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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
khub sweet...2 to story e...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey sherya 😊
awesome update . 👏
dev & samrat have to take permission from geet 😭to date pari & gunjan.😆
bechara maan 😭his house turned into disney land .😆
perfect . looking for maaneet meeting .
thanx for pm


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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh finally...they r going to meet...jaldi please...update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great update! can't wait for Maan and Geet to meet :))
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely update!!!
That ziddi bacchi had converted KM into Doll house.
ahh Maan got the shock of is life...
just cant wait their meeting...
continue soon
thanks for pm:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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super cool... n d decor s going perfect sissy.. go on...spcly geet is fabulous,❤️ n as usual maan is our hero😳... dev r samrat r just perfect👏post updt sooonnn
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Part 3: Jab They Met


Finally Maan changed the decoration of the house. It was a relief to see a normal house. Maan was going to office when he found Dev was going outside too.

"Hey bro. Going to office?" He asked.

"Hm. But I thought you left for college with Samrat."

"I did. But I forgot Pari told me to wear yellow tee shirt and I forgot then she complained Geet. And"

"Geet scholded you." Maan cut him.😆

"Hmm. Literally scolded me. Pyaar ka side effect no 1. you have to tolerate scolding of girl friend's elder sister."😊

"You should be happy Geet is her elder sister not elder bro. Ziddi bachi."

"Well I have invited them over a lunch tomorrow. Try to stay. Bye." He left.

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Next day

Samrat and Dev were waiting for Gunjan, Pari and Geet. Suddenly they heared sound of a car's horn. They came outside. It was Geet's pink Beetdle.



"So Dev.. your bro is as stupid as you or stupider than you?" Geet asked.

"You will see." Dev replied.😛

They entered KhuranaMansion.

"So where is Maan Bhai." Gunjan asked.

"He went to office for some important work he will be back soon." Samrat answered.

"Ok. So lets see a movie." Pari suggested.

"Good idea." Samrat said. "I'm coming back with popcorn."

They started to play 'Dil' coz Geet wanted to watch an old Aamir Khan movie.

Suddenly Geet noticed something. Which turned her upside down. The dining room was not pink anymore.

"What happened with the room?" She was in shock.😲

"Maan bhai changed the decor." Dev replied.

Geet ran upstairs to see the others rooms. At first she saw Samrat's room.

Then Dev's

finally to Maan's room.

But everything was changed. The rooms were so wired.

Geet came downstairs and sat next to them. They were watching the movie with full attention so they did not notice how shock and angey Geet was. She was thinking who the dust danav is who changed the perfect decoration.😡

After a few minutes Maan reached the home and found them watching movie.

"Hey guys." Maan said. They turned at Maan. "You must be Pari."

"Hello." Pari said.

"And you Gunjan."

"Hi Maan bhai." She replied.

He turned at Geet

" And you Gee'" he could not finished

"So you are the one who turned this house into a ward of hospital. White white every where white." She spoke in a breath.😡

"Geet it was a doll house before." Maan said very sweetly though he started to loose his temper. None ever said anything against what he did.

"So what it was beautiful. Why guys hate all beautiful things. You know I knew guys are stupid but you are the stupidest guy on the earth." She kept her hands on her waist and looked at Maan with angry eyes.😡

A song started to play in the movie.

khambe Jaisi Khadi Hai Ladaki Hai Ya Chhadi Hai

Shola Hai Phooljhadi Hai Pattakhe Ki Ladi Hai

Aankhon Mein Ghussa Hai Labon Pe Gaali Hai

Dekho Jara Dekhjo Yaaron Khudako Samajhati Hai Kya

"Geet grow up. Don't act like a ziddi bachi."

Bachi? He called her bachi? None call Geet Handa bachi. Well he is handsome but uff so nossy, so khadus.

"Really? I'm ziddi bachi. So what are you? Khadus budha?"😡

Khadus budha? The girl just call him budha? Seriously she has got gut. Well she is beautiful but uff she is s nossy.

"Geet' "

"What? As I said all guys are stupid and you are the stupidest guy."

"Hmm.. Sure. I am the stupiedest guy. And all girls are smart you are the one and only dumbo girl on this earth."😡

gora Gora Ye Badan Bijali Se Bana

440 Volt Hain Chhuna Hai Mana

Isase Tum Takraao Na Janake Jaan Gavaayon Na

Others were not paying attention to the movie. All were interested in the live movie. The background music was making it funnier.

"Oh man! I have never seen a film so funny before." Samrat said.

"Shut up! Let me here the dialogues." Pari replied.

They could just hear Maan and Geet were shouting on each other. After sometime it seems to sound like Donald Duck's voice. None was ready to give up.

"Chukkk'.. Chuuukkk." Maan and Geet stopped for a moment and noticed others are watching them and trying to soak the last bit of their cold drinks.

"Hey! Why did you guys stopped? Go ahead." Dev said.

"Shut up." Maan and Geet shouted together.

They looked at each other angrily and turned their gaze at opposite direction.😡

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Hey gals.. how was it??? n wat do u thnk which decor was bttr? Geet's or Maan's????😃😆


Edited by princess_mimi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
LOL that was so funny
omg i LOVEEE Geet's pink buggy i want one just like that!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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for taking me back to my childhood...

Originally posted by: princess_mimi

"So Dev.. your bro is as stupid as you or stupider than you?" Geet asked.

STUPIDER...poor maan
Loved the concept
personally i Love geet's decore
Savetri devi got the shock of her life to c the Cindrella

You did Job...

Cont soon... will be waiting😍

khambe Jaisi Khadi Hai Ladaki Hai Ya Chhadi Hai

Shola Hai Phooljhadi Hai Pattakhe Ki Ladi Hai

Aankhon Mein Ghussa Hai Labon Pe Gaali Hai

Dekho Jara Dekhjo Yaaron Khudako Samajhati Hai Kya



Edited by Speechless - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
awesome ... funny ... perfect song ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

i actually liked the new decor ... it was perfect ...

longr updates plzzz ...
Edited by maaneetsangel - 14 years ago

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