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Posted: 13 years ago
great part. Looks like Ryan will help out the family.
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Nice update! I hope Ryan will help them succeed in their mission! Eagerly looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Ch25

In Surmaans room

Maan if we want Nidha to forgive Jeh and give him a chance, we have to first get to know what is going on in Nidha's head says sur

Meaning what sur she is upset and has every right to be after all Sid crossed the line n fiza is her di says maan

I know maan that's what im saying in order to geth them cclose I have a plan ' nidha loves her di and her bahabis a lot .. Ramona and I are like her sisters than bhabis ' if she couldn't see fiza hurt , she wont be able to see us hurt either'. Says sur

So what are you trying to say sur bolo na saaf saaf kyun muhje confuse kar rahi ho says Maan, scratching his head

Arey mein yeh bol re hooon ki Jeh ko ek aur chance de na hai Nidha ke samne acha bane ka says sur

Ah I got it I can see that look in your eyes sur u have a sneaky plan I know it ' I missed that look shaadi se phele you use to have that look and be so mischevious' sneakying out just to meet me remember all your plans kyunki you were afraid of your papa. says maan

Haan maan pyaar main you have to be like that na'. but ab tho (she looks away back toward him) everything has changed you've changed I've changed that spark and love is lost some where says sur

Sur I know but people change with time and we did to that's normal shaadi ki baad change hota hai' says maan

Haan maan your right but itna change nahin ki that your wife doesn't recognize her husband any more '. You are like a stranger maan your not the maan I married says sur

Sur y are you starting this again I don't want to fight

Exactly that's it fight we have to fight Maan says sur

What fight why do you want me to fight with you says maan

Yes' see like I said before me and Ramona are just like fiza to nidha'. If we fight infront of nidha and Jeh and if Jeh saves me from you nidha will see him changing says sur

Um pagal hogayi hai kya it wont work, trust me,(he paused) but we can try said maan

Ryan is helping na tho phir aur bhi asaan ho jayega but we have to tell them the plan to sur said, moving towards the door.

Ryan, Ramona, Krishna, and Jeh in RaKrish's room

Sur and Maan explain the plan to the others

Rocking idea and when ever nidha is upset fiza di is sure to get involed great says ryan

Yeah badi bhabi im sure this will help says Ramona

Par manno maami is here ?says jeh, looking doubtful

Don't worry bd ma n manno mami are going to go shopping its fine, it will be just us youngsters Sur assured

Next morning

At breakfast table nidha ,jay ,sid, fiza

Sur while giving gobi ki praratha to maan winks at him signalling for the drama to start. Maan grabs her hand

What hell is this gobi... gobi... i hate gobi... where is my aloo ki paratha huh says maan

aloo was over so I made gobi just today i'll tell ragu to get aloo and kal allo ki paratha ok says sur

he takes his plate and throws on the floor

what the hell , you can't make a simple aloo ke parathe slaps her

bhabhi says fiz and nidha and runs to her

maan bhai stop its just a paratha and for that you slapped bhabhi says fiza

he then pulls surs hair and says tell them to not interfere says maan

ouch maan you are hurting me let go sur cries out

jeh comes in between pushes maan away

stop it bhai bhabhi are you ok sit down says jeh, leading Sur to a chair.

nidha looks at him surprisingly

the mistake I did last time I cant do again please don't hurt bhabi says jeh

im sorry maan bhai but you should be ashamed of your self you are the oldest son and brother here and this is the example you are setting for them you are no less than my down market husband sid says fiza

sid walks up to fiza and starts slapping her shouting what the hell is this how dare you talk like that to bhai

he pushes fiza away she falls near Ayush's feet

how dare you sid khurana yes its true I don't want my sisters in my life or near my property

and yes its true abt the contract I did with you and jeh but that dosesnt mean you can physically keep harming them ' (pointing finger at sid)just remember if you do that again both of you I will the same fate awaits your sister shikha who is pregnant '.(goes to pick up fiza but ryan does that and gives her water ..sid seeing this is pissed)

why the change of heart ayush says fiza

I am not sorry for my deeds but I am not the kind to physically harm one weaker to me says ayush And the property is still bounds out of bounds for you.

