WATNA VEY MAANEET part 5-6/pg 15 - Page 10

Hey Poulami,

It's getting old but Sorry, I am late as usual.

I like the idea. U have selected a "good" topic right before independence time.

Countless gave their blood for this independence, hope this reminds all of us the distressing time, our forefathers had to go through & love our country.

Thnx 4 PM

Originally posted by: shelly_08

Hello paulami di...I'm sure u know me and have remembered me after all that transpired between us.

The point is,I'm not on this post for commenting on what good story you have written or how good a writer you are...you know urself more than I do...

I saw @srabon_dhara post ur ff's on nidha di's post and thought of reaching to you like this as I've been on ur block list if I'm not wrong.

The thing is that,I was really,really hurt when on a Sunday morning I opened this site and found my ff's being blocked for reasons I didn't knew.

Then I saw the PM's 4m Rabia di and trust me I was shocked beyond words and more than being angry,I was hurt.

More so because you didn't think of talking 2 me,PM me concerning the matter and straightaway complained Rabia di...it was really insulting for a writer when she's/he's not at fault...

I don't know what made you think my ff's resembled any of your ff's...if that was the case,then muskan di keyama and liz would have been the first to accuse me...and by the way if I get inspired from someone,I don't forget to credit her.

But may there was a silver lining to the fiasco...I got to know that there are still so many people who love me and thought I was not a copy cat...so in a way I should thank you coz there goes a famous saying ''a friend in need is a friend indeed.''

No hard feelings for you di...just thought of giving my POV.

With regards

Shreya

Originally posted by: DILIBADAAT

Its a Free country rather a democracy I cant stop anyone from giving their POV..even if it is metaphorical... anyways I am not here to prove anything I am here to post this story as a celebration of freedom...and if someone however great the person may be doesnt protest doesnt mean i will not...ant I guess this post after 4 months is a bit out of place...this could have been sent on that fateful sunday morning

Part 5 Nihatto pe waar karna humari fitrat nehi hai

Dev ye kya?...Subhankar kaha hai?...MaanBhaisaab Subhankar Bhaisaab ko goli lagi hai'.but we need to make the bombs now who will? We need it for the rally... Lalaji par bomb banana to hum mein se kisiko nehi aata'aata hai I will make it'but Maan how will you? Your hands are bandaged you are not being able to eat properly and if you give pressure your wounds will bleed'Bhabhi khoon hi to hai waise bhi raago mein daurte daurte thak gaya hoga aur phir Ma ki lie beta itna to kar ki sakta hai'..

Dev he dekho pehle ye mixture banate hai'aur ye dekho you need to put these nails within'..glass pieces bhi daal sakte ho'..Bhaisaab you are bleeding'wait once I teach you you can make it yourself'.ahh'.then you wrap it up in this cloth and Dev be careful you might hurt yourself in the process'.Maan yaha aao'.arre Lalaji mujhe to chot lagte hi rehti hai ap kitna marham lagaoge''kis mitti ke bane ho Maan'.Bharat ki he said smiling but the pain was evident on his face

Maan mein aur Ashalata posters taiyyar karte hai'..Bhabhi sab mein humari Ma ki tasvir honi chahie'.Hai Dev pata hai poster pehli baar nehi kar rahi hu non cooperartion movement ke time bhi kia tha '.par beti 'ji Lalji'hum poster chipkaenge kis tarah?...

Bhabhi Lalaji Maan bhai'.kya hai Asha?...hum agar aj raat roti na khaye to we can make glue out of that maida'wah Asha tu to taiyyar ho gayi'akhir behen kiski hu Maan Bhai'Asha was Maan's 16 year old sister who had left home for Kranti'.she was secretly in love with Dev but was also mortally scared of Dev'Dev's father was killed in the Jallianwala Bagh Massacre'he wass in his mother's womb'later his uncle was also killed during a train robbery 'Dev had only one mission throw the British out of the country'.He was keenly following Gandhiji but when he got some ideological issues rising he left and join this movement'.He was keenly learning to make bombs'ye do char unke gymkhana mein phek na chahie Maan Bhaisaab'nehi Dev Nihatto pe waar karna humari fitrat nehi hai'mere Bauji mere chacha ji bhi nihatte the'arre tum log larna bandh karo aj raat khana bhi nehi milega'.Bhabhi sabzi hai na'.nehi sirf kuch boiled vegetables hai actually all the money was with Subhankar

nahin rahnewaali ye mushkilen
ye hain agle mod pe manzilen
na udaas ho mere humsafar'hmm hmm hmm na udaas ho mere humsafar'.

