Maaneet FF-Love is nothing but pain-part 23-update

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

hiii

awesome update

loved it

poor maan

yash sooo sweet

h8 brij

cant wait 4 da truth

cant wait 4 more

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

get well soon dear

take care

muhaaa

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Danina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: abinash079
after knowing the truth i hope maan doesn't do anything silly i wonder what would went through him after knowing the truth hope he has the power to withstand the truth

Well..i dont know about that yet...but hope he does well!!

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Danina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan
hiii
awesome update
loved it
poor maan
yash sooo sweet
h8 brij
cant wait 4 da truth
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

ps
get well soon dear
take care
muhaaa

Hello...
thankyou..thankyou
i will continue once im better;D:D
I hope so too;D
thankyou
love ya;D
muhaa

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Krishna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

Great update! Hope you feel well soon!

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

Thanks 4 da pm n fab update. Poor Maan...cannot see Geet with anyone. Maan drunk n visits Geet! Armaan trying to help! Brij calling Geet. Update soon

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TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#246

That was pureee awesomeness
please update SOOON!
thanks for the pm!
sorry for the late reply couldn't access the internet for a week

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TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#247

:O so many problems!
cont soon
thanks for the pm
sorry for the late comment couldn't access the internet for a week

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Danina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#248

Part 11:
Arjun was about to open the letter when he heard glass break...he kept the letter back in the book and rushed to see where the noise was coming from...he heard glass break again and it was coming back from bro's room..he rushed to his room to see the sight he had seen 5 years back...Maan was sitting in the middle of the room with Geet's photograph in his hand with glass pieces all around him and with a bleeding hand...
Arjun rushed forward to him and said:'Bro yeh aap?'
M-I still...Arjun i still love her...
A-Who bro?
M-Geeet...Arjun i still love her..
A-But after all that?
M-Yes...i love her after all that..i still do and i will always...
A-She's moved on..
M-I haven't...
Arjun just hugged his brother...Maan completely broke down and kept repeating...:'Geet..I love you...'
Arjun felt his anger reaching its peak..it was all Geet's fault...she had moved on but his brother?He still loved her?
And she didn't give a damn..she was happy...but his brother?He didn't know how to react?
He knew he couldn't back off now..he had to get revenge...

Arohi stared at Geet:
A-Di what happened?
G-Brij is back...
Arohi froze as the memories of the past came rushing back..
**Flashback**
B-Arohi..get ready to die...
A-Brij...no...
B-Arohi you see your Di is of no use now...she's heartbroken coz of Maan.wonder why Maan did all that?(he said while smirking)
A-Aap?You did all that?
B-Kinda...but Geet and Yash did most of it...
A-Why do you want to destroy our lives?
B-Coz your sister choose that Maan over me...
A-But...
He pointed the gun towards her...colour drained from her face..she shut her eyes tightly waiting for the bullet to com...
**Flashback ends**
Geet's voice bought her back...
G-Aru kya howa?
A-Di..why?
G-To create more problems i suppose...
A-Riya?
G-Dont worry..I've decided something...
A-What?
G-Riya Maan Khurana will become Riya Singhania this friday...
A-WHAT?
Her eyes popped out was her Di mad?
A-How can you marry Yash bhai?
G-Just to give her...Yash's name nothing more...
A-But?
G-Aru..i cant loose Riya..if Maan finds out he will take her away..
A-Why dont you forgive him?
G-I cant...just cant!!
A-Why?
G-He doubted my love Aru...anyways you're too young to get all this...you still have you're love to find..
Arohi gulped..she had never told her Di...she was already in love...she had been in love and been betrayed but she couldn't tell her Di that could she?
A-As you say...

Geet sat there in her room...it had been hours since Arohi left..but she just sat there stoneless with tears flowing down her eyes...she couldn't believe what Maan had done today?
Just to prove himself better?Could he have hurt her more?To save his ego...he had lost the little love she had for him...
Y-He came here didn't he?
She looked up to see Yash standing there with a small sad smile...she merely nodded...he sighed..
G-You saw her today?
Y-Hmmm...
G-Talked to her?
Y-I have my self-respect...
G-But...
Y-Geet if you cant forgive Maan how do you expect me to forgive her?
G-Hmmm..true..
Y-What did he do?
G-Sit down..
He came and sat besides her and told him everything..Yash laughed..:'He'll never change will he?'
Geet smiled too...
K-After all...he is Maan Singh Khurana..
G-Khushi tu?
K-Haan hum...i heard it all...
She came and hugged Geet and said:'I'm sorry Geet..'
G-Not your fault...
K-Don't worry everything will be okay!!
G-Hmm...
Her phone started ringing..
Y-Wait I'll get it..
Geet nodded...

