Eternal Soulmates-RN-Note & UD Part-11 on Pg-22 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: sweetgirls1

thanks i am eager to read it and please kindly add me to your pm list



Sure, will add u in the PM List 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: golu_1677

waiting for the update...



Give me just 2-3 hours 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
what happend why haven't you posted
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
hope everything is ok...

U hvnt updated ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sorry guys..some problem..no able to post the part...so have send it to Summi...she will post the update on mybehalf...so sorry guys!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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do you have any idea when will she post????
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Posted: 14 years ago
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plz plz plz update...i read ur ff...its awesum! plz update...cnt wait :(
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Posted: 14 years ago
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preet i know u must be very busy in these days...but plz yaar do cont Ur fiction



plz cont
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ok guys..I think Summi is also not online...or she must have posted the psrt..so i am trying again..lets see how much can I do
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Part - 10


Raj Infirmary ke pass se guzar raha tha, jab usne dekha ki cadets abhi bhi bahar khade hain...Wo unke pass gaya...

Raj: - "Kya hua cadets, aap abhi tak cadet sahani ko andar nahin le kar gaye?"

Huda: - "Sorry sir, wo actually andar shalini mam aur naina mam kuch busy lag rahe the, to humne socha ki hum wait kar le..."

Raj just nodded and then entered the infirmary.

Raj: - "Excuse me Doctors...agar aap log free ho to please cadet sahani ko attend kar lijiye...Unhe chot aayi hai...and it will be better agar aap kaam par zyada dhyaan de.."

Shalini composing herself: - "Ya..sorry Major..."

And raj left the place without even looking at Naina...Naina feel like crying...so she also left the place and the cadets bring yudi in the infirmary.

Meanwhile, Naina was going towards her room; when 1 orderlee came to her and told her that there is one phone call for her.

She goes to attend the call and It was from her mom.

Veena: - "Hello naina, kaisi ho?"

Naina: - "Mein theek hoon Maa...aap log kaise hain?"

Veena: - "hum sab bhi theek hain...actually hum aaj raat ko vaapis jayenge to mene tumhe isliye phone kiya tha ki hum aaj sham ko aayenge tum logon se milne..."

Naina: - "Theek hai ma...mein veer ko bata dungi..."

Veena: - "Theek hai beta, apna khyaal rakhna..."

Naina: - "Ji maa..."

Naina cut the phone and left for her room. Meanwhile, Raj was in his cabin when he heard a knock on his door...

Raj: - "Come in..."

And he was shocked to see the person who came in. It was Nair.

Raj: - "Yes captain, aapko koi kaam tha kya?"

Nair: - "Yes Major, wo me aapse kuch imp baat karna chahta tha..."

Raj: - "Ok..go ahead..."

Nair: - "Pochna chahta hoon aapse ki aapko kal raat wala surprise kaisa laga..." He said with a smirk.

Raj: - "What do u mean by this Captain?"

Nair: - "I mean..kal raat wala surprise Major...I am sure yeh jaan kar ki aapki apni wife hi aapko dhoka de rahi hai, aapko zaroor ek sadma pohancha hoga."

Raj was shocked to hear this, and was not able to say anything...and Nair continued: - "Aap aur expect bhi kya kar sakte hain ek gadaar ki behen se...Major, aapne hamesha se galat logon par bharosa karne ki galti ki hai...pehle Naveen aur ab Naina..."

And this was it for raj: - "Calm down Captain...aap itni chinta kyun kar rahe hain..its my personal life and I am not here to discuss that with u...and remember its our duty time, so it will be good ki aap yahan sirf official baatein hi discuss kare..na ki personal baatein."

Nair left his room and raj, again was doing his work; when Naina came in his cabin...

Raj: - "Yes Lt."

Naina: - "Ghar se phone aaya tha, sab sham ko yahan aa rahe hain to tum academy me hi rehna..."

Raj: - "Alrite...now, can I do my work?"

Naina nodded and left his cabin and raj tried to do his work; but it was becoming difficult for him to do his work and also, to behave normally in front off everyone..He just want to have some time alone...but look like, its not possible for him..The whole day passes like that only...and its evening time...Raj was in mess trying to feel relax and to have some coffee; when our 6 cadets came inside...all were cursing Nair for some reason...

Raj saw this and smiled remembering his old days with everyone in the academy...when they came to him...

Huda: - "Sir, kya hum aapke saath yahan bheth haye..."

Raj: - "Sure Cadet Huda...please bhethiye...aur mujhe bataiye ki hua kya hau..aap sab log badhe depressed lag rahe hain."

Ali: - "Kuch nahin sir, yeh sab Captain nair ki nayi assignment ki vajah se hua hai..."

Raj: - "Toh is mein itna pareshaan hone ki kya baat hai guys...mehnat toh aapko karni hi padegi na..."

Yudi: - "Hum mante hain sir, par aaj assignment di aur parso subah uski submission, yeh bhi to sahi nahin na..."

