Eternal Soulmates-RN-Note & UD Part-11 on Pg-22 - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part
Naina's actions have shattered raj completely and this time he is so broken that he cannot even forgive naina .
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome awesome awesome!!!!👏👏👏


vow now that's seems like an long update!!!!!


i really appreciate Ur writing!!!


awww...poor raj ...he is really heart by naina's act!!!!


how much i wish to slap naina right now😡😡😡...i only wish OK????😆😆😆 kun ke phir pata nahi end main naina innocent nikle to major mujhe choode ge nahi 🤣


the family scene was really nice!!!!


even there family think that there is some misunderstanding between them!!!!(including sanjana n alkeh of course)


hmmm...so snaja n alekh is in raj's side now...good ...they should be!!!!


n now naina is all alone!!!...awww now i feel bad for her!!!!!


u forgot to PM me this time😔😔😔


plz cont soon


love u


esha


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Posted: 14 years ago

kafi emotional part tha yaar...rula diya mere ko...

Raj baht hurt tha...!!! vaise naina ne uss ke sath baht bura kiya tha...!!! naveen ko innocent prove karne ka matlab yeh toh nahi ke...Raj ko hurt kar ke hi kiya jaye...Stupid ladki...!!! arey...teri nahi...naina ki baat karr rahi hun...

pata hai ke end hone se pahle sayad Raj aur naina me sab thik ho jaye...par raj toh ander se kafi tuta hua hai na...!!! naina ne use dhoka jo diya hai...!!! phir bhi voh aise pretend karr raha tha jaise kuch hua hi na ho...

n voh muchhad Nair...he he he...raj ne achha band bajaya hai uss ka...!!! bada aaya tha...raj ko satane...Raj ne achha lagam lagaya hai uss me...

aur sanjana kafi upset hai naina se..alekh bhi hai aur main bhi hun...!!! ab naina raj se mafi maang rahi hai...par sahi hai ke...raj use maaf nahi karr pa raha hai...maaf karna bhi nahi chahiye...huh...kya soch ke yah sab kiya tha Naina ne...

ab next part agar tune apne dairy me likh liya ho toh yahan par bhi type kar de...aur voh bhi jaldi se...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wen u get time do cont ur fic...
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Posted: 14 years ago
preet pls try n cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesome update...naina is impulsive from the beginning but still she should not have done that whatever may be the reason...the cadets r so shocked...shalini shot naveen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Thank u so much Dear...I agree, Naina has done a wrong thing, and this time Raj will make her realize her mistake. Thanks fr the comment...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Preet

update was really gud.👏👏👏
Naina was really hurt but she nearly killed Raj with her betrayal...😭😭😭 he trusted her blindly while all the time she was just playing with his emotions.
Shalini was disguted with this and she slapped her ..Naina expected this from Raj but not from her..huh wat does she know abt Raj???😡😡 he wud never hurt her.
Naina is so wrong ,she doesn't deserve Raj at all.here Raj is ready to sacrifice everything for her while she cudn't keep her single promise made to him.
Raj's grief knows no bound..he is emotionally scarred forever.he just wants to return Naveen's honour and then dissappear.😭😭😭
Alekh heard everything but he is one person who knows how to balance his emotions..he wud never spill the beans.😊
Naina was really hurt to see Raj behaviour toward her..Even Shalini didn't help her much...so wat did she expected that Raj wud forget all🤢🤢
The cadets were so hurt to know that their mentor has gone through so much grief..😭😭😭
Did Shalini really shot Naveen instead of Raj????😲😲😲 this is indeed a shock!!
Naveen's condition is improoving..I hope everything comes our right..😊
Bye



Thanks Di...will reply in detail after the update...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

This was amazing part though sad but a very well written part...

Raj really loves naina alot ... Raj is hurt coz of naina...

Alekh is so matured... Liked the part between Raj and Alekh...

Waiting for the next part ...

Thanks for the update...



Thanks Dear...really glad that u liked the update...Means a lot...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome part.
loved it.
continue soon



Thank u so much Rakhi...means a lot...

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

awesome update

loved the twist 😉



Thanks a lot Khushi!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Update was very emotional...beautifully written where everyone's emotions have been depicted perfectly...be it Raj's hurt and helplessness, Shalini's anger, Naina's guilty, Raj and Naina's family's worry for their children future and happiness. the cadets worry and new found respect for their favourite teacher.👏

Raj is so shocked 😲by Naina's betrayal that he is feeling dead, keh te hai na ki jab dukh ek hadse zyada badh jata hai to insan kuch bhi mahsos nahi kar pata. Raj ki bhi yahi halat hai, and that is why naina could only see void in Raj's eyes.😭

Naina deserved to be slapped, Shalini ne bilkul thik kiya. Akhir kisi ko toh uski akal thikane lani thi.😉 Shalini is worried for Raj because she knows that Raj will never be able to bear that his naina was playing with his emotions.😔

Naina knows that she has lost Raj's trust for ever. She tries to argue with her conscious say that if she had known that Naveen was alive then she would not have behaved in such a manner. If she would have tried to see how hard Raj has been trying to prove Naveen innocent then she would have realised her mistake. 😒

Both of their families were so happy with Raj and Naina's wedding. Raj had asked for only one promise from naina that she would never break in trust in return for sacrificing his entire life for her. But naina could not even keep this promise.

The news of Naveen's death shattered eveyone's life but naina never gave Raj a chance to explain his action, or to understand the message which he has sent her. The only way she found to cope with her sorrow was to blame Raj for it. 😡

Shalini tries to console Raj, but she knows that the damage can never be repaired. Its good that Raj has shalini with him to share his tears. Both of them are overjoyed to hear that Naveen's condition is finally starting to improve. And this has given Raj new hope, something that he has asked for by the wishing pillar'to have his friend back with his lost honour.

Alekh is shocked to hear about how much Raj has been suffering but he decides not to tell other about Naveen. Raj is confident that Alekh is a person who knows how to keep secrets.😊

All the cadets are amazed as to how Raj can keep is professional and personal life separate so perfectly. Despite of facing so much pain and sorrow, he has always had care and guidance to share with his cadets and above all unending patriotism for his country.😊

Naina is hurt by Raj's cold and curt behaviour towards her. Even shalini behaved in a similar manner with her. Shalini wants naina to know the truth before she goes about blaming Raj for everything.

Its shocking to know that shalini has shot Naveen. I am sure it was a plan to save Naveen's life.😲

Waiting for the next part. Continue soon



Thank u so much Nisha...Really means a lot, will definitely reply in detail later...

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