Tarnished Innocence~removed

basicquestion1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

Oh no no Lena ...me not pressing the like button.
I understand victims of such unfortunate incidents roam this earth in abundane,many ppl have scars etched in their souls...
I understand that... And I also know that there r only a few writers who can survive writing such dark material... But as of now... All I wanna say is no no no I'm not going to press the like button :(
luv u ...& Hate ur brutal sense of grasping reality :(

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Lena

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: abinash079
what have u done dear
where was maan why didnt he came and saved her😭

because, in reality there aren't that many maan's to save these girls. 😊

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honeygrape

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

😭 somebody plsss kill that neel... grrr😡

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kareena32

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

VERY SAD UPDATE HOPE THIS NEEL WILL GET SUCH AN HORRIBLE DEATH HATE HIM

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luvraj4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

loved the updates...very nicely written...

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zaara2212

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Posted: 14 years ago

#106

oh no that stupid Neel raped Geet

oh no

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JayaR

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Posted: 14 years ago

#107

Why did she let him in...when she knew she can't fight him if things went out of hand...???

At least she could have made a call to Maan informing him about Neel's presence in her house as soon as she reached her room...

and that bloody 🤬 Neel... Maan should just cut off his bloody manhood... that would do the job...

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Jazmin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#108

🤣🤣🤣 im laughing because im remembering my own birds-bees conversation...well...the one that never happened...i was a late bloomer...so i was in the 8th grade...one evening...Mom was brushing my hair...my oldest bhabi came and they were chatting...then suddenly...Mom was all...one day ill send her to you and you can tell her...Bhabi was shocked and was like me, are you sure...you're her mother...they were acting like i wasnt even there...it was SOOO HARD to pretend to be not paying attention when secretely i wanted to laugh my butt off🤣🤣🤣🤣..

beautiful update yaar...loved Maan saying he'd protect her!! and omg...birthcontrol pills 😲...but i cant blame geet...the girl is still petrified of this Neel!! 😡...but that bas***d got to her!! omg...poor Geet 😭...you penned that part beautifully...i mean...it was horrible to read something so disgusting but as a writer...your talent really shined!! 👏...i cant wait for maan to find out!!

JAZ

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