You can never change says nidha looking disgusted

Bhaiyya says shikha

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Kaise ho I told ayush that ill meet him here there is a small reception party at our house tommrow night do come says shikha they leave

Nidha looks at jeh
Yeah sure you tried to stop maan bhai and look again your brother sid treated di like trash and you cant do anything can you? at least ayush bahi is better than you says nidha
Maan,sur, Ramona,ryan,Krishna, and jeh gathered in SurMaan's room
What was that? things got worse she is more upset says jeh
I know don't worry T says ryan

What T says Ramona

Tanushree aka T my Gf Ryan says, with a dimpled

Just wait for the party here is a picture of her Says Ryan

That is fine says sur

Boys look at her pic

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Wow lucky boy she is very pretty says Krishna

Girls are getting irrated, maan see sur upset

Yeah she Is ryan was her dad in the air force because she is a bomb smiles maan

mr. maan khurana don't you dare look at her like that ufff all men are alike dogs says sur

She and Ramona are walking out when boys say aooowah(like a dog)

girls look at them and leaves

maan stops her says but sur Did your dad write a dictionary because you put meaning in my life kiss her on cheek

Ryan coughs um sorry kabab mai handsome hai we will leave says ryan the others leave)

Sur smiles and kisses maan back

Edited by RDKFF - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
her girls idk who updard ch24 nidha or sur but who ever did i loved it rocking loved ryan ooo he isa charmer ramonasweets loved the new plan my hubby was j love it when he is lol...mano mama loved her hello hi bye bye and love muttion lol sry laxmi lol rocking loved it muah
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Originally posted by: lalmirch28

her girls idk who updard ch24 nidha or sur but who ever did i loved it rocking loved ryan ooo he isa charmer ramonasweets loved the new plan my hubby was j love it when he is lol...mano mama loved her hello hi bye bye and love muttion lol sry laxmi lol rocking loved it muah

Thank you Jaan glad that you liked the chapter...
Ryan is a total fun loving, cool, kick-ass brother...
Whoa! This is our bhai Ayush, hard to imagine him as a bad-ass😆...
Shikha is hawt...
But hotter than her is T off course...
Ryan is one lucky chap...
As for Manno maami she was bought in for helping with the plans as well...
We can also use the elders to patch up everything...
Boys are definitely not like dogs, dogs tho wafadhaar hothe hain na😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter-24 Nidh my shona devrani ji...loved the update...great work👏👏👏 ⭐️⭐️⭐️and the friendly relation that is blossoming between Ramona and Krishna...Ryan is a sweetheart and ofcourse again making Khurana's jealous...Ab hum ka kahe...Hello Hi Bye Bye ye sidwa ka toh dimagwa ghuma hua hai ...Humka bhi maaf karna late comment ke waste tabiyat kharab thi...Aur Maan babu phir jealous ho gaye...Sid babu bach ke rahiyo iss baar tumra kuch nahi ho sakta...aur Lakshmi aur tumri chemistry dekh ke toh Jeh kya humra bhi eyes wide open tha par kaise Lakshmi ko Jeh ne mutton keh diya saza milegi😆...love ya Angel🤗 🤗🤗
Edited by sur001 - 13 years ago
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Chapter-25 Hey Fiza great one yaar ...loved it...Oh ab Ayush ko evil imagine karna mushkil ho gaya hai...How can I do that.,,,and as Nidh said sikha is hot but not more that T ...Lucky Ryan...but ayush has some soft corner for his sisters its just money has made him blind I felt...And these men are dogs really again will burrow Nidhs words Dogs are loyal😆...Loved the episode...Aur I had to fight with my Maan babu......but its like bhala karne gaye they aur bura ho gaya ...Poor Jeh but hope so this party will do some magic...loved it👏👏⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update! Good to know Ayush still has a bit of humanity in him for not tolerating physical violence on his sisters, though he still is a jerk! And looking forward to the party, hopefully the plan won't backfire! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 26

Fiza (angrily rambling)- "Inn mardhon ko sudharne ke baare mein sochna hi bekhaar hain (throws a saree on the bed)'.It's a waste of time, energy and peace of mind'mere zindagi mein tho saare ke saare mardh bekaar hain, mere bhai, mera pathi,"

"Tho ghar chodkar chali kyun nahin jaathi" her husbands angry voice came from the doorway.

