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diotima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#341

oooh bring it on, waiting

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Lena

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Posted: 14 years ago

#342

Update soon. It will be live.
Please wait. 😊

Edited by WhiteFantasy - 14 years ago

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Water

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Posted: 14 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: WhiteFantasy
Update soon. It will be live.
Please wait. 😊

Thank you.

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Lena

@.Lina.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#344

REMOVED FOR PERSONAL PURPOSES

Edited by .Lena. - 13 years ago

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hamini_yash

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Posted: 14 years ago

#345

yippie i dont know about others rehabitating but what neel did , he deserved death sentence.

please update soon , im waiting.

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Water

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Posted: 14 years ago

#346

First degree rape charge...was that for Geet...did he get punished for that??

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Lena

@.Lina.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: Water.
First degree rape charge...was that for Geet...did he get punished for that??

Yes.
And I'm sorry. I made a mistake. It's actually second degree rape. 😊

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Tabinda Areeb

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Posted: 14 years ago

#348

u plan to give the unfinished jungle story in flashback?

it is obvious that they managed to escape but what acctually happend?

i think maan should take her to doctor once, she seems really shattered

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Lena

@.Lina.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#349

Update.
The rest of the ending will be delayed until tomorrow.
Happy reading. 😊
@t_areeb- your question is answered in the next part (which I just put up). So, read and see, kay? 😉

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#350

dear lena..u finished u'r ff on a hopeful note. she may not b fully healed but is progressing towrds it.

the light at the end of the tunnel that she needs to find is right beside her.

she finds solace in his arms and nothing pains him more than her bruised happines. together they'll do fine.

but

i don't know personally if i'm more disturbed by the ff or the reasons u gave to write this story.

regardless of what my confused brains tells me...

...what i need to tell u or rather give u is a hug🤗

thanx for being an awesome n realistic writer.

i luv how u don't dictate or assert u'r point of view onto readers. many a times i feel like that some writers vent out about their own life's experiences and they want the wold to accept their choices...no matter how wrong they were.😆

so luv u as a writer and luv u'r approach towards writing.👍🏼

Edited by basicquestion1 - 14 years ago