Maaneet FF-Love is nothing but pain-part 23-update - Page 49

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thank you dear...amazing update...but still confused...does Maan believe Geet cheated him or not
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awesome update...i loved jealous maan...please make him a little more jealous and the gang is doing so well to bring maneet together..now arnav is also involved and so is little riya...i hope their plan works and please make maan a little more jealous...i want to see his possessive passionate side for geet...looking forward to the next part...continue soon please cant wait...


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wow Awesome update do con soon :)
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Loved Arnav's entry! The rapport shared by him with Geet and Riya was awesome. Maan's jealousy was also something to watch! Good post! Continue soon!
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lovely...

loved J maan...

continue soon...

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Part 19:
The party was in full swing...Arnav came up to Geet and held out his hand;'Would you do me this honour by giving me this dance?'
G-Classy...but I remeber there was this rule
But before she could complete Arnav grabbed her hand and said;'I will have this dance by hook or by crook ' and winked at her...Geet chuckled as she said;'Okay..can you repeat the action
so I can accept and we can dance properly?'
A-Ermm...Geetu meina socha ke...
G-Arny stop all this 'NATAK' now...I know it... you want to dance with me...so you have to ask me again!!
A-And why is that?There are many girls willing to dance with me..
G-Exactly my point...I am the only one not willing plus the only one you've never danced with right?
A-No...
Geet arched her eyebrows and Arnav looked at her meekly
A-Yeah you caught me..I mean every time I asked you..you refused...come on now..this is the last time..im asking..you have to say Yes...pleasee..
G-Why should I dance with a stranger?
A-If Im a stranger then I dont know who Yash and Rahul are?
G-What do you mean by that?
A-Im sure..you dont want me to remind you about the time when I walked...Geet's face flushed up..as a blush seeped through her cheeks...and
she put her hand over his mouth and said:'That was an accident..'
A-But I still know a lot about you..Ms.Nataunki'
G-Mr.All-I-Ever-Do-Is-Frown...
A-I.DO.NOT
G-YOU.SO.DO
A-I.SMILE
G-IM.TALKING.ABOUT.BEFORE.YOU.LEARNED.TO
.SMILE
A-I KNEW HOW TO SMILE..
G-DID NOT
A-DID TO
G-DID NOT
A-THAT DAY WHEN YOU WERE IN THE ROOM...
Geet put her hand on his mouth once again and said:'Shutup..thats between you and me..and stop blackmailing me..stuff like that happens...'
A-Does not
G-You wanna dance or not?
A-Fine...come on lets go and dance..
G-Ask me formally...
A-Excuse me?I only ask once..you should be grateful Im dancing with you..
G-Ask me...
A-Geeetttuuu...
G-ARNNNYYY...
People turned to look at them and Arnav glared at Geet while she smirked...
A-Shut up Geet..will you?I have a reputation here..people know me as Mr.Arnav...
G-Singh Raizada..yadddiiee yaddie yaaa..blah blah...thats it?You're famous ASR speech??For me you're my Arny...and I dont care how people know you..
Arnav smirked as he said:'So im you'rs haan?
G-Shutup..dont think you're so royal Arny...
A-What is this..koi Arny oh koi Arnuu...my name is ARNAV
G-Get over it...and lets dance...ask me formally
Arnav put his hands up and said:'Fine you win..i give up..'
G-Like always
And he did the same as before and this time Geet sliped her hand in his outstrectched one...Geet's happiness knew no bounds..she felt complete with her friends family and the man she loved
was here with them..her daughter was happy with him and even her eyes lit up when she had seen him in the suit..he looked as good as ever..Geet knew that whatever
happened everytime she saw him she would get butterflies in her tummy and he would always look like a casanova
..even though..then she thought:'Why am I cribbing I should enjoy this dance'..and she got emmersed in the dance...unaware that someone was
watching them with very intent eyes ...