Fiza shuts her eyes to control her rising anger.
Fiza- "Who option tho tumhaari pyaari behen ne bigaad diyan na"

Sid (angrily) - "Don't you dare speak against my sister, your disgusting brother is the reason behind all this"

Fiza (smirking)- "My brother is sure disgusting'.but what about the character of your sister'.but then again the blame falls on you Khuranna men'.your baby sister happens to be of the age of my sister'..if Nidha can have enough maturity and respect for her family'then so can your sister'.but unfortunately no one taught her that'.when her mother or Badi Daadi tries to knock some much needed sense into her she mocks them and walks away'..she has no respect for her sister-in-laws be it me aur Sur bhabhi'.and right now her actions clearly showed how much of a respect and love she has for her beloved brothers'.happy explaining this situation to Papaji when he returns"
She glares at him one last time before walking out of the room. For her right now, even breathing the same air her husband breathed in was difficult. It was even more difficult knowing the fact that she loved him. Fiza Singhania, the bold and beautiful as her friends called her, had fallen for Sid the moment she saw him. They say woman always fall for the bad guy and she had fallen for the worst. She had known since long that her marriage was a contract but she had hopes of making that work. Sid was a very famous Casanova, but she had hoped that he would have another side a side were he respected women. But he was hell bent on following his fathers foot steps with least respect for women.
But even his father had respect for a woman, Bua Daadi. But Sid seemed to lack respect for one and all of women kind.
Even with his sister he seemed to like her the least.
Fiza (in a resentful sigh) - " Just my luck"

Inside the room'.
Sid - "Some one has rightly said, women can easily ruin things'..but if Fiza thinks that I will become her chamcha like Papa is of Bua Daadi and my brothers of their wives'.she is direly mistaken'.Siddarth Khuranna do not need a woman to survive"
He had grown up seeing his Dad never giving an ounce of respect for his mother or Badi Daadi. When he was ten Bua Daadi had come to live with them. From then his father had followed her about. Sid had never much liked Bua Daadi and hence had disliked her over riding power.
He did love his mom and Badi Daadi. He did love his sister, but as far as their having any say in the family was concerned he was against it. He didn't like the way his brothers spoiled his sister, especially Maan bhai, but he could never over ride his Maan bhai. He loved his all brothers very much.
When it came to his wife his feelings, his reactions, his emotions everything was a muddle. He had seen many gorgeous girls in his life. Fiza was hands down beautiful but what did she have that those girls didn't? What made him so extra possessive about her? His marriage was just a contract, a deal? Then why the heck does it bother him if she is with another guy? Was it just the concern for family name? Or was it entirely something else?
He pulled off his clothes and got into a drawstring pants. He opened the door to his exercise room and started kick boxing.
He stopped when every muscle in his body was screaming exhaustion.
He didn't want to deal with these things. These petty emotions. Why couldn't a human live carefree? Why does all these things have to matter?
He poured himself a glass of water and threw the glass down to lent out his frustration injuring himself in the process.
Fiza who was in their room. She looked at the shattered glass and then at Sid's bleeding hands.
She went out and came in after a few seconds with the first aid box.
Without any words she proceeded towards her husband and started cleaning his wound. She slowly picked out the glass shards and cleaned them. Sid gazed at her amazed. Just a few hours back he had pushed her and shouted at her. But here she was tending to him. She shouldn't even be looking at him.
Fiza finished bandaging the cut and proceeded to collect the larger pieces of glass from the ground.
Sid (muttering) - "Thanks"
Fiza barely glanced at him.
Later'
Fiza brushed down her hair and picked up her purse.
Sid - "Where are you going?"
Fiza (sullenly)- "Shopping with Sur bhabhi'.she wants us to get an outfit for your sisters upcoming reception party'.tradition it seems'.not that I care"
She walked out without looking at him.
In the car'.
Fiza - "Bhabhi humaare paas already ithne saadiyan vagera hain'tho phir kyun yeh shopping"
Sur had been looking pleased as a punch about something for a while now.
Sur - "Looks like our husbands didn't like the trial version of how- hot- we- girls- can-look we gave them in Mauritius'..openly humaare saamne uss ladki ko'.what was her name Ramona"
Ramona (slightly annoyed)- "T"
Sur - "Haan T ko praise kar rahein the na'.aaj un logon current na lagaya tho merea naam Sur Khuranna nahin"
Nidha - "T? Yeh kaisa naam hain"
Ramona - "Mere bhai ki GF hain'poora naam Tanushree Ambolkar'..par baath tho manni padegi'.T is a bomb"
Fiza (proudly) - "Tho hum kaha kum hain bhai'.hum bhi aaj sirens banenge"
The four girls laugh out.

