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Posted: 14 years ago
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CONGRATS on the new FF...

loving the story...especially the backdrop...

continue soon...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 3 Angrez Bharat Chhoro

Savri I am in love with that man'.that man is being hounded by your brother if he is found he will be killed or sent to Kalapani'.but Savri I can't forget him'I can't forget that piercing gaze I can't take him out of my mind'.Savri I am feeling so happy tonight he he actually spoke to me'hmm he considers you enemy'.but why Savri I am in love I feel like flying I feel like singing dancing'memsahib no Savri listen to what my heart is saying

My heart, it speaks a thousand words
I feel eternal bliss
The roses pout their scarlet mouths
Like offering a kiss
No drop of rain, no glowing flame
Has ever been so pure
If being in love can feel like this
Then I'm in love for sure

mujhe apke angrezi gaane samajh nehi aate'.chalie ap so jaie kal hume jaldi nikalna hai'.kyon?...bhool gayi ap kal wo kya Nelson bol kar koi aa raha hai apko phool dene jana hai'oh yes Edward told me '..itna dukhi mar hoiye Nelson ko rokne ke lie krantikari bhi jaenge kya pata apka wo bhi dikh jae'.Lucy bushed and slept dreaming about her love'

Krantikari den purani haveli

Shastri ji kal wo gora aa raha hai'is baar hum use yaha ghusne nehi denge Maan is baar koi galti nehi honi chahie'par waha masoom log bhi honge'isi lie to humara kaam aur bhi mushkil hoga Maan waha lathi charge bhi ho sakti hai Simon wala incident ka badla hum iss Nelson se lenge'make sure he doesnt get to enter the city the agitation should be so severe that he goes back in the next train'

Oh my lovely sister Lucy I want you to set a good impression on Nelson Bingley'.what?...yes I would love it if I can marry you off to Nelson Bingley they have such sprawling estates in Warwickshire you know he is almost a knight so remember this Lucy when you meet him today and give him the bouquet give him a nice smile and makes sure he asks for a dance in tonight's ball'.but'.no buts Lucy I am your guardian and I take the decisions'.now wear your hat and come down I am waiting in the carriage'

Angrez Bharat chhoro'..Angrez Bharat Chhoro'..Edward I think it's the Swadeshi's'Yes but what does it matter? We have the police ready for lathi Charge'.. But Edward how can'Lucy you keep your mouth shut you don't know a thing'..Angrez Bharat Chhoro'.Wilson just watch out I have a hunch that fellow will come'Manavendra?...yes this time I will have to arrest him and torture him till the time he doesn't forget his sole purpose of life'Edward I am scared'Lucy nothing will happen and Nelson is coming you can't keep sitting in the car'.

naare bazi jaari rakho and whatever happens we will not budge from here'.Inquilab zindabad'..Angrez Bharat chhoro'..there Edward and Wilson are here'.Bhabhi ask the ladies to form a human chain and Dev you all continue with the naare bazi'.Bhaisaab apko koi pehchane ga to nehi?...aj tak is behrupie ko koi pehchan paya hai Dev'..Bhabhi ap bhi na'.Maan vanished somewhere'.

Wilson issue lathi charge orders'.Edward was so busy in himself and lashing out at Indians he had forgotten all about Lucy 'she had never seen a lathi charge happen'.she could feel herself shaking in fear and hid behind a small hut'.

Bloody Indians'..Maan pulled Edwards stick and hit him on the head'you are on our land we are not in your land Angrez Bharat chhoro'..Lucy had moved further and further away from the station'Nelson couldn't dare get down from the train'there was lathi charge and stone pelting'..she didn't know where to go'she wished she had brought Savri along with her'.she had heard that the area around the station was unsafe.,..she had no idea'.she could still hear the sounds of howling and Angrez Bharat Chhoro'that reminded her how the locals would be hating her'.she had heard from Savri that many people hated whites'if they could they would spill white blood but what was her fault'.she had heard the blood chilling stories of what was done to Europeans at the time of Sepoy mutiny'.she looked around and decided she had to find her way '.she started walking towards the road'.

