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Posted: 14 years ago

Lovely update as always….. poor geet ,really feeling bad for her….….but sorry..I am not able to understand this maan ….we know a little bit about geet's past….but what about maan??????????we just know he had come here for revenge,,,, but for what??how he knows brij ,rano from before is not clear yet...I think some flash back is needed from maan's end now...

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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG... superb awesome... finished reading this ff as well... mind blowing fire too good must say... pls continue soon when r u updating remorse n animosity eagerly waiting for it... pls add me to ur pm list i love all ur ffs... take care...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome updates plzz cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry if i hurt you 2 but this is my POV..

this one is nothing like remorse. remorse is completely different story where it deals with regreat and hatred. remorse maan, had some feeling for geet as they grown up together (there are already some type of relationship) but here in Immoral world, they barely know one another.
maan is a stranger, a strange husband who is very confused, he have nothing to regret as he have his own reason to be like this. some people are naturally like this, manipulative, they does wrong with no intention, and they also have no capability to understand.

you have to look from maans POV, he have no clue where is hs brother.. his sister have been cheated, he have some weird past fight with handas which we have no clue about yet, we basically know nothing, from where i see he is perfectly right at his place, nothing to regreat at all.

sorry again

but this one is nothing like remorse.






Originally posted by: love4all



yes i am also with u please no more remorse
please kameya no remorse 😭

please juldi kro maan ko uski feeling sumjhany mn
kehein phir se bohat der na ho jaye us k liye
geet is innocent so please uski innocence kabhi khatam na krna
show mn b sub sad sad chal raha he
yahan per or sad mat karo
we want rano and brij punishment
not want to see poor geet suffer more
please kisi tarah maan ko aqal do k
he loves geet not hate its not good for their rlationship
he is mature he has to understand geet
please its a request no mare remorse please please

keep updating us with ur lovely updates
sorry if my words hurt anyone
i really dont want to hurt anyone
its my POV
love u
bye

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Posted: 14 years ago
UPDATING :)

X 2 :D

xxx



thanks for all the love & support

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey keya's gone offline!!!!🥺
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry if i hurt you 2 but this is my POV..

this one is nothing like remorse. remorse is completely different story where it deals with regreat and hatred. remorse maan, had some feeling for geet as they grown up together (there are already some type of relationship) but here in Immoral world, they barely know one another.
maan is a stranger, a strange husband who is very confused, he have nothing to regret as he have his own reason to be like this. some people are naturally like this, manipulative, they does wrong with no intention, and they also have no capability to understand.

you have to look from maans POV, he have no clue where is hs brother.. his sister have been cheated, he have some weird past fight with handas which we have no clue about yet, we basically know nothing, from where i see he is perfectly right at his place, nothing to regreat at all.

sorry again

but this one is nothing like remorse.


@rimimaan

I completely agree with you. After reading her comment I was also looking for some similarity but it's very different.
We have to understand maans POV
As well.
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update...loved it!!
but not liking this Maan at all :((
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Posted: 14 years ago
Immoral WORLD
Part 18





The thunder claimed the morning. Maans one glance outside warned him to beware of the storm. His finger straggled with the button, unable to put it in it's place. He wondered how lazy he became. For past 3 weeks even without a sound or may be a simple request geet have been doing it. He was just anticipating to see her milky finger to come along and do it like a robot.
His guess was not far off when he hard the door Handel click open and geet walks in. Her usual word was about to come out. Maan mocked. "sorry!"
"sorry" geet murmured under her breath. "I was making your breakfast." she observes maans careless eyes. Her eyes caught glimpse of his head turning back at the mirror. She slowly makes her way towards him. There was certain urge from her leg to hurry but there was her heart caries for fear of his confusing anger. It never had fixe time, it's always hard to guess when he is exactly in a mood of love or in indignation. Her body stood behind him like a statue. Hesitating to go forward and actually help but nevertheless it will happen it's just her courage. No sound was coming out of his lips to let her start, he stood there barely giving geet any attention. She kept pulling her hand up, almost holding his arm but again stopping her self. It went on for few minute until maan eventually gives her a strange glare. She uncomfortably smiled. There was always some unaccountable emotion. It's confusing for her.
"what are you waiting for?" he eventually gives up and raises his voice. This girl was indeed unimaginable.
"let me do it!" she quickly rush in front of him fixing his button. Maan observed her milky finger. It's shaking. There should not be any fear! At least for now. He slowly with his thumb strokes the flesh. Her reflex instantly tells her to snap her hand way but maan was to quick for her. He reaped and crashed her hand in his palm. Brown almond eyes looked at him in fear, a thin layer of tear like a glass glittered on both of her eyes. Her lips flutter to speak out some words but in vain it feared his action. She twist and turn in order to free her hand. It failed unimaginably. He is very strong and aggressive. The refusal from her side he did not approve. His strong body twisted her round and held her against one of the nearby pillar. His body rests on top. She dare not ask question. She feared what answer may come out of his mouth. In small fraction second he picks her up and walks towards the bed. Creasing her cheek. His tongue licked then flowed by his smooth lips.
"ap... Someone will come." she breath heavily. Melting with his seductive eyes. She sensed his hand manipulating her inner desire. He sat over her gazing with his dark brown eyes. Almost engulfing. She feared what those desire may lead them to. She breath hard. The mere thunder and the rain was nothing against there rapid unstoppable heart beat. A small smile became visible at corner of his face. Then geets eyes watched his hand pulling her pants string. The long muscular hand came down as his finger dropped the string. Then from her heaps to the bare stomach then to her breast his hand squeezed fondly. He teared her top off. Geet laid there silent. Words not leaving her mouth in surprise. His body came down further unbuckling his trouser & penetrating in her body. Her mouth let's out a slight moan and in reflux her hand tries to hold him but in return his one hand forcefully holds them over her head while another strokes her hard buds. her eye leads closed. Feeling the phenomenon of his magical fingers. The agitation of there body started to arouse there inner desire. She fought to free her hand. Straggled. Her hard work was ineffective. Twisting her leg around his half nude body...

After few minute he stopped. Observing her red cheek. Sweating. His heavy cool breathe acted as a fan over her cheek. Soothing her. She gulp every bit of her saliva. Resting her thirst. They observed one anther's eyes for a while. Trying to read something that's not there.
"i should go!" he spoke between his navy breath. She nodes like good riddance, because one more time she won't be able to leave the bed again... But anew there was a urge from her heart that she wanted to relax in his arm.

She sits up as maan moved next to her. A huge red Mark on her wrist from his firm strong hold. She sighed taking the spread from the side. While maan puts his trouser back on... Stained bed, another additional work.
A sudden knock made them jump.

"geet beta!" rano sweetly calls her from other side of the door. now that came as shocking along with surprise. Somewhere maans head clicked instantly while geet could only think about to put some cloths on.

Maan opens the door. He gave out a forceful smile.
"have you done the work brij have left you?" rano wonders. Maan gives out a uncomfortable smile and nodes and walks off.
Geet quickly removes the bed cover replacing with a new one.


next-?

soxy for delay, i am like hell tired. have been very busy with collage

stuff... so sorry... but here you go.. another coming up :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
Yayy me first
Passionate update
Maan just loves playing around wiv geet...he jut does wat he feels lyk to her
Urge hate that rano..she makes me sick!!
Wonder wats next
You don't need to update all at once...take some rest them you can update the second part
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Cont soon Xx...
Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago

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