Maaneet FF-Love is nothing but pain-part 23-update - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it, can't understand if yash and geet are married then why that girl said that she is yash's wife, continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update...❤️
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Wonderful FF.
Please add me to ur pm list.
Update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...ria is maan's daughter i am sure of it and they got separated because of mistrust between them...if 16 yrs of relationship could break maan's trust on geet so easily..then i guess geet did the right thing leaving him in a confused state and not answering any of his questions..he deserves that...how could he do this to her..but i am sure when he will learn about ria's truth..he will repend a lot... yash might be like a brother to geet...and that might be the twist i have a strong feeling...lets see what happens next ..please update soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

am waiting for the next update

right now every thing is so twisted ...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: seemamary

Loved it, can't understand if yash and geet are married then why that girl said that she is yash's wife, continue soon.


Who said she was Yash's wife...
The girl said she was Rahul's GF...
im cant get you...please explain it to me so i can explain it to you:)
btw,thanks:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow that was mind blasting part...loved it to the core.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part...

geet has a little girl...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 7:

They reached home'Geet rushed to her baby and took her in her arms and asked:'Riya kya howa?'

R-Mamma **sob**'.woh I was really missing you na'.toh that's why'**sob**'

G-Arey'baby mamma was coming na'.no need to cry she said while wiping her tears'.'Aur waise dekho kaun aya hai?'

R-Kaun Mamma?

G-Khud hi dekhlo'

Riya saw Yash and rushed to him'Yash picked her up and hugged her'

R-Yash Papa'.aap kab aye?

Y-Mein toh abhi aye hoon'par yeh batao meri princess kyu rorahi thi?

R-Who I was missing mamma'.

Y-Acha and me?

R-Oho'I was missing you too and where's my chocolate?

Y-Hmmm''.sorry bhool gaye'

R-Hmmmfhhh'

Geet's phone rang'she picked it up:

G-Hello

Ra-Hey Geet

G-How are you?

Ra-Im fine'acha suno Geet woh Mr.Khurana has started the project'you need to go the site immediately and discuss some things'they have a few doubts'

G-Paar'.Rahul

Ra-Geet this is very important'.

G-Theek Hai'

Ra-Thankyou'.

Geet cut the call and sighed she didn't want to face Maan again but destiny had some other plans'.and now she was sure he would try and make life more hell for her'.and that too she had to go to the site? Which was like 100km away from Delhi and on top of that Riya?

G-Yash'woh I have to go some urgent work'can you take care of riya?

Y-Haan duh Geet!

R-Paar mamma I want to stay with you'

G-Riya mamma will be back soon'.

R-Promise?

G-Haan promise'

Geet hugged riya and left for the site'thinking what new game did Maan have now?

Maan reached the site and waited for Geet'he had planned to make her work so much that she didn't have any choice but spend her time with him'and he would torture her like hell''.

M-Armaan toh yahi wait kar'mein ata hoon'

A-Maan wait'I want to ask you something..

M-Poch'

A-Are you sure what you're going to do is right?

I mean by hurting her what will you get?If she has moved on'.then..

M-Armaan you don't get it she betrayed me even when we were together'she broke my trust she ignored my love'she played with me'I am not going to leave her'

A-Jaise teri marzi'.but seeing her in pain isn't going to hurt you?

M-Nahi'she doesn't affect MSK anymore'

And he walked away not wanting to face any further questioning'but while walking he thought was he doing the right thing?

He was stooping so low as in just to hurt her?

Would it hurt him to see her in pain?

No'MSK doesn't care im just taking revenge she hurt me im going to hurt her'.

Geet hurried out of her car and walked quickly she was annoyed at Maan'.she was worried about riya and on top of that she was scared'.she didn't want Maan to know anything and she didn't want her past to affect her present she was confused hurt and oh she didn't know what?

**Flashback**

G-Yash'.im sure about this'don't worry'my child is my everything and im her mother and she's my daughter no one else can be a part of this family'

Y-Even me?

G-You are family'.na?

Y-Geet I still think you should consider my offer'.

G-Yash'I can handle it by myself'..

**Flashback ends**

She was walking when she bumped into someone'and she looked up to see who it was?

And her eyes widened in shock'.and she gasped:'Armaan?'

A-Geet'hey'

G-Armaan tum yaha? Arent you a doctor?

A-Haan'woh Maan ne yaha'woh'

G-Theek Hai'im sorry

A-Geet its okay'how are you?

G-Im running late we'll talk later'.

A-Okayyy'Geet will you ever consider forgiving me?

G-Armaan that is the past'.and no never'

A-Okay'chal bye'

Arjun was ringing the bell from the past 2 mins and no one was opening the door'and finally someone did and he saw her and smiled'

A-Arey kitne time lagati hai yaar?

'Chup kar'tu yaha iss time kaise?'

A-Arey Shilpa mein apni dost se milna aye hoon'

S-Acha g pehle toh yaad nahi aye'

A-Sorry yaar'but you know bro'kaam and kaam and kaam'

S-Haan haan janti hoon'chal andar aa'

They both moved inside and he sat on the sofa'

S-What will you have'tea'coffee?