Precap: Ahhh



23rd July is the brith date of this great man who can forget his famous quote swaraj is my birthright, and I shall have it!" But sadly our country doesnt forget to clebreate a priyanka Chopra or a Katrina's birthday but forgets our real heroes...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Part 4 Leave me ''we asked you to leave our country you never did

She starting running towards the jungle'she had lost her way Savri had never brought her this side'.Maan was dressed as a sardar'no way under no circumstances could he be caught'one after the other his comrades were being caught'he had a bigger mission he had to meet Subhas Bose'Maan had left the Congress and wanted to extend support to Netaji'for this he had to smuggle himself out but not before he ousted Edward who according to him was Satan'.when the police began arresting people Maan's group scattered them across the town'he decided to leave to a neighboring village that very night but before this he had another task'.he had to gather the hand made bombs'..he was sneaking into the jungle when he heard footsteps''he at once had his dagger out'..he hid behind a banyan tree'.this jungle was notorious hence at this hour there could be only dacoits or British soldiers'.he couldn't see who it was he held the human and pinned to the tree trunk'.ahhh ''.Lucy let out a squeal'.he had held the dagger right at her throat'and in that moonlit night he saw those musical eyes'..he removed the dagger but still held on to her'she could get the feel of his musk'she could see the anger in his eyes'.she couldn't recognize him because of his attire''she was scared'..she could clearly see it before her eyes her life her honor were all at stake'..leave me'. we asked you to leave our country you never did so don't expect me to leave you now'.tears threatened to come out any moment'.he instantly let her go'.but before she tried to run he caught her hand do you have an idea in which jungle you are? And what are you doing here all alone where is the girl who was with you the other day?...do you know there are dacoits in this jungle who practice human sacrifice?...come'he grabbed her hand'where are you taking me let me go'.I cant leave you alone here I am indebted to you you saved my life'.you you are him?...him?...he saw the blush'he was amused a British blushing for a bloody Indian'..him?...he stressed'I mean you are that brave man'..he smiled does your brother know you are lost?...probably yes but he must be more busy because that stupid Neslon was sent back she giggled'.by the way you you speak English'.yes I was taught in London'.but I would like it if you talk to me in Hindi'.you have a musical voice he whispered'..why were you named Lucy?...my mother is related to William Wordsworth'.oh he is a great man'.yes but I like your Tagore too'you have read Tagore ?...yes I have and I love India too she said with a blush'..Geet he whispered'sorry?...if you were Indian your name could be Geet''I can still be Geet she said'.wait that's the cantonment'yes so?...you you cant go there'.why?...my brother will kill you'..you are a bit too worried about a nigger's life...you cant risk your life for me you have to answer your motherland I can go from here by myself'.Geeet'she turned'..British are hated across the country if you want to play then do it within the cantonment'.Vande Mataram'what?'why that is what you are supposed to say na ?...Maan smiled and vanished in the dark jungle'.

Precap: Lalaji par bomb banana to hum mein se kisiko nehi aata'




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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
awesome FF
welcome back to IF!
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

awesome FF

welcome back to IF!
cont soon



hey nice to see you after a long long time
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
superb part...the first chance for them both to interact properly n it was really good...they actually talked...n he also named her Geet...which she accepted😊...so now he's going to join Bose...that'll be so good...lets see what's more in store for him n for her...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
loved it ...

the scenes are very well written .. I cud imagine it happening ...

cant wait to read more

love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
Brilliant , awesome updates.
loved them
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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have read on FB earlier but was not able to comment

it is simply nice

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SOOO SWEET...U KNOW GEET...ND SHE RESPONDS TO IT...I JUST LOVED DAT SCENE...U KNOW U JUST REMIND ME LAAGAAN SITUATIONS...ITS AMAZING...LOVED DIS...SOOO AMAZING UPDATE ...LOVED IT...

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