Tarnished Innocence~removed - Page 36

Hey Lena,

It is nice to see that Maan is accompanying Geet in every step of her life, even taking steps for her when she will not for herself.

Hmm, so Geet's mother has leukemia, that's why she gave her responsibility to Maan but I am still wondering about his mother's reaction when she comes to know about all.

Maan gave words to his feelings in grievous situation. He might have doubts that Neel will catch up to them until the police reach.

Waiting for More

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Good to know that Geet accepted she has something invaluable & appalling memories die away in the end.

Your reasons to write are thoughtful but disturbing as well. Agree that the person raped will be wary of small touches.

Keep writing, as you are one amazing writer & love your style.

Originally posted by: XXaquafireXX

Wow...that was quite a journey. I loved the fact that you made this story as real as it can get in this not-so-innocent world. As you said, many girls like your Geet have had faced such traumatizing moments where there was no one who would support them even though they were innocent.

I applaud you for writing such a dark and real story in the most professional way possible.

And I hope to continue reading more stories from you in the future! *cough*FF*cough*😊

Aqua