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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
Hiii
Congrats on da ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats !!!!!!!! 4 d new one ...

interesting n sweet concept ...

beautiful update ...

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Thanks for your support guys... hope you will like the next part too... Don't 4gt to comment. 😊
Edited by princess_mimi - 14 years ago
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Hey Guys... thanks for your comments... here is the 1st part... hope you like it...😊

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Part 1:Cinderella Reversed


Cinderella's godmother landed at DelhiAirport. As she came out of the airport she became confused. The whole scenery has changed. She couldn't understand how to go to the HandaMansion and where to catch cab. She was looking here and there suddenly a tall well built handsome man came to her.

"May I help you?" He asked.

She looked at him. "Can you please tell me how to go Janakpuri from here?"

"I'm going there too. I'm gonna drop you there. Come with me." He said.

"Thanks." She smiled at him.

In Car

"Thank you'.." She stopped as she didn't knew his name.

"Maan, Maan Singh Khurana.

He answered with a smile.😊


"Thank you Maan." She smiled. "So you are from Delhi?"

"Hmm. Basically I am. But I was living in UK for last 8years. Now I am gonna stay here." He stopped for a sec. "You are not from here right?"

"No. I'm not."

"So where you from?"

She gulped her saliva.🤢 Actually she herself did not know the answer. Of course she knew the name of her country. "PumpkinLand." But It couldn't be the answer. She had not lied in last 50 years. The habit of lying has gone. She remembered those days when she could speak lie as easily as she can turn a mouse into a horse.

"Uganda." She finally answered.

"Oh!" He smiled.😊

She sighed. She said a lie after 50 years. It should be celebrated. 👏She looked at Maan. Hmm! Such a straight nose, square jaw, deep eyes and such a gentleman. He reminds her of Prince.

Hmm. He would be perfect prince for Geet. She told to herself.

They reached Jankapuri.

"Where are you going?" Maan asked.

"HandaMansion."

"I don't know where it is. Driver?" He turned at driver. Driver nodded. After a few minutes the car stopped behind HandaMansion.

"Thanks a lot." She smiled.

"No problem."

"Sorry you have to come here for me."

"I live in neighborhood. It's Ok."

She smiled and waved him bye.

She looked at the Mansion. It was a large and beautiful mansion. The garden behind it was making it more beautiful. She stepped inside.

Rajendra Handa Geet's dad was sitting on the sofa reading newspaper.

"Rajendra?"

He looked up to see who was it. Seeing her a smile spread on his face.

"Saveetri ji ap?"

"Surprise."

"What a pleasant surprise. Wait a minute." He went near stairs. "Maya'.." He shouted calling someone. "Maya' Come downstairs.. hurry."

"Coming. Wait.." A lady replied.

After a few seconds she came downstairs.

"Saveetri jii' this is my wife Maya. Maya this is Saveetri Devi."

Maya gave her a pleasant smile "I have heard so many things about you."

So this is Geet's step mom.

"I am calling Geet." She called Geet. "Geet come home as soon as possible." She said very sweetly.

Hmm. Now she is showing of in front of me that she loved her. No need to show of. I know how you behave with her. She said to herself .

"Where is Geet?" She asked to Rajendra.

"She went for shopping with her sisters."

Poor girl. Her sisters are making her to carry all the bags. She was really feeling sorry for her.

After a few seconds of chatting suddenly she noticed a old servant became shocked by the sight of cushion cover.🤢

"Who did it? Raju'" He called someone.

A boy came rushing through the door.

"You did it?" The old man asked pointing at the cushions.

"Yes. Why?"😕

"Geet mam told for red covers. I don't know what she would do seeing pink one." The old man panicked. "Change it. Now." He almost shouted.

At the very same moment they heard sound of a car."

"It's Geet." Maya said.

After a few seconds she heard shouting of a girl "What's this? I told for red covers."

She looked back to see who it is. She saw her. It was Geet. She stormed into the dining room followed by her sisters. She was angry. 😡She looked at her dad.

"Dad I told you not to wear this dress." She shouted again.

"You know Geet I told him to change it. But he did not listen." Maya complained her.

Geet turned at her dad "Dad is it true?"

"No Geet. I am just going to change it." He almost ran towards his room.

"Mom" Now she shouted at Maya.

"Geet I told him to change it but'"

"But what? You should make him do that."

"Ok Geet." Maya answered like a obedient kid.

Now she turned at Saveetri Devi.

"Geet this is Saveetri Devi jii." Maya introduced her.

Geet smiled.😃

"Namastey, I have heard so many things about you. Meet my sisters. Pari and Gunjan" She pointed at them.

"Dad told us about you." One of them answered.

Suddenly both of their phone rang.

"Who is it?" Geet asked.

"Samrat." Gunjan answered and blushed.😳"

Geet smiled at her. "Go talk to him." Then she turned at Pari

"Dev." She answered.😳

"Give it to me." Geet said and Pari did not protest.

She picked up the phone. "Dev you better be nice with my sis." She ordered and handed Pari the phone. Pari and Gunjan both left the room.

"You know Saveetri jii'"

"Dadima. Call me dadima. Your mom used to call me aunty.

"Dadima." She smiled. "Gunjan and Pari are my sisters. They are so naive. I have to take care of them. And dad. God! He is so stupid. And mom is too sweet to handle him. I have to take care all of them." She was speaking in one breath.

And then she turned to one servant and shouted, "Hei I told you to keep five yellow roses and one red rose in the vase and you kept five red roses and one yellow rose! huh' how many time I have to tell you that one wrong move in decoration and it can cause visual pollution '😡 see dadima I had to take care of each n everything here, otherwise it will be mess for sure. She sigh.😔

Saveetri Devi was shocked! 😲Oh God! This is Cinderella here? No it can't be. May be they look alike. But she is just opposite of Cinderella. Cinderella was sweet and delicate. And this girl' Uff! She is just dangerous. Is there any one who can handle her? Oh God! Now where do I find her prince?????

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Next Chapter: Maan in Disney Land


Edited by princess_mimi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is really good :) I did not see the whole 'geet being the opposite of cinderella' at all.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hahaha lol.. omg.. nice one hun.. continue soon.. i love this cinderella.. lol..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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super part
love it
cont soon
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh this cinderella is so different...but i like her...cont soon.
Thnks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww i really loved it just remembering childhood days😊

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