Maan watched as Arnav put his hand on Geet's waist and lead her to the dance floor...he went and sat by the bar and 'ordered a drink' while..watching the two dance..'he gulped the drink down'
..he saw Geet put her arms...'he drank another drink'...around Arnav's neck...he saw Arnav's arms go around...'he drank another drink'
her waist...he saw them both swaying to the music...'he chugged another one'..he saw Arnav whisper something in her ear..'he drank another one'...he saw her throw
her head back and laugh..'he drank another one'..His heart rippling with jealously...he hadnt seen Geet this happy ever...he felt the urge to kill the guy...and the guy
who had the ability to make her laugh was a threat for sure...so forgetting all grudges..he walked towards them and asked in a disturbed tone;'May I have a dance?'

Geet stood there dumb-founded with her arms around Arnav's neck...she looked at Maan..and saw blazing anger in them...she didnt understand why he would want to dance with her
she heard Arnav say something probably a sure why not...and she saw him leave her...then she felt Maan grab her waist harsly...and slip his fingers through hers and spin her
slowly the shock wore off and anger took place...she hissed in his ear:'Leave me NOW'...He smirked and said:'You want to create a scene?'
G-Maan you're getting on my nerves..I dont want to dance with you...
M-Looks like you have no choice
And with that he pulled her closer and started dancing around...Soon Geet forgot everything as she began to enjoy the dance...she cooled down and enjoyed the dance...

Maan was beaming with happiness...he never thought he would ever be dancing with Geet again..but here he was doing exactly that...and it was a moment of immense bliss
for him..he was in his own little heaven..where only he and she existed but to his dislike the moment was short lived..as the famous 'Arnav' butted in and said:'I guess
I can have my turn back?'
And Geet without hesitating left his hand and slipped it into Arnav's...and all Maan could do was gape as Arnav and Geet continued their dance...


**Arnav's POV**
I saw the change in Maan's expression as they changed from anger to jealously..I felt the urge to laugh out and tell the poor guy that Geet was only his but what could
I do...A little fun..didnt harm anyone?..And if I didnt know Geet better..I would actually tell her and Maan everything..but their sky high ego's were the problem...so
without hurting their ego's..they had to realize how much they love each other..and thats where I come in..leaving my lady love aside..I decided to help my first true
friend...yes Geet is my first true friend...Okay Im being dramatic right?But thats true...A little bit of Geet and a lot of Khushi bought back the Arnav that had got lost...
so I owed Geet a favour now didnt I?Thats why I was repaying..but leaving all that aside...I still would help as I witnessed the pain she went through and the weakness
that had once over-come her..that is one terrible memory..but along all of this..I still dont get who's fault it is...I mean if you listen to Geet...she looks right..
but then when you see it from Maan's point..even he's right..so I came up with the conclusion that both of them are at fault...anyways..leaving all that and coming
back to my plan..which is 're-unite these lovers'...who's love story is a living example..Okay Okay being dramatic again right?Well..its me...but I know that they love each other
to no extents...and they want to be with each other..but they dont want to accept it...and I hear Geet talking about something in the background but Im too
immeresed in my thoughts...as I was saying they love each other deeply..but their freaking EGO'S...Okay let me get the second part of my plan in action before Maan kills me..
I can feel it in his eyes...he would like no better then to kill me right now..Okay enough..back to my plan..
Me-Geet..looked like you were having fun with Maan?
I saw her eyes darken and face flush up...I had a strong urge to laugh again as she stammered:'No..that was just...'
Me-Its okay..Geet do you still care about him?
G-No..he's just..I noticed the dreamy look in her eyes and smiled...
Me-Just?
G-Strangers...
Me-Then why is he here?
G-He's just a Riya's father...
Me-If he was just that..why were you dancing with him and you wouldnt have seeked his help with Riya...
G-How did you know about that?
Me-Khushi told me...
I saw her eyes widen as she asked:'Everything?'
I arched my eye-brows as I asked:'What do you mean by everthing?'
Geet looked down as I saw her cheeks heat up...I smirked...ofcourse Khushi had told me everything...even the kiss...but i was not going to tell that to her...
Me-She just told me that Brij kidnapped her and Maan helped her...
G-Oh...I saw calmness spread over her face...
Me-That was because you still trust and care about him...
G-Noo..I dont
Me-Okay...as you wish
But I saw the look of doubt pass through her eyes...and smirked...my plan was working...and I looked over at Rahul and winked at him...
Me-Geetu,I was thinking we go out somewhere...
G-Out?Where?
Me-I mean on a road-trip kinda thing..we havent had one in ages...all of us..it'll be fun...
G-Where?
Me-Its a surprise...
G-Okay...who all are coming?
Me-All of us...including Riya ofcourse...
G-Obviously.
Me-It'll be fun right?
G-Yes I need to get away from this place..
I smirked my plan had worked...and Mission Maaneet was ready for phase 2
**End of Arnav's POV**

