MG[SS]-Just a Dream or Two Behind You [IMP Note - Pg1 & Pg71] - Page 39

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mechantefille



The stuff you've put in the above para makes me feel it's a part of what ur like. Is my gut telling me the truth?

Once or twice maybe, but I never have the stamina to be that still and calm.

Gosh, that is such a hungry plea...come here Maan i'll giv u a hug!

😆😆

Jazz loved the way his feelings poured out in a torrents. It was so beautiful. I felt like he doesn't even know the words come out in that manner , but they came out because it was time, because he had to and cuz he couldn't hold them in anymore.
As I said, a man that much in control would need a moment of temptation to come of it. And yet it is an act of courage to let it all out, with full responsibility and a sincere heart.

I loved Geet's character - she knows who she is - who she can be, where her duties lie. I loved that
Glad you loved my Geet. She is very close to my heart.

And Loved the kindred bit. And the bit where she knows she needs to come into her own and then get into beginnig her relationship. I so, relate to it.
I believe in love, but I also believe that my happiness must never be subservient to another being. I should be the master to that. To have a partner in that happiness is a blessing. But I must be an individual worthy of holding these emotions first.

Jazz--do write more. it's a pleasure reading it!
Will try...😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Danina

OMG...what a beaautiful ending:D

i loved it...<3<3<3
wow u left me mesmerized with this story:D:D
its amazinggg:)
even though i didnt want you to end it but aaamaaazzzinggg:)
wowwowowowow<3<3<3
please write more often:D:D:D
u are an amazing writer:)
:D:D
thanks for the pm:D


And by often you mean once a year right?😛 Sorry lame joke😆

Thank you for liking this so much.

I can understand that feeling of never wanting a story to end. I have bugged my favorite writers with the same sentiment. But then...oh well...it had to end eventually.
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Posted: 14 years ago
I don't believe in love but I fall in love with lovestory Jazz...😳

I don't know soul mates exist or not...but after reading this I want to believe it does exist...in what forms u've to find it out😛

U ended it brilliantly👏...don't say that u r not good writer...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
edited comment on pg 51
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Posted: 14 years ago
bravo 👏

i always love a story with a suspense,
which ends in a positive note and especially one
which allows the reader ample scope for further embellishment in the story.

I can thus take the story as I wish, into future and that is the best part of your writing. Stories neatly tied and endings laid upon are not always interesting. 😉

Keep it up. pm me if you intend to write any more.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Jazz, that was amazing. Love comes in many different forms, an this was beautifully written. I loved how Maan and Geet didn't even mention the word. That left me speechless. No need to run and hide 😆. I will always be just a dream or two behind.. That was lovely. I can't find any more adjectives!

I'm sad that this story has ended, but there really was no point in dragging out. So thank you for writing this amazing story!

Please write more! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Jazzy... When I saw last part, I was like really?? So soon??
But when I read it... it totally blew me away...awesome... perfect ending.. Just too perfect!!! He is going to be with her with patience in his heart.. seeing her fulfil her dreams... I wish such things happen more often in real life.
No need to run or hide.. this was a beautiful story I have read in a long time... I love ur way of writing...u have probably gotten tired of hearing the same everytime...but I can't help it... I Loved it..
Will I be sound greedy if i ask for an epilogue??hehehe...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sangi1588

Jazz 🤗This is was an awesome ending... My My... I am awestruck. It was just fab and the apt ending you could have ever given. I dnt know what to say or write, it was pure magical...
To give and not expect return, that is what lies at the heart of love. True love begins when nothing is looked for in return. Love is to love someone for who they are, who they were, and who they will be. Love is to love, Sacrifice is one form of love. Waiting for the person with a heart filled with love, is a form of love. Love is Love in all forms.. Loved Maan here, without thinking twice, he is ready to wait for her with unconditional love for Geet. Loved it to the core , Jazz. Hope to see you writing more..😃


Thank you sangs. Lovely thoughts, lovely comment!!

Thank you for being here🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -dia-

awesome ...It can't be better than this.
Perfect!!!
loved it.


Thank you :)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Jimzi2716

I don't believe in love but I fall in love with lovestory Jazz...😳


I don't know soul mates exist or not...but after reading this I want to believe it does exist...in what forms u've to find it out😛

U ended it brilliantly👏...don't say that u r not good writer...😊


You want me to find out? *ready with a pen and writing-pad* Do I have another heroine on my hand?😉

Thanks for being here chinks🤗

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