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Lena

@.Lina.

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Posted: 14 years ago

REMOVED FOR PERSONAL PURPOSE
If you wish to read it, simply PM me.

Edited by .Lena. - 13 years ago

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sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

nice start ...

cant wait to read more ... btw how many parts are u planning to write for this ?

love

Sana

Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago

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Lena

@.Lina.

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Posted: 14 years ago

😊 Updated 😊

Edited by WhiteFantasy - 14 years ago

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abinash079

@abinash079

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Posted: 14 years ago

this neel is so disgusting how can do this to a 7-8 year girl good that this time maan was there but looking at ur tittle maan would not be able to save her from neel in future parts

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Anemari

@Anemari

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Posted: 14 years ago

Well written but bit disturbing :-(

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Maarrriiiam...Mariam :-)

@MaankiMariam

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Posted: 14 years ago

woah!!! neel is disgusting, how can he do that to a little girl??? great topic 2 write a OS on though...can't wait 2 see how the story progresses but im hoping Maan is her saviour and won't let anything bad happen xxx

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Preethi

@Preethi-Premi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Ewww a pedophile cousin... This is very dark... You better put a age warning Lena.. I mean even this part is not mean for children less than 13 years old...😊

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hindu4lyf

@hindu4lyf

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Posted: 14 years ago

OMG why do I have a really bad feeling of what might happen in the next few chapters? :|

As usual, very well written Lena! Looking forward to the next update..I really hope Maan is always there to save her!

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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 14 years ago

neel is such a disgusting chap...shameless kahin ka😡
well a nice attempt to capture the unique theme of pedophile in ur OS...
simply awesome narration...
loved it

do cont soon

reva

Edited by Dreamy_Mystique - 14 years ago