WATNA VEY MAANEET part 5-6/pg 15

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Esha

@esha143

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+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Haayeee...Maan came to her room wounded n then fainted there...kya nazara hai yaar😆...but seriously loved it...Geet attending to him with the help of her maid n then falling asleep looking at n dreaming about him😉...ek dam filmy-style...*whistles*😆[iss ka emo nahi hai IF pe...psst]...n later Maan woke up to see her beside him n promised himself that he'll repay her "Ehsaan"😆...[God I'm coming to hate this word in reality]...n giving her the name "Geet" ...there goes Lucy became Geet...😛😛...but I thought they'll have some sort of interaction when they meet first but here...she talked about him when he was asleep n he mused about her when she was dreaming...huh...dono ke dono aalsi lagte hai...but now I'll wait to see their second interaction...it better be something interesting now...n needless to say I'm loving the story...

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

congrats !!!!! 4 d new one ...

thnx 4 writing again ...

interesting ... loved it ...

add me to ur pm list ...

continue soon ...

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suba2011

@suba2011

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

i'm loving it...waiting for next update...waiting for maaneet moments...looking forward😊😊

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sree

@star_777

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Awesome part waiting for next update...

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JayaR

@JayaR

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Hi...Paula...

Sorry thoda late aayi hun but kya karun...I'm little busy with my bro leaving for US in 20 days... spending some quality time with him...

anyways enough of my bak bak...

waise I must say paula all your stories are so different and beautiful that I cant keep myself away from it... I may not find time to log on to IF or FB to drop my comments but I surely do read all your updates as soon as you post it...

and now for this concept... wonderful... never thought that Maaneet can be portrayed in such a way too... but the character really suits the story... and Freedom Fight Movies mujhe bahut achche lagte hai... I dont know maine kitne baar Border, Lagaan, Legend of Bhagat Singh, Gandhi, aise movies dekhen honge... jitni baar bhi dekhun ... aankhon mein aasun aa jaate hai...

chalo all the best ... and keep PMing me...

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maaniac

@maaniac

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Great start like always Paulo...Both admire each other already and don't think it wud be too long before they fall in love...but wud it be possible for both of them to be together given their situations...will she be able to fight against her bro and will he be able to keep the trust of his fellowmen as his father already loves the English rule and now if he loves an English girl (surely he will, akhir Maan hai and has named her Geet :D)...Love to read this story of complicated love and freedom struggle.

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novelete

@novelete

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

😳wow😊 this story is so different from all the other stories of yours , I m loving it😃 maan swadeshi and Geet angrez aye haye sun ne mai hi kitna romentic lag raha hai😳. But the fact which is making me more exited is the you will bring out so many inspirational issues by your story 👏and i m dying to read those updates. Sweety i did not get your Pm😭 plz next update ke liye Pm kar dena na 😊

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

interesting...
ur stories are always giving some message or views on many things...
cont to pm...
looking forward for this ff too...
thanks for the pm...