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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 10 Arrest

He ensured she left safely with Savri'.Yes I lost my heart to her'.how earnestly she approached me'I wish I could hold her in my arms longer '.but'he heard sudden footsteps'

It is a group'hell police'.I am not even carrying my revolver'.koi naqab bhi nehi pehna'..he swiftly moved out of the place but realized he was gheraoed'.she betrayed me'.Geeet he hissed I will kill you'.Manavendra my my at last you are here '.get the nigger now'..so my dear you are here right on my feet I will give you an option just blurt out all the names and leave'ahh'Edward hit man across the face with his gun'.blood oozed out Vandee Maataaram'.Vande Mataram'..you guys say do or die right? Then I would say die'ahhh'.Edward hit him on the stomach'you want freedom right? I will give you freedom lick my boots'.Vande Mataram'ahhh'.keep hitting him until he forgets those words'.Vande Mataram

Savriii Savriii I am so happy I know he likes me he he kissed me here'.he said 'are memsab kya kaha bolie na?...he said if I ever settle down if ever there will be a woman in Maan's life it will be Geet ''.aree dikhaye dikhye apka chehra dikhyai'.Savri I I want to wear that read saree and get married to him just like you guys do 'emmm so memsahaib is already dreaming'he showed me dreams Savri when he said those words there was so much honesty Savri I want to be a perfect wife I want to learn everything I want to'.Savri pata hai kya hua'..Rukmini kya hua why do you look so scared ?... they caught him'him?...Maanavendra'..nooo'.memsahib'.memsahib..Rukmini please tell me he is fine'.I don't know memsahib'he was seen being dragged in to the van'his kurta was drenched in blood'thud'.mem'Rukmini ja pani la jaldi'.

Hang him with the hands and hit him'hit him till your hands don't pain but before that make sure he regains his senses'.he should feel the pain bloody Indian'ahhh'ahhh'.ahhh'..ab bhi time hai man ja'.

Sarfaroshi Ki Tamanna Ab Hamare Dil Mein Hai
Dehkna Hai Zor Kitna Baajuen Qaatil Mein Hai
Sarfaroshi Ki Tamanna Ab Hamare Dil Mein Hai
Dehkna Hai Zor Kitna Baajuen Qaatil Mein Hai
Waqt Aane Pe Bata Denge Tujhe Hai Aasmaan
Kya Baatein Hum Junoonein Shok Kis Manzil Mein Hai
Sarfaroshi Ki Tamanna Ab Hamare Dil Mein Hai
Sarfaroshi Ki Tamanna
They constantly beat him but Maan was undaunted'.hang him upside down'.said Edward with a devilish grin'he caught a fistful of Maan's hair so Manavendra the hero of the masses tell me where do you make your bombs'..ahhh''I tell you I will break all your bones now before I lose my calm tell me
Dooriyaan Umeed Ki Na Aaj Humse Choot Jaaye
Milke Dekha Hai Jine Woh Sapne Bhi Na Root Jaaye
Hausle Woh Hausle Kya Jo Sitam Se Toot Jaaye
Hausle Woh Hausle Kya Jo Sitam Se Toot Jaaye
Sarfaroshi Ki Tamanna Ab Hamare Dil Mein Hai
Dehkna Hai Zor Kitna Baajuen Qaatil Mein Hai


A blow from Edward full on the face and his face was bleeding'.the blood spread to his eyes as he was hanging upside down'.memsahib kya hua?...Savri I am feeling vomit'arrgh'my head is spinning'..will I call the doctor memsahib ?...no'.Savri you know the havildar in the jail please find out how he is'please'..memsahib I wonder if he is alive'no he has to live he has to live''memsahib'.Rukmini ye to fir se behosh ho gayi'..Savri lagta hai use phasi hogi'..memsahib ke samne mat bolna Rukmini


Tere Sone Roop Ko Hum Ek Nayi Bahar Denge
Apne Hi Lahoon Se Tera Rang Hum Nikhaar Denge
Desh Mere Desh Tujhpe Zindagi Bhi Waar Denge
Desh Mere Desh Tujhpe Zindagi Bhi Waar Denge
Sarfaroshi Ki Tamanna Ab Hamare Dil Mein Hai
Dehkna Hai Zor Kitna Baajuen Qaatil Mein Hai

Ye kis mitti ka bana hai? Hum itna torture kar rahe hai ise to jaise kuch hota hi nehi'the sentries looked at a now unconscious Maan lying on the almost melted ice slab'ye baraf gal gayo par ye nehi toota'..krantikari hai itne jaldi nehi tootega ye to azadi lekar hi chhorega'.ise dekhakar apne zinda hone par bhi ghin aati hai '..the sentry took off his red acp and hung his head in shame

Sarfaroshi Ki Tamanna Ab Hamare Dil Mein Hai
Dehkna Hai Zor Kitna Baajuen Qaatil Mein Hai
Waqt Aane Pe Bata Denge Tujhe Hai Aasmaan
Kya Baatein Hum Junoonein Shok Kis Manzil Mein Hai

Maan regained consciousness'he realized he was in his cell in his blurred vision he could see her..hear her saying you invade my thoughts you don't let me sleep'betrayer.. mujhe yaad rakhna chahie tha wo firingi hai Geet I will kill you'.

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... loved all d updates so far ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 5 & 6, Nice Updates

Seems u missed 7th part or there's some mistake on my part?

Edited by serenelove - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part amazing
well done xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg beautiful upd...
i lov ur writing yar...muah...
awesome upd
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey...
superb...
so lucy in indian dress jst 2 impress maan...😳😳
hope india gets freedom vry soon...{ in story😉}
n even our lucy ...means geet...
n hope dey meet soon...
waiting for more...
update soon...
tc

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Edited by DILKASHII - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome parts...

he thinks lucy betrayed him...n here she does not even know anything...

i guess it was edward only...who was following her...

continue soon...

thnx for PM..
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Posted: 14 years ago
loving all of ur updates...cont soon...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Paulo, I am surprised by the response u get, infact I am shocked!😲😲😲 This place doesn't deserve U, Paulo. It might even give u a wrong impression that u r not an accepted writer. Yes, u might not be an accepted writer here, to this grp...find a better place to showcase ur stories Paulo...I request u to not get discouraged. Surely there wud be forums and places with serious readers, readers who don't look only for puppy romance, readers who are sensible...or it is better not to post at all than get discouraged by the response...finish this and leave.

U have gr8 potential Paulo. Don't just find 'a place' to write, find THE PLACE...Wish u all the best!!!👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maaniac

Paulo, I am surprised by the response u get, infact I am shocked!😲😲😲 This place doesn't deserve U, Paulo. It might even give u a wrong impression that u r not an accepted writer. Yes, u might not be an accepted writer here, to this grp...find a better place to showcase ur stories Paulo...I request u to not get discouraged. Surely there wud be forums and places with serious readers, readers who don't look only for puppy romance, readers who are sensible...or it is better not to post at all than get discouraged by the response...finish this and leave.


U have gr8 potential Paulo. Don't just find 'a place' to write, find THE PLACE...Wish u all the best!!!👍🏼



Maani love ya...i know there is not a single love or lust making scene till now u know what i mean...no forced wedding no opulent BMW...lol but thik hai i got ur link on fb i know what to do ...my stories dont have mansions and chartered aircrafts they have squalor and truth...didnt know ppl are so scared to read reality maani

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