Tarnished Innocence~removed - Page 37

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

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dear lena..u finished u'r ff on a hopeful note. she may not b fully healed but is progressing towrds it.

the light at the end of the tunnel that she needs to find is right beside her.

she finds solace in his arms and nothing pains him more than her bruised happines. together they'll do fine.
Yep...yep...see, di...ur intellect makes me dream about what great writing pieces u COULD be writing but aren't writing. 😍

but

i don't know personally if i'm more disturbed by the ff or the reasons u gave to write this story.

regardless of what my confused brains tells me...

...what i need to tell u or rather give u is a hug🤗
lolz, are my reasons that bad. haha. yea maybe my mind is a lil distorted. dont blame me. u ppl read it 😆😳

thanx for being an awesome n realistic writer.

i luv how u don't dictate or assert u'r point of view onto readers. many a times i feel like that some writers vent out about their own life's experiences and they want the wold to accept their choices...no matter how wrong they were.😆

so luv u as a writer and luv u'r approach towards writing.👍🏼
i totally have no idea wat u mean by this. do writers actually do that? vent their experiences to force their choices on others?
i do have pov, like evry one else. but wen i write, im just telling a story. a story that's beyond my pov. u wont believe me until u actually write a story. a writer controls only the beginning of the story, wen they set up the concept and the characters. but when the story begins, it is out of the storyteller's hand. the story gains its own tide which it flow by. nd if u try to force it to go in a way it shudnt, the story does not become a story. thats jus how i feel. 😆

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

I know this probably sounds totally weird, but I feel honored that you wrote this and decided to share this with us. This was an amazing story. I cried a little, seriously. Being raped is not something that is easily overcome, and I agree, that a love-making scene between Maan and Geet would not help Geet recover from the wounds inflicted on her by Neel.
Honored? I wonder why. I shud feel honored to have a reader like you. 😆
Don't cry...do u seriously cry...god, i feel like a cold person for not crying when writing this 🤣...thats not funny 😛
thanks for understand. glad u agree with me. i wud've happily written a lovemaking scene (although i absolutely HATE writing it) if it flowed with the story. it didn't so i cudn't.

I am so glad that that 🤬 Neel got capital punishment. It hurts to see criminals that commit horrible crimes and get off with a light sentence.
it always depends on the lawyer unfortunately.

If only every real-life Geet had a Maan, but in so many cases there's no one for them.
i had my mother so i'm happy 😃😆. the truth is they can have someone. but no one steps up b/c they dont want to be ostracized. they'd rather b liked by a wrong society rather than support a right person.

Even now it will take Geet a long time to be able to reach that level of intimacy with Maan. So glad Maan had been with her since childhood.

True. 😊

Thank you for writing this amazing story called 'Tarnished Innocence'!

I loved this story!

Thank you for reading it. 😆

Krishna