**Rahul's POV**
Okay..I tried soothing my nerves as I got the signal from Arnav..urghhh..why did I have to talk with Maan..and that too when he was in such a bad mood...just
by looking at his eyes...I knew he would just kill anyone who came in his way..I just prayed that person was not me...as I was walking towards him..I spotted Khushi
standing there...I smirked as a plan of my own started making its way..in my mind..taking a detour I walked towards Khushi first with pleading eyes..
Me-Yaar please accompany me...
K-Where?
Me-To talk to Maan...
K-Why?
Me-He's in a foul mood...seeing your lover boy dance around with his girl...
K-You cant do this much for your best-friend...
Me-Not if I have to face the wrath of Mr.Maan Singh Khurana...
K-Okay scary pants...lets go!
I smiled as I saw her walking with me...ah..now it would be easier to handle Maan now...I just hoped that God was in with me so crossing my fingers I walked towards Maan
and said a meeky Hi...
**End of Rahul's POV**

**Khushi's POV**
I groaned as we walked towards Maan..it would be difficult to get him in the trap...but following the idea that he would do anything in his anger...we tried to check
our luck...but seriously...Maan was a scary person..not ever having met him personally but hearing from what the others said he sounded like one and today I would find that out
As I passed I caught a glimpse of Arnav staring at me...I winked at him and he winked back...I mouthed him to stare at Geet as Maan was watching..he just chuckled...
making Geet smile..and this was all that I wanted...I went and sat beside Maan
Me-Hey Maan..
Maan looked at me and said:'Who are you?'
I stammered:'Ermmm...me..'
I looked at Rahul and he encouraged me by giving me the look..as if it was any use...because Maan looked ready to kill and his voice...I cleare my throat bracing myself
cursing Arnav as well..as he was the one who got the easy part..to woe Geet in the plan and make Maan jealous...and what did we get...get Maan to come on the trip
huh..like that was ever going to happen..okay getting back to Maan..I replied in the strongest voice possible:'Khushi...Geet's friend..'
And all I got was a grunt for him..and closing my eyes and remembering Devi Maiyya as I knew we had a long night ahead of us...convincing Maan wouldnt be as easy
as it looked...well it didnt even look easy..but whatever..I started preparing myself for alot of talking...
**End of Khushi's POV**

**Arjun POV**
I watched as Khushi and Rahul were talking to bro...and Arnav and Geet dancing..man i thought they danced really well..but it had been a really long time and they were
still dancing...they didnt get tired..did they?
Anyways...I turned around when I heard Arohi call me..As I did..I saw her walk towards me and drag me to a secluded room..I smiled as she closed the door...I felt
all my worries leave me as I pulled her in my arms and asked her:'So what are you up to?'
A-Im not in the mood for all this Arjun...Im worried about Maan bhai and Di...
Me-Arohi chill..we're all there right?
A-Yeah but..
Me-Plus our part is not there yet..we play cupids on the road trip...
I saw her nervous-ness...and knew something else was bothering her..so leaving all other thoughts I seriosuly asked:'Whats the problem Arohi?'
A-Arjun woh..we still have to tell them about us...
I relaxed..oh so this was what she was worried about...well I was worried too..firstly coz I didnt want to be beaten by bro and Geet both...secondly coz I still didnt like
getting beaten up!!
Me-Arohi chill..we'll tell them once..there own problems are solved...
A-Pakka?
Me-Pakka..
and I bend down to kiss her but I didnt know that one kiss would turn out to be a nightmare...the kiss got deeper...and it was getting intenser too when I heard
a huge scream of:'OMG'...I broke the kiss and looked ahead of me and staring at me with anger evident in her eyes was none other than Geet..I gulped as I whispered
a cheeky 'Hey' to her...
**End of Arjun's POV**

