting much response as I know I am not an accepted writer but I will continue posting KARM KAR PHAL KI ASHA MAT KAR😆

I HAVEN'T MENTIONED ANY STATE OR REGION NEITHER DOES MY HERO MAAN HAVE A SURNAME TO AVOID REGIONAL FLAVOR...THIS IS THE STORY OF THE SUBCONTINENT AND ALSO OF THE CONTRIBUTION OF THE BRITISH RAJ

CRITICISMS OF ALL TYPES WELCOME😆

MAAN- SWADESHI

LUCY- GEET

THE GANG WHO LAY DOWN LIVES

me me me ...

i always love ur stories...plz continue

mein aa gayee ... 😃

Originally posted by: sindu555

mein aa gayee ... 😃

nice start ..

oye hoye Geet is a gori maim ...

cant wait to read more

continue super soon polo jii

love

Sana

we all wlecome u dearie...

welcome back i am very very exicited for this ff.😳

Paulami 🤗...u posted this already...woww...the intro u gave is so cool...but how come Lucy become Geet??Is there going to be a name change for her as the story progress..??Loved Maan's intro...his views n his dedication for his country's freedom...She has already seen him but when are they going to meet actually n how..???waiting to see that...so update soon...😛

Originally posted by: esha143

Paulami 🤗...u posted this already...woww...the intro u gave is so cool...but how come Lucy become Geet??Is there going to be a name change for her as the story progress..??Loved Maan's intro...his views n his dedication for his country's freedom...She has already seen him but when are they going to meet actually n how..???waiting to see that...so update soon...😛