In the evening'.
Le Grande Hotel'.
Krishna - "Where are our respective wives bhai?"
Maan - "Not the faintest of trace'.Sur told me she will reach here with the others'..looks like they are dressing up for their own wedding"
Sid (scoffing) - "Women they always know how to waste time?"
Maan (angrily) - "And you always know how to degrade them'zip it up Sid or I might do something I regret"

Ryan enters with whole with a stunning looking Tanushree besides him.
Ryan - "Gentlemen please meet my lady love Tanushree aka T"



Maan took her hand and kissed it
Maan - "Pleased to meet a gorgeous lady like you"
T - "I hear that your wives are even more gorgeous than me'he always praises about his sister" gently nudges Ryan.
Ryan - "Why don't you look for yourself?"
Outside the hall
Fiza - "This is what I call sirens" looks around at the other three.

Fiza


Sur



Ramona



Nidha



Sur - "Lets kill it girls"
They move in.

Inside the hall'.
They all turned to face the door, along with half the hall.
Because right then four graceful, beautiful women walked in

Sid could only stare at his wife's killer avataar. That too in his favourite colours of white and black. She looked out of the world.

Sur moves with a sly smile towards Maan and whispers into his ear.
Sur - "Who is better me or T"
Maan (seductively) - "You will definitely kill me'should I book a room'.how about a honeymoon suite"
Sur blushed scarlet red.
Krishna was gazing at his wife start struck by her sexy number
Jeh was feeling like sweeping his wife into his arms.
Ryan - "T this is my sister and the three gorgeous Khuranna ladies."

"Wow! Didn't know that your sister's had fashions sense Ayush" a mocking voice came from their left.

All of them turned to look at Ayush walking towards them with a graceful lady.
Ayush - "Meet my mom"
Fiza - "Mom?"
Ayush - "My mom behena'.off course my little sisters doesn't know that our mothers are different"
Nidha and Fiza shared a look surprise and disbelief.
Nidha - "But bhai"
Ayush - "Oh so you are back to calling me that huh'.yep my mom and your mother is different'.and believe me I am glad'.I couldn't digest that old lady I was forced to call Mom"
Ayush mother gave him a sly smile.
Fiza moved forward with clenched fists.
"How dare you insult my mother" she said through gritted teeth.
Ayush (smirking) - "Simmer down'you don't want to spoil your sister- in-laws party do you?"

Nidha (pulling back Fiza)- "Sorry for the inconvenience Mr. Singhania"

Sur forced Fiza into a chair and gave her a glass of water.
Sur - "Calm down Fiza'.we can't afford to upset Shikha"
Fiza - "Sorry bhabhi, but it is hard not to loose my cool with that jerk'especially when he piles insult on my mom"
Ramona - "Just chill baby'.enjoy the attention Sid bhai is showering you with"
Fiza (rolling eyes) - "As if I care'.by the way Sur bhabhi's jealousy I can understand but you?" (eyes her with a sly smile) Baba has his eyes glued to you"
Nidha and Sur laugh.
Ramona (to Nidha)- "Zyadha math hasso'.Jeh looks like he is ready to take you to the nearest room"
Nidha (blushing pink)- "Bhabhi"

"Excuse me ladies and gentlemen" Ayush's voice rang out.
"Thank you all for attending my party'.my wife joins me in thanking you'please take the arms of your respective lady loves and join us in this dance"
Maan extends his hand with a small bow and Sur accepts with a smile.
Krishna nervously smiles at Ramona who smiles back reassuringly and they move to the dance floor.
Sid takes Fiza into his rams without warning. This is what he wanted to do from the moment he saw her this evening.
She looked so enticing that any man would want her. He was secretly proud that she was his wife .
He looked into her eyes which were very expressive always but now they held no emotions he could discern. It was as if a curtain had fallen over them.
It was taking all Fiza's power to suppress the rising passion in her. Sid had always succeeded in turning her on and she hated herself for that.
He gently moved back her tresses which were disturbing by falling into her eyes. His fingers moved down to her luscious lips tracing their outline.
Try as he may Fiza didn't respond.She just smirked back giving him a you- won't- win-look
By the end of the song she moved out of his arms.
Fiza almost ran out of the hall.
Her overwhelming emotions were spilling out as tears.


SidZa part written by Nidha on behalf of Ramona
Edited by RDKFF - 13 years ago
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Nidh...yaar kamal kari ho tumbh Shona...maarne ka pura intezaam karke rakha hai Khurana boys ko...Loved Sidza part...my sweetie devraani Fiza has really became a mess because of Sid...Kitna pyaar karti hai uss duffer ko but he is such an egoistic man but glad ussey bhi BD pasand nahi hain...Awesome update👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️ and nice dress selection...Fiza ne toh bomb diffuse kar diya...so you blushed on Ramona's comment i guess lover boy ka kaam asan kar diya tumne...great one angel🤗🤗

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