Raj janta tha ki Nair ne ek assignment apna gussa nikalne ke liye di hai; jo wo mujh par nahin nikal saka...par wo is mein kuch nahin kar sakta tha...

Raj: - "Dekhiye Cadets, aisi assignment bahut baar di jati hai...isliye itna pareshaan hne ki jagah, jaiye aur ache se apni assignment complete kijiye..."

Sanjana: - "Ji Sir..."

And all of them left to have some tea and then, to do the assignment and raj was left alone with some old memories. He remembered the time when they all were present in the academy as cadets...a smile came to his lips remembering those days...but it vanished as he sees the reality. Wo utha bahar jane ke liye...phir ruka cadets ke table ke pass aur vahan bheth gaya...

Raj: - "Koi formula mila assignment banane ka..." He asked them.

Pooja: - "Kahan sir, yeh assignment hamare saath connection jodhne ke liye hi ready nahin hai."

Raj: - "To aisa mat kariye na..."

Yudi: - "Kya matlab sir?"

Raj: - "Divide and rule..."

Sanjana: - "Sir, yeh divide and rule ki policy assignments pe kab se chalne lagi?"

Raj: - "Cadet Shikhawat...meri baat dhyaan se suniye...aap aisa karo ki poori assignment ko solve karne ki koshish mat karo...divide it in parts.."

Huda: - "Usse kya hoga sir ji?"

Raj: - "Let me complete cadet Huda..."

Huda: - "Sorry Sir..."

Raj: - "Its ok cadet...ab suniye..mein yeh keh raha tha ki apni assignment ko 6 parts me divide karo...aur sab ek-ek part ready karo aj raat me...kal aap sab usse discuss karo and m sure, parso subah tak aapki assignments ban hi jayengi..."

Sanjana: - "Kya baat hai sir? Kya idea nikala hai aapne..."

Raj: - "Yeh mera idea nahin hai...yeh wo mere friend Naveen ka idea tha..." Yeh kehte hi uski chehre ki smile phir se chali gayi...Aalekh yeh baat ache se samajh gaya...

Aalekh: - "Bhaiya, aap jao...apun log kar lega..."

All were quite shocked to listen bhaiya from Aalekh.

Raj just placed his hand on his head and ruffles his hair...and then left.

Huda: - "Ooye qaidi...yeh tu sir ji ko bhaiya kab se bulane laga."

Aalekh: - "apun tere ko kyn batayega..."

Sanjana: - "Chodo guys, chalo na hum sab bilkul vaise hi karte hain jaise bhaiya ne bataya hai..lets divide our assignment in six parts..."

Aur wo lag gaye apni assignment ko 6 parts me divide karne...once they r done...thhey aall left for library to get some books regarding their assignments...

Here, Naina and raj's parents came in the academy and were going towards their room; when they met raj in the corridor...

Raj: - "maa, baba aap log yahn?" He asked with a little confusion.

Veena: - "Are raj, tumhe naina ne nahin bataya, humne phone kiya tha..."

Raj: - "Oh...sorry ma, naina ne bataya tha...mein hi bhool gaya..."

Prerna: - "Koi baat nahin...chal room me chalte hain..."

Raj: - "ji maa, chaliye..."

They all entered the room and at that time, naina was in kitchen preparing something for them to eat. Veena and Prerna goes in to meet her.

Prerna: - "Kya bana rahi ho naina?"

Naina: - "Maa, bas socha aap sab aa rahe ho to thodhe pakore bana lun.."

Veena: - "Hamare liye...yan raj ke liye..."

Naina: - "Nahin maa...aap sab ke liye...veer ko to kabhi bhi khila sakti hoon na..." She said with a disappointment in her voice.

Prerna: - "Naina, tere aur raj ke beech me koi problem hui hai kya?"

Naina: - "nahin maa...kyun?"

Veena: - "Kyunki, aaj raj en tujhe naina keh kar bulaya nia nahin..."

Naina: - "Kya?"

Prerna: - "Haan...raj chahe jitna bhi naraz ho...kabhi tujhe naina keh kar nahin bulata, phir aaj kyun..."

Naina: - "Maa...wo jan boojh...aaj kal mujhe chidhane ke liye aisa karta hai...kabhi Dr. Naina aur kabhi Naina..."

Prerna: - "Tu sach keh rahi hai na..."

Naina: - "Ji maa...bilkul sach..chaliye ab andar chaliye...mein chai le kar aati hoon..."

Prerna and veena goes inside and after sometime, even Naina comes there...all were chatting and eating pakoras... When Prerna notices that raj in not eating anything..

Prerna: - "Raj, tu kyun nahin kha raha..kha na.."

Raj: - "Nahin ma..actually mein kha chukka hoon..."

Naina: - "lekin mene bataya tha..."

