Tarnished Innocence~removed - Page 34

Awesome update!!
Thx for the pm!!

plz dont leave the story like this...it is vry depressing...cant see maan in pain and u left like this...with maans blood.

hmmm... A bloody shoulder..blood in someone's eyes and a bleeding heart is what you left us behind with..
.I did gasp with Geet jus as she did..and when I read that line..I smiled coz u made it jus as natural as it wud be wid reality if sumone was sumhow most unfatefully wer put in that situation... Im jus stunned at the atrocity of the situation of how this one man has destroyed one's virgin love and has killed one virgin life! and is now on a rampage for more!! U need to stop him rather actually Maan needs to ...though I am sure and pray that it happens but I hope amidst tarnishing the innocence of one's life I hope Maan or Geet are not tarnished into ashes or more like blood!!! heheee...i knw I knw my analogies are thode se hatke..but I cudnt help it when this is all jus completely hatke!!

but all in all..I had read this ff with an open mind and still do and hv welcomed all of sorts of miseries u hv so far ventured out and I can't wait to see the flag of love of Maan and Geet irrevocably standing through this fire of hell..
Thank you for this good read..a pleasure to read (well right now not soo pleasing ji to the eye!!)

AWESOME UPDATE

no dear not again neel forcing himself on geet that to in front of maan and what about the punishment u were talking about neel
when r u updating?

Dis FF is something.

Will be waiting.. I can't wait to read the end.

OMG neel is such a psycho 😡...
i hope maan just finishes him off