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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow yaar dis is gr8.. carry on.. do pm me when u update..lol.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Guys I have made some addition to the intro pics and cs section...
The next person who writes the CS please write it between the dividers...
Hope you guys won't mind😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome character sketch! Can't wait to start reading the first update! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gals_11

wow yaar dis is gr8.. carry on.. do pm me when u update..lol.

Thank you dear for encouraging...
We hope to keep you entertained😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sejal719

hey guys this is an awesome idea and im really interested in reading this.. plz do write soon and dont forget to pm me :)😊. awesome idea im already waiting for the 1st part :)

Thank you Sejal for the encouragement
We hope to keep you entertained😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Deepi20

Awesome character sketch! Can't wait to start reading the first update! Continue soon 😊

Thank you dear
Stay tuned😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept and character sketch!!!
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ch 1

Early Morning 7 a.m at the Khurana 's on the Terrace

A beautiful voice singing

Oh ho, oh ho ho

O laal meri pat rakhio bala jhoole laalan - 2

Sindri da sehvan da sakhi shabaaz kalandar

Dama dam mast kalandar, ali dam dam de andar

Dama dam mast kalandar, ali da pehla number

O laal meri, o laal meri

Chaar charaag tere baran hamesha - 3

Panjwa mein baaran aayi bala jhoole laalan

O panjwa mein baaran

O panjwa mein baaran aayi bala jhoole laalan

Sindri da sehvan da sakhi shabaaz kalandar

Dama dam mast kalandar, ali dam dam de andar

Dama dam mast kalandar, ali da pehla number

O laal meri, o laal meri

Hind sind peera teri naubat vaaje - 3

Naal vaje ghadiyaal bala jhoole laalan

O naal vaje

O naal vaje ghadiyaal bala jhoole laalan

Sindri da sehvan da shaki shabaaz kalandar

Dama dam mast kalandar, ali dam dam de andar

Dama dam mast kalandar, ali da pehla number

O laal meri, o laal meri

O ho, o ho ho, oh oh oh oh, oh oh oh oh

Ho oh oh, oh ho oh oh oh

Har dam peera teri khair hove - 3

Naam-e-ali beda paar laga jhoole laalan

O naam-e-ali

O naam-e-ali beda paar laga jhoole laalan

Sindri da sehvan da shaki shabaaz kalandar

Dama dam mast kalandar, ali dam dam de andar

Dama dam mast kalandar, ali da pehla number

O laal meri pat rakhio bala jhoole laalan

Sindri da sehvan da sakhi shabaaz kalandar

(Dama dam mast kalandar, ali dam dam de andar

Dama dam mast kalandar, ali da pehla

The girl goes inside and looks at the time 7:15

She goes in her room and takes out a buiness suite and keeps that and a towel on the bed she looks at her husband and kisses him on the forehead

"Good moring my darling husband time to wake up" she leaves the room and runs down stairs "Bansi khaka ,ragu,dhaijaan jaldi aao help kar ne, we are very late today"

"Sur bhabi don't worry hum sab hai na we'll make it" says Fiza, Ramona and Nidha walk into the spacious kitchen with bright smiles on their face

"Haan my sweet deveranis hain tho sab kuch ho jayega, par breakfast banana tho hai , woh bhi 5 different things" says Sur with a sigh.

"Aap ke Maan bhai ke liye cheese omelette with avacado and mushrooms , phir Sid ke liye pancakes ,Krishna ke liye aloo ke paratha and Jeh ke liye grilled cheese sandwiches...pheww" Fiza recited out the whole list

"Thank god tumhare Maan bhai aur mere saare dever lunch office mein kar the hain, varna bina tiffin aaj jaana pad tha" Sur says starting to chop the vegetables

few minutes later

"Sur... Sur" yells Maan from the room

"Coming" says Sur the kitchen.

"Jao bhabi will finish up" says Nidha

In the room

"Sur jaldi aao na im getting late" says maan

"Coming baba kya hua" says sur

Maan holding his tie in his hand

Sur smiling takes the tie and while tying it on Maan

"Maan sing khurana one of india's biggest tycoons who bulids so many buling and mansions cant tie his own tie, what will people say if they come to know huh" laughs sur

she then puts her arms around maan and says "I must say you are looking very dashing today my handsome hubby" she winks at him

Maan pushes sur away "stop this lovey dovey nonsenes I don't have time for this I have to prepare for my meeting I have a big presentation today"

Sur quitely wipes her tears that had sprang up in her eyes and goes down stairs

At the breakfast table

Maan on his phone talking

"Wow bhabi, aloo ke parathe my favorite,bhabi aap ke haat mein jaado hain they are delicious thanks" says krishna

"Krishna mere haath mein Ramona ke haath mein jaddo hai she made it" say Sur , smiling at Ramona.

"Maan breakfast is getting cold eat na" says Sur

Haan bhaiya bhabi ne itne pyaar se banaya hain" Sid adds

"I don't have time i'll grab something in the office" and he leaves with out saying good bye to Sur, who looks at his retreating back with sadness.

that is it for now do comment

Edited by RDKFF - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
😭 itne pyaar se naasta banaya aur khadoos singh khurana ne dekha bhi nahi 😡 ...lovely update fiza...i think i rule on him for five minutes when i tie his tie 😳 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
Poor sur...😔
nice update fiza...continue...

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