Yash heard her phone ringing..he saw the caller id and his blood boiled the guts the guy had to call Geet after hurting her so much?
He had hurt Geet several times but today had been a limit..he would make sure Maan never ever hurt Geet again...he remembered the time when they had been best-friends...now they were worse then enemies...Yash cared for Geet and could not let anyone hurt her but that one secret had changed their lives..
**Flashback**
G-Plz Yash plz...you cant tell Maan anything..
Y-But don't you think he has the right to know?
G-He'll regret it..i cant see him feeling guilty...and he was drunk...
Y-You weren't..
G-Yassshhh...
Y-Okay okay...wont tell him but are you sure?
G-Yes...I'm sure plus no one else can know this...this is a secret between you and me
Y-Okay..wont tell a soul..
Geet hugged him and said:'Thank you...Love you..'
Thats when Arjun had said:'What secret?'
Yash gulped and stammered:'Woh...s..uuurprise...'
G-Haan surprise party for Meera...
A-Why?
G-Umm..farewell...
A-Okay...
**Flashback ends**
Khushi's voice bought him out of the past...
K-Arey Yash..the phone is still ringing pick it up...
Y-Arey haan...
K-Shukriya...
Y-Hello...

Maan froze...he heard Yash's voice over the phone...and anger bubbled inside him and he thought:'Oh so now he has the right to pick her phone up?...So now she didn't even want to talk to him?...But how come she allowed him to pick her phone up...she hated it when anyone did?
She had really changed..she wasn't the Geet he knew...'
**Flashback**
G-Maaan...what are you doing?
M-Your phone was ringing and i thought i would pick it up..
G-Maan i love you and all but one thing you never do is pick my phone up?
Maan encircled her waist and asked:'Why is that?'
G-Well...all my friends call and they get to hear your sexy voice..that's why...
M-Oh..possessive...
G-Haan..but no Maan seriously...no one picks my phone up coz i don't like it...sorry...
M-Its okay Misthi...
G-I Love you Maan..
M-I Love you too...
**Flashback ends**
Y-Hello?
M-Ermm..Hello..
Y-Mr.Khurana?
M-Yes...where is Miss.Handa?
Y-She's busy...any message?
M-No..its urgent and i will speak only to her..
Y-She's busy..
And that's when he heard her voice from the back:
G-Kaun hai Yash?
Y-Ainvayi credit card...
G-Oh..Yash hurry up..i want to tell you something..
Y-What?
G-Its urgent...come here...
Y-Geet...what is it?
G-I'm...
That's when the line got disconnected...Maan threw the phone in desperation..he wanted to hear what she was saying...all kind of thoughts raced his mind...he had called her to tell her to come for the project...so he could see her..and torture her...he had gotten over his drunken state...but he remembered what he did...and knew what she must be thinking...so he wanted to show her..he was over her...that Geet Handa didn't matter anymore..but instead had landed up with one more secret..what was she going to say?
Was she saying...I'm Pregnant?
I'm Dying?
What was she saying...Urghh..curiosity and frustration took a toll on him..he pushed his hair back...
He went in the hall when he saw Brij sitting there...he walked up to him and asked:'Mr.Brij..aap...we had a meeting tomorrow right?'
B-Yes...but i thought i should pay you a visit...
M-Okay..any problem...
B-No...just tell me...the deal is finalized right?
M-Yes...we will be working with you on the GI project...
B-Good...have you talked to Miss.Handa?
Maan's blood froze how did he know her?
M-Umm...Miss.Handa?
B-Yes...Miss.Hand...oh sorry..she's probably Mrss.Singhania now right?
M-Umm..oh yeah..see you tomorrow..
B-Yes...Mr.Khurana tomorrow...
Maan hands curled in a fist..she was suppose to be Mrs.Khurana not Singhania...Urghh..how had it all happened?

Brij smirked he had seen the change of emotions on his face when he had said Mrs.Singhania...this would be sweet...he would torture all of them...he said:'Geet get ready for payback..'

