Eternal Soulmates-RN-Note & UD Part-11 on Pg-22 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

part-4

very romantic part👏👏👏 confession , date , permission , and engagement ek hi update me sab
romantic date ke baad naveen ka prank aur naveen ke prank ke baad naina 😆😆😆
achcha badla liya apne bhai se naina ne😉😉😆



Romatic..😲 I thought I am not at all good at writing the romantic parts...thanks and I just hope u have enjoyed it, tumahra dance dekh kar to lag hi raha hai 😆😆😆 Aur pranks ke bare me kya kahun...Naveen se badla to lena hi tha na aur tumhe pata hi hai ki Naina badla lene me ustaad hai😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
preet please update soon all your parts are very good especially the dill ibaadat one in which they all sing and dance hope their misunderstandings would be cleared soon and please cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

part-5

nice part👏👏👏 raj kitna sad lag raha tha apne beautiful moments ko yaad kar ke😭😭😭 Thanks Shreya..Raj was sad because he has lived for Naina only
wo muchchad kitna pareshaan kar raha hai cadets ko😡😡 lekin apne major saab bhi to hain inlogon ko bachaane ke liye😉😉😉 Haan, hamara raj to hamesha hi raheg apne cadets ko mucchad se bachane ke liye. bechaara muchcha achchi waat lagai hai uski cadets aur bc ke saamne rajveer ne👏👏👏 Thanks for liking this Shreya...Mein to hamesha se Nair ko Raj ke samne jhuka hua dekhna chahti thi..Finally, now m able to do that 😳 ye huda pata nahi kyon pada rehta hai sanjana ke peechhe achcha hua alekh ne usko achchi tarah se jhaad laga di👏👏👏 Aalekh to shoro se hi aisa hai na 😉chalo ek kaam to huda ne achcha kiya kam se kam raj aur sanju ke beech me sab theek kar diya uss stupid ne😉🤢🥱 Kabhi kabhi galti se acha kaam bhi kar deta hai woh 😆😆😆and now that's a surprise ki sanju is engagd and that too bc's son and also the captain of army👍🏼 👍🏼😊 The update is just full of surprises 😉😆😆
aur ritu waala part wwwooowww achcha tareeka hai tha ritu ko dur rakhne ka⭐️⭐️⭐️ jo dj's ne nahi kiya wo tumne kar diya ...well done preet👏👏👏 Thanks Shreya...DJ's ka to dimaag band tha wo waqt..isliye socha j woh nahin kar paye, wo mein hi kar do.
kaash ritu ki shakal dekh paati me jab usne naina se jhaad khayi aur wo mess waala scene bhi😍😍😍 Kaash sach me, mein yeh scenes dekh pati..but I can imagina that very well...😉wow huda ki shakal when he heard captain neev,s fiance and major rajveer singh shekhawat's sister Thanks for liking the scene and for the comment Shreya 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesome update...naina is impulsive from the beginning but still she should not have done that whatever may be the reason...the cadets r so shocked...shalini shot naveen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Thanks for liking the update Dear...Naina should have not done anything like that..but ab jo ho gaya wo ho gaya...She can change it and now, she will have to pay for this...and yes, Naveen is shot by Shalini...The truth behind this will be revealed soon 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Preet Hi Suhana Di 😃

update was really gud.👏👏👏 Thank u so much Di 😳
Naina was really hurt but she nearly killed Raj with her betrayal...😭😭😭 I agree Di..Condition jo bhi ho; Naina ko kuch aisa nahin karna chahiye tha. he trusted her blindly while all the time she was just playing with his emotions. Abs right Di. It will be really difficult for Raj to remain calm now
Shalini was disguted with this and she slapped her..She was not able to believe that Naina has done all this with Raj Naina expected this from Raj but not from her..huh wat does she know abt Raj???😡😡 he wud never hurt her. I agree Di. Raj will never ever think to hurt Naina..and she is not able to understand this.
Naina is so wrong ,she doesn't deserve Raj at all.here Raj is ready to sacrifice everything for her while she cudn't keep her single promise made to him. I agree Di..And this is the reason for Raj's present condition.
Raj's grief knows no bound..he is emotionally scarred forever.he just wants to return Naveen's honour and then dissappear.😭😭😭 Yes, naina ke aisa akrne ke baad he is left with one goal only.
Alekh heard everything but he is one person who knows how to balance his emotions..he wud never spill the beans.😊 Aalekh kuch baaton ko bina kahe hi samajh leta hai aur yehi uski khasiyat hai
Naina was really hurt to see Raj behaviour toward her..Even Shalini didn't help her much...so wat did she expected that Raj wud forget all🤢🤢 Shalini cant help her now..Naina has crossed her limits this time.
The cadets were so hurt to know that their mentor has gone through so much grief..😭😭😭 They r hurt and also, they r amazed to see the potential he has.
Did Shalini really shot Naveen instead of Raj????😲😲😲 this is indeed a shock!! Yes, DI...It's Shalini here.
Naveen's condition is improoving..I hope everything comes our right..😊 Naveen will be alrite and everything will be alrite soon!!!
Bye
Bye Di...thank u so much for such an awesome comment Di.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: golu_1677

This was amazing part though sad but a very well written part...

Raj really loves naina alot ... Raj is hurt coz of naina...

Alekh is so matured... Liked the part between Raj and Alekh...

Waiting for the next part ...

Thanks for the update...



Thank u so much Dear...I am glad that u liked the part. Raj is really hurt but his friends will be with him now, And what to say Aalekh is always like this..mature and understanding. Thanks for liking the Raj-Aalekh part. Will post the part on Sunday. No Problem Dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome part.
loved it.
continue soon



Thanks Rakhi...will continue soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

awesome update

loved the twist 😉



Thanks a lot Khushi...M glad that u liked the twist in between...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: sweetgirls1

when will you update?????



Sunday evening Dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
thanks i am eager to read it and please kindly add me to your pm list

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