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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Part 6-8

Actually mujhe laga maine part 5 pehle nahi padha tha...mujhe laga tumne 4/5 UDs kiye honge pehle...but seems like u had updates 7 parts then. Anyways...part 5 ka exclusive reply mil gaya...hehe...I actually loved the part!!

Anyways...now coming to the next ones. Pehle to mujhe bhi laga tha ki ...Raj-Naina ki dosti hui thi...why didnt that cum in those 5 parts?...hehe. (silly me) Khair koi baat nahi...I had to go thru the last parts...and phirse padhke achha hi laga!!

Loved the game where everyone told qualities of their partners!! Huda was hilarious!! 🤣And bakiyon ke qualities janne me mujhe kaafi maza aya. However I thot 5 points cudnt suffice for Raj...😳

And then...Raj took Naina to Naveen. He is almost lifeless......but wapas aate hi Raj ko jhatka laga!! Naina pehle natak kar rahi thi...😲...waise this was gud u knw...achanak dosti kar lena...wud be a lil weird!! 🤔

But now Raj is hurt...and I am sad...so moving on to the next part now!! 😳

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Part 9

Umm...mujhe na samajh me nahi aa raha hai kaise react karu? I mean...u knw that I never wanted Raj to be blamed for Navin's death. Main to chahti thi wo suicide kare (agar karna hi tha)...but yaha tumne iss cheez ko ek nayi mor de di...Shalini shot Navin!! 😲

Arre main sach me shocked hu...isliye ye emoticon use kiya!! 😳

But Raj bahut hurt bhi hai...cant see him like that. Aur to aur wishing pillar ke paas jaake khudse ye waada kar liya ki Navin begunah sabit hote hi wo sab se dur chala jayega!! 😭 Mujhe rona aa raha hai...ye sochke ki usse kitni takleef ho rahi hai...😔

I hope Naina Raj se achhese maafi mangegi...huh!! And as said, Raj to sabko maaf kar deta hai...so she shudnt worry!! Jitni jaldi se ho sake Raj se maafi magwao...and then hamare paas bhejna usse...thodi class leni hai...😈

Aalekh on the other hand is an awesum cadet...really like him a lot. 😊

Continue soon Preet...😃

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

part-6

wonderful update👏👏👏

ok now fresher's ball going to start and the preparations were going on👏👏 chalo huda ko kuch akal to aati sanjana aur neev ki baaton se nahi to pitta wo neev se aisi nautanki karne ke baad

ab jab naina usse thik se baat nahi karegi to rajveer ko coffee to khud hi banani padegi na buddhu ladki itna bhi nahi samajhti😆😆😆

raj ka ye idea achcha ha usko formally bulao to khud hi apne aap baat karne lagegi wo raj se😉😉😉 flashback was very nice... naveen perfectly arranged the party for his sister and best friend and becomes emotional to while listeining the chat of raj and naina😭😭😭 afterall his sister is going to leave him soon na😊😊😊 uuummm no sanjana ki entry itne wrong time nahi honi chahiye thi

ab naina chaahe jo karle wo abhi bhi raj se pyaar karti hai😊😊😊 and after knowing that raj also becomes very happy and out of his excitment he literally shouted in happiness in his office😃😃😃

and shalini thoht what happened to him😕😆😕

how considerate is raj for naina that he brought a beautiful saree for his wife how perfectly he knows naina😊😊😉 that she has not gone for shopping for the freshers😊😊😊 and also kows that naina will like the gift very much😊😊😊

aalekh's part was just awesome👏👏👏 arey bhai apne rajveer sir hai hi aise jo sab ke baare me sochte hain chahe wo koi bhi ho tabhi to usne aalekh ki help bhi ki aur usko akele me bhaiya kehne ko bhi kaha😃😃😃

sanjana aur neev ka chhota tha part but that was cute and happy happy👏👏😃 hhmmm abhi , raj , and nandini yahan to sab ek dusre ki band bajaane per hi tule hue hain jisko dekho wo kisi na kisi ke peeche pada hai😆😆😆

raj naina ko kitni achchi tarah se jaanta hai na ki usko kya achcha lagega aur kya nahi , kya kab kehna chahti hai ya nahi kehna chahti😉😉😛

wow the most awaited part😍😍😍 finally they patched up a lil bit and started their friendship again👏👏👏 ab naveen ke liye sahi lekin dono ek saath to hue na😉😉😉

Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

part - 7

starting was so romantic whether it is real or the flashback it was good👏👏👏

and wow for aalekh and sanjana that they won the mr & miss freshers award👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼huda ke armaano pe to paani fir gaya hoga aalekh ko award milte dekh😆😆😉yyyayyy and our major and his wife got highest scores and also won the couple of the night award

dance part was lovely atleast she has realized that she has done a mistake by behaving very rudely and not talking with raj🥱🥱🥱 but see how her husband told her to forget the past things 😃😃😃

good that raj is going to take all of them out from the academy for sometime afterall some mauj and masti will not harm the cadets in the drills and studies of the academy😉😉😉

poor raj morning me hi use naina se darr lagne laga ki use uske haath ka bana khana khana padega aur uske baad use pachtaana padega lekin hua to bilkul ulta hi😆😆😆

ab naina ko kya hogaya aise kaun se papers dekh liye kit itna pareshaanho gayin madam😕😕😕

aur party ke liye raj ne naina ko keh diya ki ready ho jao magar major saab khud hi ready hona bhul gaye😆😆😆

Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

part - 8

wooo thats cool raj ne naina ke liye surprise birthday party rakhi hai😊😊😊 aur sab ko involve bhi kar liya naina ko surprise dene mein and naina was shocked to see her surprise b'day party and also her in laws and parents was also there because raj has informed all of them in advance👏👏👏 kitni care karta hai na raj apni wifey ki😉😉😉

aur game time mein to mujhe ye smaj nahi aaya ki bechari pooja thi ya bechara huda jinko pair bana diya ek dusre ke saath😆😆😆 pooja ko samaj nahi aaya ki wo huda ke liye achcha kya bole aur huda usko apni hi tareef karne se hi fursat nahi milti😆😆😆 sab ke answers bahut achche the apne partners ke baare me lekin best answer ne naina ne diya raj ke baare me👏👏👏

wow what a nice song he has sung for naina👏👏👏

hey that was nice ki naveen is alive nahi to naina humesha raj ko hi blame karti thi naveen ko shoot karne ke liye

but ye last me kya ho gaya naina naatak kar rahi thi pyaar ka raj ke saath😲😲😲

how dare she?????????😡😡😡

Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

part - 9

nnnooo this part made me cry 😭😭😭...how can naina do this to raj she is just playing with raj's feelings for the sake of her own benefit ab jab usne dhoka de hi diya hai to naina ko kyun itna bura lag raha ha ..such an idiot girl😡🤢🤢

chalo naveen ne kuch to kehna shuru kiya🥱🥱🥱 and aalekh did heard the convo of raj and shalini now he can very well understood the situation between raj and naina relationship

and now the whole group of them now know the truth of naina raj and all of them connected to this case...

ab last me ye achcha waala twist laga ki naveen ko raj ne nahi shalini ne shoot kiya tha aur shalini naveen ke baare me sabkuch pehle se hi jaanti thi

ab kam se kam raj ko toh blame nahi kiya jaayega is cheez ke liye😊😊😊

chalo ab jaldi se next part post kar do 😃😃😃

bbbyyyeee

Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago

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Hira

@sweetgirls1

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

you are an awesome writer i am eagerly waiting for the next part please update soon and please add me to ur pm list and please can you tell me the names of ur previous fics😊

Edited by sweetgirls1 - 14 years ago

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Prerna

@prerna1

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

great parts
part sad tha but i think it was according to story demand
plz continue soon and pm me too

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

hhhuuufff...

finally preet i ve commented on all the previous and current parts pls check that😃😃😃 some are on pg 5 and remaining are on pg 9 and 10

shreya😊😊

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Preet

@RadhaKrishan

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18
part-2
very nice update👏👏👏 Thank u so much Shreya!!!
wow raj is now vp of kma kaash main bhi wahan hoti uss muchchad ki shakal dekhne😆😆😆 bechara bahut bura fansaa hai😆😉 U know, even I want to there at this moment, par our bad luck, par imagine kar lo...kitna awesome lagta na😉😆😆the whole kma was happy for raj afterall he is back to his second home😊😊😊 especially our dearest suriji😊😊😊 and what is the truth that his mentor is asking to tell that truth to naina😕😕😕 and finally major is back in kma 😃😃😃 Yeh sab to tumhe aage aage pata chal hi jayega...and u know, it will contain a lot of drama 😆😆

part-3
wwwooo finally confession of love Ya,...finally...Thanks for liking it and liking the updates...

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