Achha gymkhana mein jo salana jalsa hai waha mein jaa raha hu'..par ap karoge kya?...kuch nehi'.waha mere Rai Bahadur Pitaji ko invite kia gaya hai'.waha sab log honge'kuch fort William ke bhi'.par waha jaane ka fayda?...socho Anwar kaisa lage ga unhe when I will perform a Deshbhakti ka gana'..par apjaoge'wo is chehre ko pehchante hai Maan ko pehchante hai'par agar mein Bangali Babu ban ke gaan gau to''but will you leave'leave that on me'.I am going there with a purpose and remember this behro ko suna ne ke lie dhamake ki zaroorat hoti hai'.

Bhai ap ghar jaoge?...hmm Asha'par ap Pitaji ko rokenge kaise'un ke doodh mein afin milakar'.Maan'nehi Lalaji mere nazar mein Pitaji gaddar hai har wo shaks jo company ki madat karta hai gaddar hai'.

Precap: Its him

Part 6 Desh mere desh mere meri shan hai tu

It was the European Gymkhana'..the annual function was a big event here'.this was also a time when Indians would showcase their music and dance talents to impress the British'..Maan had again changed his attire'.he had his father's invite'anybody would think he was 50 year old pot bellied man with grey hair and spectacles'. He sneaked in and eventually to the stage'again in different attire'..Lucy was also there'.she looked elegant in her turquoise gown'she was distraught'it was two weeks since she had met him'her brother would say everyday that the Krantikaris were coming to their end'..she shuddered at the thought of losing her love'she also was unsure if he at all was even thinking about her'but her heart burned in his fire'..The fire she had felt in his touch''

Is he going to sing something to praise the queen?...no maybe he will show some fir stunts'.do these people only play with fire and snakes Mrs.Wilson?...No Mrs. Curzon if you know an Indian won the Nobel Prize in Literature not because he was a man who wrote on birch leaves but because of his profoundly sensitive, fresh and beautiful verse'he is so similar to our Mr. Shelley'..ah lady you seem to love India a lot'yes Mrs. Wilson and I think all of you should because India is at present our source of revenue'.ah Miss I need to have word with Edward'.Mrs'.Lucy's dialogue was broken when she heard a voice'..

Mitta Ne Se Nahin Mitte

Mitta Ne Se Nahin Mitte Darrane Se Nahin Darrte

Watan Ke Naam Pe

Watan Ke Naam Pe Hum Sar Katane Se Nahin Darrte

Desh Mere Desh Mere Meri Jaan Hai Tu

Desh Mere Desh Mere Meri Shaan Hai Tu

What the hell Edward? This was supposed to be a song in praise of the queen what is he singing?...who is he?...and how was he let in Ashley?...well Sir I mean'you will not get a chance to mean much once you get a summon grom Fort William''

Hazaron Khwaab Roshan Ke Sulagti Si Nigaahon Mein

Sulagti Si Nigaahon Mein

The man stood in the centre of the stage and sand,'he held his head high and was also carrying an Indian flag'his expressions were that of taunt'he was watching the helpless faces of the scores of British faces'..catch him send the sepoys'.he smiled and hurled a bomb right into the well'.just where the highest officials were sitting'.and with the last words

Kafan Hum Baandh Ke Nikle Hai Azadi Ki Rahon Mein

Nishaane Pe Jo Rehte Hai Nishaane Se Nahin Darrte

Desh Mere Desh Mere Meri Jaan Hai Tu

he vanished into the mist'no one was injured the bombs had created noise'.a krantikari had dared enter their annual event sing praises of India hurl bombs and vanished chanting Vande Mataram''none could recognize him'..he was like lighting which happened by the fraction of a second'.

Memsahib Sir is very cross'.now he will become stricter' hmm he will get demoted Savri'giggled Lucy'.you are impossible'.yes I am 'but I wonder memsahib who that man was'.Its Him'Him? Who Him'that man'.no it can't be him'.Savri you know his name you said my brother is his enemy who is he'.memsahib I can't'Savri see I swear on Jesus Christ I will not reveal anything to Edward''he is Manavendra'what?...okay he has a shorter name in the countryside he is called Maan'.Maan my Maan'memsahib forget him he is not yours neither can he ever be yours now go to sleep'.I can't sleep Savri he is making me crazy 'Savri sighed at the fate of this innocent girl