MG[SS]-Just a Dream or Two Behind You [IMP Note - Pg1 & Pg71] - Page 43

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Lolz...but yeh destiny likhne wali kafi lazy hai😆

*thinks a li'l more* Season 2? Hmmm! ...nope too lazy😆😆

Thank you for being here behna🤗

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Not me😛

Jiju ne banaya hai for me😃...jaa unhe kopche mein compliment kar dena😉

Originally posted by: --Shika--

Alright so yeah am supposed to do my presentation but one voice inside my head was shouting at me to edit the comment (And i don't have a rifle to shoot it😆) SO here i am to edit this after ages..!!
Firstly Geet's feelings were very well written.. So natural.. and so apt. The people who haven't believed in her dreams, or let's say who haven't thought that her dreams are worth it, are actually appreciating her and being PROUD of her.. Wow! Hypocrisy at it's peak.. But well that's how the world works isn't it? hmm And then she was surrounded by happy crowd yet she felt lonely... Of course.. even if she's happy and content, her way of celebration may not be the same.. and apart from that the false appreciation ca sicken any one's stomach. It does in my case😆
Am glad she can see through people. One advantage of being calm is that you observe people a lot. Isn't it?
So she went off to her room to celebrate her little success in her way.. and then she saw HIM.
You know i was reading it with batted breath. Seriously.. i'll tell you how i was reading it.. i was sitting hugging my knees and was sitting on lawn, on the green grass.. okay i shud cut the dramatics😆
Fine in short i read it in a pleasant evening in a pleasant mood and even though it was a chilly evening, i was sweating out of anticipation.
So yeah both of them finally met and if you would give me permission i would quote their dialogues. They are beautiful. And guess what this is their first proper conversation and the last part of this beautiful story eventually.

"I was very conscious. It was so embarrassing."

"It was mesmerizing."
I was grinning like an idiot at these dialogues.

"We sometimes encounter people, perfect strangers, who begin to interest us at first sight. I think I do."

"...and somehow suddenly, all at once, before a even word has been spoken, the intrest becomes a passion."
Well i quite agree with Geet. But Maan's words ave me a mini heart attack too. No wonder i asped while i read it.😆 I was so much into the story. Blame your writing skills.

"We are not afraid of chaos and are comfortable talking to strangers. But we like knowing where we are heading. It would always be a path of our choosing."
One more line which caught my interest. Exactly! When will you be comfortable? When you know what exactly you are doing. And needless to say i agree with these lines and i quite identify myself.😆

She came to acknowledge a few things now that she would not have believed till then. One is that opportunity comes when you least expect it and the second is that you can have a bond with someone you have never met in person; and in some cases that bond is strong enough to overcome even your greatest fears.
One more Gem. The first thing i have yet to experiece ut the second thing well ermm.. Love you nanand Ji.🤗
"I will be there. Always around, but at a distance. I will be there. Patience in my heart, persistence in my spirit. I will be there. Just a dream or two behind."
And these lines trust me I'll always remember. Until i have partial amnesia of course😆
I Loved this story. The way it ended was beautiful. If you would have made Geet run into his arms or kiss him, I would have definitely fainted here!😆
This was realistic, Beautiful, sweet and some thing i'll always read whenever i lose hope and faith and something which keeps me going. Thanks a lot for this beautiful piece of work Jazz. Am indebted to you.🤗

Originally posted by: Shimmerr

great ss dear!!

Originally posted by: -pixie-

As much as we may desire to put everything into boxes, neatly compartmentalizing as we go along- Life almost always has very different plans- plans that include chaos and entropy rather than lists and plans! So the long and short of it is that- while the unresolved ending is what suited the story- I do wish you had tied up the lose ends 😊

It was a failing on my part, as that was the limit till where my imagination took me. And specially since it was the first time I took a tale this long, I think my line of thought fizzled out by the end.

I was very busy with work/travel when you started but finally managed to catch-up today! I read it at one go and really enjoyed the read.

I think somewhere along the way you said- you are not a writer but a painter- I think it shows in your writing- its very very picturesque (and I mean it in the best possible way).

Thank you. Glad you did enjoy reading it.

I hope you write something else soon! I shall be the waiting..

<just a post or two behind while stalking you!>

😳😳 Will let you know if I do.

Originally posted by: --Shika--

I'm bored and am stalking you. I want to sleep. Heck why does this end? I used to read this before going to my sleep. I used to sleep with a smile on my lips par now sob sob. Guess what i've attended a workshop today n learnt around 200+ infact more words and my brain couldn't take so much that my head is throbbing. Mummy when r u starting you-know-what? I cant wait till october. I'll end up bugging you and cribbing non stop. I need good reads in my breaks. Pweeej *imagine me making puppy dog eyes even it looks horrible*