Raj: - "Wo actually sorry maa...cadets ki help kar raha tha ek assignment me..to unke saath hi kuch kha liya tha aur abhi bilkul bhook nahin hai..."

Veena: - "Chalo, theek hai...vaise sanjana aur neev kahan hain?"

Raj: - "Maa..Neev delhi gaya hai...kuch zarori kaam tha usse vahan...aur sanjana assignment banane me busy hogi...abhi bulata hoon usse..."

Raj just leaves and call an orderlee and tell him to call Sanjana.

Cadets were coming out of library when an orderlee comes there.

Orderlee: - "Cadet Singh, Majot Shikhawat ne aapko apne room me bulaya hai..."

Sanjana: - "Mujhe lekin kyun?"

Aalekh: - "Wo apun ne uncle aunty ko academy me aate hue dekha tha...to issi liye bulaya hoga na."

Sanjana: - "Theek hai..to tub hi chal na mere saath.."

Aalekh: - "Apun kya karega vahan?"

Sanjana: - "Tum bhaiya ko bhaiya bulate ho na...to wo bhi tumhari family hui, ab chalo..."

Aalekh: - "Theek hai chal..."

Sanjana: - "Ok...guys...will see u all in a while..."

Sanjana and Aalekh came in the room and raj introduced Aalekh to them... while they all chatted, but even sanjana and aalekh ignore Naina...After some time, their parents left...and its raj, naina, sanjana and aalekh in the room now...

Raj: - "So, tum dono ne assignment karni start ki kya?"

Sanjana: - "Ji Bhaiya, humne kafi kuch dekh liya hai..Kal tak assignment bhi ban jayegi...all thanks to u.."

Raj: - "Apne bhaiya ko bhi thanks bolegi..."

Sanjana: - "Nahin..mene kab bola..."

Raj: - "haan..samajh sakta hoon..."

Sanjana: - "Theek hai bhaiya, ab hum bhi chalte hain..."

Naina: - "Sanjana, aaj yahiin par dinner kar ke chale jana..."

Sanjana: - "Nahin Mam...uski koi zarorat nahin hai..."

Naina: - "mam...tum pagal ho gayi ho sanjana...tum mujhe mam kab se bulane lag padhi..."

Sanjana: - "Jab se mujhe pata chala hai ki pichle kuch dino se aap bhaiya ki feelings se khel rahi thi..."

Raj: - "Sanjana..."

Sanjana: - "Bhaiya aaj humne infirmary me inki sab baatein sun li thi.."

Naina: - "Tum bhi to apne bhaiya se naraz thi na sanjana...phir mujhe hi kyun galat samjha ja raha hai..."

Sanjana: - "mein naraz thi bhabhi, par mene kabhi unki feelings ke saath khel nahin sakti...yeh jante hue bhi ki wo aapse itna pyaar karte hain aapne yeh sab kiya...aur phir pooch rahi ho ki aapki galti kya hai.."

Raj: - "Sanjana calm down...bacha...shant ho ja...kuch nahin hua hai..."

Sanjana: - "Kuch nahin hua bhai...aap mujhe bataiye ki aap ab bhi aise behave kaise kar rahe ho...aapko dard nahin hota...kyun bhai kyun..." Itna keh kar hi wo raj ke gale lag gayi aur roye ja rahi thi...

Raj: - "Dekh sanju, jo hua usse bhool ja...mein bhi to bhool gaya na...ab yahan hoon to bas naveen ke liye...ek baar naveen ko insaaf mil jaye...phir ..." rah yahiin ruk gaya...nahin chahta tha wo ki sanjana ko koi aur bhi dukh mile ab...

Sanjana: - "Bhaiya kaise?"

Raj: - "Bas...abhi ke liye chup kar ja..meri kasam hai tujhe..aur aalekh apni behen ko samjhao..aisi behave karti hui achi nahin lagti yeh..."

Aalekh: - "Apun kya samjhaye bhaiya..is baar apun sanjana ke saath hai..."

Raj: - "Tum bhi...dekh sanjana tujhe bahut strong banana hai...aur mein nahin chahta ki koi bhi yeh kahe ki major shikhawat ki behn roti rehti hai..."

Sanjana: - "bhaiya..."

Raj: - "Acha..sorry, chal ab has de aur ja kar apni padhai kar..."

Sanjana nodded and then, left the place with Aalekh; and Naina came towards raj.

Naina: - "Mein manti hoon ki mene galat kiya tha, par maine jo kuch bhi kiya wo sachai na jante hue kiya...mujhe maaf kar do..."

Raj: - "Sorry naina, aaj mere pass tumhe den eke liye kuch nahin hai...maafi bhi nahin."

Naina: - "Veer...meri baat to suno..."

Raj: - "Veer kehne ka haq tum kho chuki ho Naina..."

Raj ne itna kaha aur kamre se bahar chala gaya...aur naina wahiin reh gayi...


Edited by -.Preet.- - 14 years ago

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