**Geets POV**
So I got tired of dancing and decided to take a break and have a check on Riya who if I believed Arnav was happily sleeping in bed..but I had my doubts...and as always
I was correct..as I entered her room..I found it empty...so I decided to check my own room but rather than finding Riya...I see my sister and the person I hate
Arjun MAKING OUT IN MY ROOM...fury erupted inside me...I couldnt believe it...I was sure that Arjun had somehow trapped Arohi..after all poor girl..she didnt
know these Khurana's and their sweet talks..could lure anybody..But I was not letting that happen to my sister...an OMG escaped my lips and I saw them break apart
and Arjun look at me guiltily and whisper a Hey and I giving both of them the glare that would make knees shake said:'What the hell is happening here?'
Arohi plucked up the courage as she said to me:'Di...I can explain...'
I arched my eyebrows and folded my arms and said one word:'Explain'
I saw doubt go through there eyes...and smirked inwardly what did they think I was 15?
And so Arohi began the story...and I listened and at the end I said one line:'I'll think over it'
I glared at Arjun indicating him to leave and him being the smart guy turned on his heels and left...and then I looked at Arohi...and even I cant believe it but I smiled...
as I said:'Pagli..you should have told me this before..'
I saw the disbelief on her face..but I knew that Arjun wasnt a bad guy..he was just mislead..and after all when he had sided with Maan..he was only a kid and any one
would do the same for their siblings...so no grudges over that..and if my sister loved someone..I wouldnt come in the way but I would make sure that Arjun was suitable for her
and for that I had my own idea..I smirked as I hugged Arohi.
**End of Geet's POV**

**Maan's POV**
My eyes roamed the hall...looking for two people..Arnav and Geet...I spotted Arnav..chatting with Yash..but I couldnt find Geet..she had been gone for a long time..
and here her two friends were sitting and eating my head..as if I cared a damn about there plans..but my ears perked up as I heard them mention Geet and Arnav..
I concentrated hard on this part of the conversation but not looking their way incase they thought I was interested..so what I heard them say was...
K-Well..Arnav and Geet have known each other from quite a long time..and since he's come after so long we were deciding to have a road trip..Geet's planned the whole thing
so yeah we were deciding to go on this trip and as we were going for a whole week..we thought that you would miss Riya right?So we were thinking...
And she stopped as the other one started
R-If you would come too...
My heart leaped in joy..ofcourse I would be coming,the thought of spending time with Geet and Riya was so amazing..and anyways who told them he would leave Geet and
Riya alone with that Rascal...but not showing my happiness as just turned towards them and said:'When are you guys leaving?'
K-Tomorrow..
Me-I'll think about it...
R-Okay so just inform us what your decision is?
Me-Hmmm...
I saw them both leave..I had an urge to stand up and do a victory dance..but I didnt..I knew it..this trip was going to be really interesting...
**End of Maan's POV**

Precap-Plan 2 is put in action..
Maaneet come closer..
Maan's jealously...takes the better of him...
Maan-Riya moments...
Armaan lets a little secret out...

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Edited by Danina - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part...

loved how u explained everything by their POVs...

arnav was so teasing maan...

wonder whether we will get to c J geet or not...

geet caught arjun n aro...well..nice to know that she is happy abt it...

lol...maan wud never have said no to trip...n look at him n his ego..straightway yes nahi kaha n said will think abt it...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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