A-Nahii'aaj nahi I want to talk to you about something'

Arjun didn't know how to tell her?

How to start?

For the first time in his life he was fumbling for words'

A-Umm'woh'mein'woh'umm..haan..

S-Am I dreaming?

A-Kyu?

S-The great Arjun Khurana is fumbling'.

A-Nahi yaar'.woh baat yeh hai ke mujhe kisi se baat karni hai but she doesn't like me?

S-Pinch me'

A-WHAT?

S-Im dreaming'.you want to talk to a girl that too one who doesn't like you?

Dude you have love fever..

A-Shutup nothing like that'just that I mean I hurt her a lot and she doesn't trust me'so I want her to forgive me'I mean we started off wrong'

S-Hmmm'theek I'll help you suno'

Armaan had got an urgent call from the hospital so he decided to leave'he hurried towards his car and left thinking he'll inform Maan later'.in the car he was thinking about what Maan had told him?

If he was correct there was some huge misunderstanding but what Maan said did make sense'but before all that he had to ask Maan a few questions'but one thing he was sure of Maan loved Geet madly'otherwise knowing she betrayed him wouldn't have hurt him this much after he claims he has forgotten her'.but he still had this feeling something was wrong'he decided after the hospital he would go and talk to Shilpa about it!

Geet hurried towards Maan and said:'Yes Mr.Khurana what do you want to discuss I need to hurry home''

M-Yes'Mr.Singhania must be waiting right?

G-That is not your business just say what you want to?

M-Did you ever love me?

G-Mr.Khurana'

M-Tell me did you ever even for a second love me?

If you did why did you do this to me?

G-Stop it Mr.Maan'I have to go home if this is why you called me then goodbye'

She turned to leave but tears made their way through her eyes'how her heart had wanted to scream:Yes I love you'I always did and always will'yes I haven't got over you'.yes it affects me when you call me Misthi'.it affects me when you touch me'.

She quickly regained her composure and shut off her heart and started walking backwards when Maan called out:'Ms.Handa should the wall colours be red or white?'

Geet turned around and said:'Red'

M-And architecture?

G-Roman'

M-We'll be starting the project soon'lets discuss the designs'

G-Hmm'

When she turned someone put their hands on her eyes'and Geet's lips curved in a smile and she said:'Riya'

R-Arey'mamma ko pata chal gaye?

G-Haan baby'

She turned around and saw riya in Yash's arms and said in a strict tone:'What are you both doing here?...I said na I'll be back to yaha ane ki kya zaroorat thi?Ye Mumbai nahi hai baby'you don't know this area well''

R-OMG'dad yeh kitne bolti hai?

Y-I agree baby'

G-Tum done mil kar meri'

Y-Geet calm'we came here coz Riya really missed you okay?

G-Awan baby missed me?

R-Haan'

G-come here..

She took riya from yash and hugged her'

G-Riya you go home I'll come soon mummy ko kaam hai na?

R-Par'

G-You're a good girl na?

R-Theek hai'

G-Yash ise lejao'mein ghar par milti hoon..

Y-Geet tum yaha theek hoo na?

G-Yash'I can handle myself'

Even though she didn't want to stay alone with Maan she knew she had to face him in this month'.she couldn't run forever could she?

Maan decided to act professional for sometime as they needed to work on the project as well but he would hurt her'.no doubt'when all of a sudden he saw a little girl's face'she was beautiful'.she was angelic'she was just exactly like an angel with chocolate brown doe like eyes'a milky white complexion'and that's when he saw the person carrying her it was that Yash'he boiled up in anger'.he clenched his hand in a fist and had the urge to kick him'.but seeing that little girl he felt something'.a nice sensation'.he even forgot about Yash but then his heart broke listening the girl call Yash Papa'that meant what he thought was right?

Yash and Geet?

What had happened five years back was true?

It really happened'

**Flashback**

Maan got up'his head ached like anything'he couldn't remember what happened last night'he looked around but Geet was not there'he panicked where was she'.he looked around'he quickly put his clothes outside when he saw Geet and Yash standing and talking'.he was about to call Geet when he heard her speak'

G-Yash you will not tell Maan anything now okay?

Y-But Geet he has the right to know'.

G-Nahii'not now okay'kal raat jo bhi howa who sirf humare beech mei rahega okay?

Y-For how long?

G-Jab thak I want'

Y-Par Geet..

G-Yash promise you wont tell anyone'please'.

Y-Theek hai I promise'last night will stay a secret between us'.

G-Aur Yash apne room sahi karlo before Meera comes'

Y-Theek Hai'

G-Bye'

Y-Bye'..

Maan wondered what they were talking about but then he thought maybe something stupid just like that'and called:'Geeet''

G-Haan Maan'aap uth gaye?

M-Haan tum kya karahi hoo?

G-Woh'ummm'.kuch nahi just that I was telling Yash not to tell dadi about the whole drunk thing'

M-Oh'chale?

G-Haan chalo..

**Flashback ends**

So that day whatever he had thought was true?

He had thought so many time that maybe he was wrong but today he really believed that he was correct he had judged Geet correctly'his anger was on the peak'so he questioned:'So this is your kid haan?'

