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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part . . Same like
geet i also not like maan
give geet his wallet. . . .
She want his company
not money. . . . . . .
o no who is that
person? Who hug geet. .
Say sorry on knee. . .
Dont know who is
that . . Geet's? . . . .
but i think ab maja
ayega. . Maan will get
more jelous. . . More
protective, May be. . .
Geet ko akele chod jane
ki saja milegi . . .
Waiting 4 next part . .
Plz plz plz make it early

plz do update today if possible
Edited by ANGILS.KALI - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Manpreetmann


umm me planning to update my other ff today "Anjaana Rishta"...

nahi nahi nahi
yehi update chahiya😉😉
u can't leave us on a cliff hanger😡😡
i demand update 😊😊
ASAP 🤢🤢
hamari maangen poori karo 😒
warna strike😔
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Posted: 13 years ago
Edited by Manpreetmann - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
love the way u write the story
each emotion of geet is captured so well superb
its full of surprises yaar
woww ur updating😛
Edited by nan_10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...waiting to know who is this new character...update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Recap :-


he came infront, bend on his knees on floor, holds his ears : sorry yaar...
she turns other way... he crawled infront of her: sorry bola na...
a free show was on for public
geet angrily: dafa hoja yahan se...
he gets up from floor, hugged her tightly: tujhe kaise chod sakta hun billi...
she smiled sweetly n finally hugged him

Part 34 :-

he twirled her around madly: billi i missed u, missed u, missed u so much...
geet laughed cutely...
finally he let her down on her feet..kissed on her head: kaisi hai??
geet smiled, put her hands on her waist, showing cool attitude: bindas...jhakkas...rapchik... tu kaisa hai?? asked him cutely...raising her brows
he laughed at her nautanki, did same as her: dekh mai bhi bindas... jhakkas... rapchik... aur hot n handsome bhi... he smiled naughtily .. hun na hot n handsome??
geet rolled her eyes: self obsessed logo ka kuch nahi ho sakta...
she teased him, knowing he'll get irritate: tu cute hai, hot n handsome nahi...
he wanted to kill her n groaned: yeh cute vute mat bola kar... yeh sab ladkiyon ke liye thik hai but mere jaise hottie pe suit nahi karta... pulled his collar up
geet shook her head: ab kya karun yaar... sachai toh kadvi hi hoti hai... n giggles
he frowned: toh tujhe kya lagta hai, yahan hot kaun hai ...tu??
geet giggles, knowing he would start up with stupid fight
he looked at her top to bottom: waise tu sach mein hot lag rahi hai...
geet smirks
zyada udd mat... kabhi kabhi galti bhi ho jati hai...
geet made "O" face: tera matlab kya hai?? mai galti se achi lag rahi hun...
he folded his arms, shrugged his shoulder off: maine toh kuch nahi kaha
geet hits on his arms: tu kabhi nahi sudhrega...
he looks upward, like geet usually does: hey babaji... dekho yeh zaalim duniya waale, ek sharif se ladke ko bigda hua keh rahen hai... n sighs disappointedly
geet narrowed her eyebrows: yeh kya nautanki hai... n slaps him cutely on face : aur meri acting karna band kar... samaj ayi..! warna pitega bohot...
he encircled his arm around her shoulder: chalna..teri acting aur mai...itne bure din nahi aaye mere...
geet shoved his hand off her shoulder n twist her lips: chal nikal yahan se..baat mat kar mujhse...
uff meri billi ka gussa...
geet ignored him
he teased: tera tomboy look kahan gaya collage waala...
shut up mein collage mein bhi aise kapde pehnti thi
par kabhi kabhi... warna toh bas tomboy ki tarah ghumti rehti thi
yeh sab chod, tu yeh bata koi ladki wagaira patayi Mr.Hottie ne...
he sighs: haye Mr.Hottie... yaar tera Me.Hottie abhi tak single hai
u r still single... dekh budhapa aane se pehle ladki dhoondh le warna teri jawani ka koi fayda nahi rahega... she laughed out loud madly on her own statement
he could kill her right there for saying that infront of many ppl, though they couldn't understand hindi but still there were few indians as well, who looked at him n laugh out on him
geet ran out of there, he chased her to kill her for saying such things...they ran in mall like mad ppl... finally he catched her after sometime... both were panting...geet showed her hand to stop..
he wrapped his arm around her neck: tujhe aaj nahi chodunga main... bezti karni hai toh akele mein kar... sabke saamne kuch bhi bolti hai tu...
she laughed even louder: par Karan jo maine bola wo hai toh sach na...
this time karan also laughs along her: tu kabhi nahi sudhregi...
they both laughed heartly after so long
after her marriage, for the first time she laughed this much... otherwise she just forgot to laugh...

