Eternal Soulmates-RN-Note & UD Part-11 on Pg-22 - Page 13

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

part - 9

nnnooo this part made me cry 😭😭😭...how can naina do this to raj she is just playing with raj's feelings for the sake of her own benefit ab jab usne dhoka de hi diya hai to naina ko kyun itna bura lag raha ha ..such an idiot girl😡🤢🤢

chalo naveen ne kuch to kehna shuru kiya🥱🥱🥱 and aalekh did heard the convo of raj and shalini now he can very well understood the situation between raj and naina relationship

and now the whole group of them now know the truth of naina raj and all of them connected to this case...

ab last me ye achcha waala twist laga ki naveen ko raj ne nahi shalini ne shoot kiya tha aur shalini naveen ke baare me sabkuch pehle se hi jaanti thi

ab kam se kam raj ko toh blame nahi kiya jaayega is cheez ke liye😊😊😊

chalo ab jaldi se next part post kar do 😃😃😃

bbbyyyeee

Originally posted by: sweetgirls1

you are an awesome writer i am eagerly waiting for the next part please update soon and please add me to ur pm list and please can you tell me the names of ur previous fics😊

Originally posted by: prerna1

great parts
part sad tha but i think it was according to story demand
plz continue soon and pm me too

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

hhhuuufff...

finally preet i ve commented on all the previous and current parts pls check that😃😃😃 some are on pg 5 and remaining are on pg 9 and 10

shreya😊😊

Originally posted by: danish1

awesome update yaaa.

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Preet

Nice but sad part..👏

Raj is so helpful towards cadets and thats wat amke him popular among them.😊

Naina is trying hard to reach Raj but now he is not showing any interest in her..

I love it when Raj address Nair as Captain..😆😆😆

Raj is not ready to forgive Naina coz he has nothing left now..he only wants to proove Naveen's innocence..😭😭

Sanjana and Alekh both r on Raj's side and this made Naina more guilty..Sanjana is somewat right..when she was angry on Raj she didn't try to fake her emotions.she showed her true feelings unlike Naina who betrayed Raj and broke his trust.

I hope their parents r able to forgive Naina..

Pls continue soon

Bye

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesome update...

Originally posted by: sweetgirls1

awesome update

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

Oh damn...am sorry Preet that u had so much trouble......actually yaha light hide n seek game khel rahi hai hamare sath...and net is super disturbing...isliye zyada OL aa nahi pati...

And yes Suhana Dii...u r ryt...the Ramadan starts today...and that makes me sleep a lil early...😳

Anyways...glad u managed the part Preet!! 😳

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

Sorry yaar...main bhul gayi thi ki maine reserve kiya...and not comment...😆😆

Anyways...coming to the part...Raj is so damn hurt...😭...mujhe uske liye bahuuut bura lagging... U knw u showed his character to be very positive minded...he kept trying all this while...hoping and knowing that his Nia will get back to him someday...but now...he has lost that hope also!! Its really sad to see him so broken from inside...whereas he pretends to be f9 from the outside!!

And that Nair...😡...gadha kahin ka...wat the hell did he think? Wo Raj ko taunt karega!! Useless creature!!😡😡 Achha hua...Raj ne badhiya jawavb de diya...😊

Here Sanjana is super upset wid Naina...and Aalekh agrees to that...umm...even I do...😳...And am glad that Raj is not being a mahatma...and he is upset wid her!!😳😆 Though I knw...baad me sab thik hona hi hai...hai na?😳

And wow...divide and rule...interesting approach hai...😃...and am sure it works the best...😉

Will be w8ing for the next part dear...and advanced sorry for delays in replying!!😳

Sumi. 😳

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

very emotional part but very nice part😭👏😊

raj is always helpful to cadets everytime he always saved all of them from that idiot nair😡 how much he helped the cadets in every drill and assignments

hahaha... nair dreaming dreaming and only dreaming nair ka chehra dekhna hai na jab bhi major shekhawat se jab bhi the captain nair ko jhaad padti hai 👏👏👏

how sad he has na because of naina's lie😭😭😭

undono ke parents ko bhi lagta hai ki kuch gadbad hai unke beech me lekin unlogon ne sab se chupaa liya ab us baat ke liye naina raj se maafi maang rahi hai per raj usko maaf nahi kar pa raha🤢

nice part😊

continue soon 😃

shreya😊