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Posted: 14 years ago
Immoral WORLD
Part 19


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Maan opens the door. He gave out a forceful smile.
"have you done the work brij have left you?" rano wonders. Maan gives out a uncomfortable smile and nodes and walks off.
Geet quickly removes the bed cover replacing with a new one.
"is everything Alright beta?" rano again asked sweetly. This something was very weird. She nodes and smiles. This is some new gave she was seeing. Geets mind wondered have she Really accepted her as a daughter.
"hame tik hi!" geets voice was barely hearable. Rano had to do some extra work to capture the words.
"what happen to your hand?" she asked worriedly by observing a red Mark on geets hand. It was turning blue. Geet panicked for few fraction of second, what to say now? Why this is red. Ae maan bhi na! She makes a face, trying to figure out something! How to hide?
"I was taking off some bangle and it hurt me!" she smiles. A force full smile.
"you should look after your self na, beta!" rano sounded more concern. Like she care for geet so much. Chamily stood at the back hearing everything. When exactly have this dian lady turned angel. There must be something cooking.

Geet smiled and felt the love with her concern. Rano took some medication and applied on her hand.

On the other hand maan was asking some villager question about a non district man. Manipulating brij worker and close friends, asking about his sister then his brother... But in vain nun knew anything. His frustration only became to it's limits. What ells he suppose to do. It's been over a month! Nothing have been discovered by the detective or him self. This brij was very cleaver then he presumed. He was expert in hiding stuff. Specially his bad deed. Anni gives maan a call.

"hello" annis voice spoke. It's been long time since she had a chart with his brother. They have been forced to go to London, but now she is settling in very well.
"anni! Is everything alright?". Maan asked with concern. This is his family & for there love he is willing to do anything. Everything. Somewhere its also his fault. If he wasn't in England and stairs here with in India with them, maybe nothing like this was ought to happen! Anyway, it's too late. He consoled him self.
"when are we allowed to come back?" she wondered.
"not now. Everything is in mess here." he replied thinking about geet. "I will tell you when to come back. Soon as this matter saluted."
"sorry bro!" anni murmured. Crying. "it's all my fault. We still have no idea about dev bhi!"
"you don't worry. I am here to do that for you." maan smiled and hang up. The heavy rain was on it's way and he needs to be back home before the sun disappear.

Geets mind was full of happiness today. She smiled, sang & what not. Maan have not been cruel and rano on top was like a angel with her. She smiled. Her eyes caught some pickle on the side. There was a urge of eating some weirdly. She already have been sick twice since morning. Geet starts to lick some. Chamily walks in. Geet showed her little angry face and goes back to her cooking.
"you eating pickle?" Chamily asked with suspect. That's unusual. She was enjoying it to.
"yes! So!" geets answer again was filled with ruddiness. "i felt like eating some!"
"how long this feeling have been there for? I never seen you near a pickle jar before!" chamily taunt.
"alright! Alright! Are you done with your detective? Can I enjoy my pickle now?" chamily again looked at her in shock. Geet hurriedly finished cooking, taking the jar along with her in the room. She took her seat next to the door. Watching the rain and enjoying her pickle. Maan walks in. Locking the door behind. He rips his shirt off frustrated as he did not get what was he looking for. All he wants is find his brother!
His eyes went to geet. Eating pickle. Last thing he wants to here is that she is pregnant! But it's only been like 3 weeks! Pregnancy hormone does not hit that early.
"I need my dry cloths! Geet nodes and quickly grabs it from the wardrobe. Giving him the towel and cloths. Watching him disappear in the bathroom.
She again went back to her pickle. Enjoying, yet the fear already became visible as maan is round now. He did not seem that happy. She was scared.

Maan walks out. Drying his hair. Geet was already missing, she may have gone to fetch his dinner. He walks down. House again empty. He wondered where this selfish people are?
"where is everyone?" maan wondered. Looking around.
"chamily went to see someone and rano mom, I really don't know!" maan suspect some fishy business



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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update dear wounder wat rano is upto
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Posted: 14 years ago
great parts...what is rano upto?...talking sweetly with geet...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr8 update
Wonder wat this cHudail wants
Hope maan doesn't kill the unborn child...
Cont soon Xx...
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Posted: 14 years ago
both the parts were awesome.. .and geet is pregnant... and its dev child?????????
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing part.
Very well written.
Thank you
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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet pregnant...!!! N it is dev's child...oh no...m scared what will maan do once he comes to know abt all this...
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Posted: 14 years ago
is geet pregnant with dev's child???
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
so atlast u have made geet pregnant with dev 's child i hate u for that😡 how could u do that
leave it coming to the update it was a n awesome update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome updates... loved both the parts

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