they talked about their collage days.. how much they used to had fun... their big gang of arnd 10-12 ppl...mass bunking, sometimes spending whole day sitting in canteen doing nothing...making fun of one-another... day clubbing, which sounds pathetic but they used to enjoy that also... karan gave every single detail to her of who is doing what...but forgot giving his own
Geet: toh Karan Wahi ji aap kya kar rahen hain aajkal...?
Karan sighs: itni izzat mat de...ek toh mujhe hazam nahi hogi aur dusri tere muh se achi nahi lagti...
Geet rolled her eyes: whatever..!! ab bata bhi
karan pulls his collar up: i became an actor
geet eyes popped out: t...t...tu actor?? hey bhagwaan ab industry ka kya hoga?? barbaad ho jayegi... n giggles
karan looks her angrily
geet: abey mazak kar rahi hun... waise yeh MBA karte karte tu acting mein kahan ghus gaya?
karan taunted: jaise tu MBA karte karte ek dum se gayab ho gayi geet... sabki life badal jati hai... meri bhi badal gayi...
geet went numb with his words...ya right, she just vanished like air from their lives... no contact..nothing...not even with karan, who is her friend from 11th std... they spent hell 6yrs together...not even a single day she was alone in those days...karan never left her... they were best buddies... they rocked the collage together...
karan was on collage trip during sameera's wedding... geet couldn't go coz that was her own sis wedding n she couldn't have missed it...
and when he came back, there was no sign of geet, like she doesn't exists, like she never...
geet was in tears remembering past...

he brings her in his embrace again: taras gaya tha tujhe dekhne ke liye... kahan gayab ho gayi thi achanak se.. pata hai tujhe kitna contact karne ki koshish ki...tujhse milne ki kitni koshish ki... tere ghar bhi gaya kayi baar...
"GHAR" a word caught her attention, which she was dying to hear from last 10months...
she looked at karan with wet eyes, waiting to hear more abt her family...he can tell how they all r..?
karan disappointedly said: par wahan koi hai hi nahi...
geet looked at karan confusingly, with a question written all over her face "where are they??"
karan looked down: i tried so many times to contact rano aunty also... but her no. is always unreachable...
tears rolled down from her eyes: kahan gaye sab? said very slowly, barely audible
karan asked her: geet tu yeh mujhse puch rahi hai...? yeh sab ho kya raha hai?? tune kisi se bhi contact nahi rakha... mujhse bhi nahi... tu kahan hai ajkal aur teri family kahan hai?
geet had no clue, where her family is: i dont know...
what?
geet told him everything, what happened in last 10months... how her life drastically changed...
Karan looked at her in shock: but how could sameera di do this... she cannot hurt someone's feelings...
geet cried: but she did...


u can throw chappals on me, coz iss update mein maan nahi hai...😆

i know bohot thanda thanda aur sookha sookha update hai but promise next update will be full of maaneet😳...those of u who are missing maan badly...so sorry for that...plz bare with me

next update will depend on the number of likes n comments...
in part 31 i got 240 likes & in part 32 n 33 got around 200... mere likes kam ho gaye😭
gimme long comments... press the like button... faster i'll update...😳
Edited by Manpreetmann - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
first of all thank u for giving the update 🤗
and now one complain 😆😆
no maan in the whole update 😭😭
aasa kaise chalega 🤢
but its ok 👍🏼
kyunki very soon we'll get to see a jealous maan 😆😆
and i love jealous maan😉😉


Edited by mons_mb - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

nice nw karan knows abt geet marriage but i hope ki vo ye na soche ki geet maan ke sath khush nahi hai pls aur pls maan ke bina koi bhi update bahut suna lagta hai so pls in next update only maaneet continue soon eagerly waiting for that

Edited by sakshi04 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing part dear :D
Love Karan Wahi hehe :D
Loved their masti in the mall ;)
Cant wait for more :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
perfect update love the knok knok between karan and geet
missed maan

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