Geet sar there with Riya..the only place she found peace was near her daughter...all worries left her the moment...she saw her princess smile...Riya was playing with her toys..when
R-Mamma...when will Papa give me a gift?
G-What do you mean?
R-Mamma..see this doll you gave me...this tea set Khushi aunty gave me...this dress Yash papa gave me..but my papa never gave me anything...
G-Riya baby papa will...
Riya started crying...Geet rushed to her and took her in her arms...and whispered:'Shhh..baby..papa will give you a gift...'
R-Mamma...all my friend's dad give them a gift...when will my papa give me a gift?
G-Shh..very soon...
R-Mamma...**sob**..i think papa doesn't love me only...he forgot me maybe..coz he's never with me...
G-Baby..you have me and Yash papa haina?
R-But i want my papa..who takes me to the park...
G-He will come na?
R-When?
G-Sooon..
R-Mamma everyone makes fun of me..they say i don't even know my papa's name...what is his name?
Geet decided not anymore...she would tell her daughter his name..but nothing else...and she whispered:'Maan..'
R-Maan what?
G-Maan Si...
Y-Riya..its time to SLEEP...
R-Yash papa..but?
Y-Riya you have school tomorrow...its your first day right..you don't want to be late right?
R-Okay...goodnight mama..goodnight Yash papa...she kissed both their cheeks and rushed to her room..as soon as she left...Geet broke down...

Yash saw her breaking down...he rushed towards her and took her in his arms...and said:'Shhh...Geet..'
G-She misses him..the person who doesn't know she exists..the person who had accused her of being illegitimate...
Y-Shhh..that's the past...Riya will get her father now...she will have me..
G-But she will still always feel his absence..
Y-What can we do about that?
G-I did make the right decision didn't I?
Y-Yes you did Geet...don't worry...
Yash closed his eyes...and let tears flow down his cheeks...he knew the pain both of them suffered was a lot...but Geet had suffered more..when Maan broke their 16 years relationship and then Riya..she had been through a lot...actually they had been through a lot...
**Flashback**
A-YASH BHAI...
Y-Kya..Kya howa?
A-Di's water just broke...
Y-KYA?Geet...
G-YASSSHHH...HOSPITAL NOW..
Y-Haan...haan...chalo...wait..kkkeeeysss...
They had rushed to the hospital...their Geet had been taken in her room where the doctor had announced she had gone in early labor...they had to start the procedure now...
He stood outside...waiting for news...when finally after ages...the doctor came out and handed him Riya..
D-Congratulations..its a girl..
Yash just smiled..when he looked at Riya...he felt at peace...he felt all their pain vanish as the little angel cried in his arms...he felt contended...he knew for sure that they had taken the correct decision...Riya was the best thing that could have happened...
**Flashback ends**

Geet sat there crying in his arms...she remembered that day...
**Flashback**
N-Whats the baby's name?
Y-Riya..my little Riya...
N-Riya what?
Y-Riya Singha...
Geet cut in and said:
G-Riya Maan Singh Khurana...
N-Okay..
Y-WHAT THE HELL GEET?HOW CAN YOU KEEP THE ASS"S NAME?
G-Yash calm...he is her father i don't want her to have anyone's name but his...
Y-WHY?
G-We will talk about that later...
**Flashback ends**
Today for the first time she was regretting her decision..if she had listened to Yash...she wouldn't have to feel insecure today..but no she being Geet thought she did right...and that right could cause her..her princess today!!

Precap-Tears streamed her face at the sight before her..
Maan and...

Okay guys HOW WAS IT?
I KN0W NOT THAT GOOD..BUT THE BEST I COULD COME UP WITH...I WAS FEELING BETTER AND THOUGHT WHY NOT I UPDATE IT...IM SORRY TO ALL THOSE WHO CANT OPEN THE URL..I DONT KNOW WHATS WRONG..WHEN I CHECK IT WORKS..SORRY GUYS...ANYWAYS..SORRY FOR THIS PART...HOPE ITS OKAY...DO TELL ME HOW YOU LIKE IT.AND GUYS DO TELL ME...IF YOU LIKE THE PHASE OF THE STORY...WHAT DO YOU GUYS SUGGEST...SHOULD I SHOW MORE PAST OR PRESENT?
AND DO YOU WANT MAAN TO SUFFER..AND THINK GEET IS MARRIED?
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SORRY FOR ANY GRAMMATICAL AND SPELLIJNG ERROR...
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Edited by Danina - 13 years ago