G-Haan she is my baby'

M-Toh you did betray me'

G-I don't care'

M-You never loved me?

G-Mr.Khurana project please'

M-Why did you do this to me? Why did you play with my emotions?

G-I owe you no explanations'

M-GOD DAMNIT YOU DO'(he held her by her shoulders and pulled her towards him) Geet YOU HAVE TO TELL ME WHY DID YOU BETRAY ME FOR THIS YASH?YOU LEFT ME AFTER 16 YEARS JUST FOR YASH?YOU HAD NO RIGHT TO PLAY WITH ME LIKE THAT Geet'.WHY ...WHY DID YOU DO THIS?

G-Leave me Maan I owe you no answers'if you cannot trust me then you have no right to question me'.leave me..

M-Its your child haan?

G-Yes any problem'leave me now'.

M-HAAN YOU HAVE YASH NOW RIGHT?YOU DON'T NEED ME ANYMORE'YOU HAVE THIS GODDAMN YASH NOW'.GEET I LOVED YOU LIKE ANYTHING BUT YOU BETRAYED ME'

G-STOP IT'IT'S ENOUGH'LEAVE ME I HAVE TOLERATED ENOUGH...

M-Who's the father? Is it him'.this Yash? Was I really correct'these five years I thought everyday what IF IM WRONG?BUT YOU PROVED ME WRONG I WAS ABSOLUTELY CORRECT ABOUT YOU'.YOU ARE A CHARACTERLESS'.

He received a slap'he left her and held his cheek'.she had slapped him'yet again fury blazed in him'how dare her'she had crossed all her limits'

M-HOW DARE YOU?

G-KEEP YOUR VOICE DOWN'YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO POINT A FINGER ON MY CHARACTER'.YES SHE IS MY DAUGHTER AND YES YASH IS HER FATHER'.AND YES WE ARE MARRIED YOU BETTER WATCH YOURSELF YOU ARE SPEAKING TO MRS.GEET SINGHANIA RIGHT NOW'SO DON'T YOU DARE SPEAK ABOUT MY CHARACTER'..

Y-MR.MAAN SINGH KHURANA I HAVE HEARD ENOUGH'STAY AWAY FROM MY WIFE AND KID'.GEET WE ARE GOING'

G-Yash tum jao'I have some things to take care of'.

Y-You are not staying here one minute'get it? We are leaving right now'

G-Yash'trust me'I'm coming home'.just a few things'.this project is important'

Y-AFTERALL THIS YOU STILL WANT TO WORK WITH THIS MAN?

G-Yash'I have told you a million times'I will not let my company face loss because of some stupid personal matter'

Maan's heart broke again'so he was just a stupid matter for her'he took all his pain and frustration out in the form of anger'that's why he said those mean words'his heart wanted to say sorry but his ego and anger were way too big so he blurted out:'Haan'.so what if she's married her boss's company is her own'she and her boss are engaged and share a very close relation which you're husband doesn't mind?

Do you Yash'you don't mind that you're wife COOK'S at her boss's place?

And knows his regular?

Y-No I don't I trust her unlike SOME people'

M-Trusting someone like her can be poisonous to your life'coz people like her do nothing except hurt'

Y-That is between me and my wife'you disgust me Maan'.disgust me and im warning you next time I don't want you close to my wife GET IT?

M-I have no interest'

Y-Geet come fast'me and riya are waiting for you'

Geet stood there'.she was not able to move'her heart shattered listening to Maan's poisonous words'.it hadn't hurt this much the first time'but this time'he had her daughter involved?

She would never forgive this man'..the tears she was holding back threatened to fall'.but once again forgetting her pain and keeping her self-respect and daughter's image intact'she turned around and said trying to maintain anger and hatred in her voice:'Mr.Khurana'we will discuss the rest of the project tomorrow'and yes'the floor should be marble''

She walked off and went and sat down in the car'.

Y-Geet'you alright?

G-Haan'

R-Mamma'why were you shouting?

G-Arey baby mamma was just joking'.

R-Sachi?

G-Haan baby'.chalo now forget it'.wanna have ice-cream?

Riya's eyes lit up and she nodded'seeing happiness on her baby's face Geet's face broke down in a smile'for a moment she forgot all other pain'and just smiled'.

Yash watched Geet'she was quiet till now'Riya was asleep'and Geet was just staring with a distant expression on her face'Yash tried asking her many times but she wouldn't answer'he sighed and put his head on the seat'and closed his eyes'he was trying to calm himself but he couldn't believe Maan had said all that'the person Geet had loved like mad had said such things to her'he knew she was in pain and was broken'.but he also knew she would never open up she would bury all that pain and act strong but Yash knew how fragile she was'.

Precap-How could you?

She's your child?

I don't believe it'''''''''..

Arohi,I love you'.

Love you too'.

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Edited by Danina - 13 years ago
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OMG AMAZING!
plz plz plz i beg you continue soon!
and somebody plz tell Maan that Geet never cheated on him and that baby is his!
thanks for the pm!
and pretty please do continue soon!

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