-Immoral WORLD-THREAD 2-

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~Immoral WORLD~

Part 16




The heavy rain thumped on the floor, maan sat there silently holding two different folder. He wondered which one to choose! Marriage certificate or property paper. He really did not like the sound of either! But dev was no where to be found! He snapped at the both folder. Stood up. Crossing his arm looking at the heavy rain. Breathing in fresh air. He needs to think of a new plan... His thought seems to love playing tricks! One after another, leaving him in confusion. Leaving him no where. Answer, a very big answer lacking in his life. He came with one plan but now he seems to lose track. He took few more deep breath to be safe! Just in case something els plays with his mind.


Rano "I am not liking this geets natunki!" she sat in the hall. Angry with geets attitude. She could not stand her at all.
Brij "don't worry! One more week! We will surly will do something to bring those property in our name!"
Rano "yes! I know! But when?"
Brij "soon as she turn 18!"
Rano "18! 18! And uff 18! I am fed up!"
Brij "have patient mother."

Rano "you better be correct brij, because we have done many thing for this property..." she walked round a big White base which trapped few bunch of black Rose.

She have done many things for these property. Married this old mr Handa, planned the murder! And what not... Where she was few years back and now, one of the richest in India! But still she needs that filthy geets permission to use a penny. She slowly took a long beautiful black Rose and crashed it against her hand. Breathing hard. "I will not leave anything. Not for that little psky geet & that husband of hers!"
Brij "you don't have to worry about him! He lives under me. I gave him a job, gave him my so call sister! His life have improved! He will not dare cross his level!
Rano "just make sure he knows nothing about this property! He is human after all!"
Brij "of he does! Do you think I will leave him alive! Any way he is a mere man! That's why I have choose him to get married with her! So no one els, wiser becomes her husband. We required someone who we can control! Not someone who..."
Rano "enough! Now think about geets signature. On her birthday I want those property paper signed!"
Brij "everything is planned! You don't worry!"

Maan slowly walks in. Drenched in the rain. Brij looks at him, wondering where he have been!
Brij "where have you been?"
Maan "oh town sir! Remember you have told me to finish that job!"
Brij "oh yes! Anyway go and sleep! I have plenty more work for you 2 Moro!"
Maan "yes sir!"

Red bangles. She smiles and takes them off! It's been almost 3 weeks since her marriage! But still she feels so much love yet not close to his heart. He always did leave her confused. One moment he was loving her another moment he would almost abuse her! Split personality. He left her confused. Very confused. She really does wonder sometime what plays in his brain. The door thud opens. She jumps...
Geet "oh you are here! I was waiting for you the whole day!" she smiled. Maan wondered what's so exiting about seeing him! He could not understand how she could be normal after all this? What he have not done? He came home drank! Left her out in the rain! Scream, shouting at her yet, here she is all cheery like we are some lovey couple! The amusement almost made him laugh in anger but he suppressed! Because it's not suppose to be like that! No! Not at all!
He walks towards her slowly, "what makes you feel exited geet?" he asked in firm voice!
Geet "what are you talking about, she slowly gave a little smile...
Maan "why are you smiling?" his voice suddenly became stronger... The smile vanished from her face. She knew well this is the maan, bad maan. He is making her confuse again... His hand slowly traced her cheek, then just below her lips... He observed her lips for a while then he slowly looks at her eyes.
She could observe the different look! This was something new...
Maan "what are you thinking? Are there anything you did not do with me!... You don't fear- me! Do you?" she lost her balance for a while. Leaning back at the dressing table. Her shivering hand accidentally touched the perfume bottle smashing it to the hard floor. She jumped while maan held his ground, the frozen look on her eyes. She blinked, looking at from one place to another then back at his eyes. He was mere incise way. His voice was almost a whisper with a complete different element added to it...
Geet "ap-... A-p! " she took a deep breath. "why are you talking like this?" she tried to hug him, tried to hide her self in his embrace, there was fear yet he was the one soothing.
That somewhere did push maan to the edge! He freed him self and within a second he smashed her against the mirror. She screamed! A silent scream. He tilled his head to the right observing her shivering lips, now that's more like it. Maybe the approach of his somewhere was wrong he concludes.
Maan "why are you shivering?" her teary eyes quiver with his ogling.
Geet "ap aisa ku...!" she barely could finish when he forcefully pushes her hard against the wall and he steps back at the same time. A small scummy sneer showed up at maans face. He found his way. Her eyes looked at him questingly, asking the same question, was she at fault?
Abruptly he melts with her eyes. His facial expression change in to sympathy, he comes close. Gently cupping her face... "what's wrong? I thought your eyes only knows how to love me! Then why so much demand? Why so much pain? Have I heart you? Have I touched you?" she became more confused with the question! What was he? Who is he? In one moment he will show love and in another there was so much resentment! What's my fault?

The shock of her husband made her dizzy, a sudden sickness covered her body, her breathing became heavy and she ran towards the toilet. Maan looks at her curiously. She was not sick any more! Then why this?

Maan flowed her trail. He stood by the door seeing her sick. Again he forgot about his annoyance with her naive attitude. He almost went in to help yet stopped his desire. "are you alright?" he asked ! It wasn't a loving husband voice or concern voice! It was rather like a stranger!
Geet "please ape javo! Ham bilkul tik hay!"
Maan looks at her again and closes the door. Somewhere a weird feeling started to play in his mind. He looks at the door again in concern! But suppress him self completely... He knocked.
Geet "I am alright!" she shouts across the other side of the door! Maan did not bother after that, brij came and knocked on there door. He took a towel from the side and quickly dried his hair and changed his close.
Brij "I am going out! I want you to finish the job I have told you early 2moro morning!" maan nodes! & brij disappears!

He did over hear the famous conversation between the mother and the son! Property! A big reason behind this marriage... But yet he was now in dilemma where there to take it or not! A big question have raised right in front of him again, yet no answer to him self.

Geet opens the door. Drying her face with a towel. She looked at maan, twice but hurriedly removed her gaze. The way he spoke today! Something was different about him, very different! She sat in front of the mirror. Maans gaze was still on her... That's what geet have thought. The real reason was something completely different, he was more concern where brij was exactly going now!

Geet quickly prepared her self for the bed. Not understanding his exact intention. She still couldn't think outside of the box. Still spoke quietly, sometime open, with maans influence yet closes her self instantly when he shows his anger... Always wondering what's playing in his mind.



next- ?

hay sorry you all... i know many of you have many question

please do ask way.. i will try my best to answer...

thanks for all the love & support...

& sorry for delay.. have been working all day :( and now 1 midnight.. me so tired... + had some doubt with the story track.. the way i was taking.. so had word with fanoo8 ... he helped me allot..

a special thank you :)

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