Tarnished Innocence~removed - Page 9

oh god such a sensitive topic... very well written cant wait for the update

OMG such a sensitive topic...very well written...

not that something i like to read

I have been reading this FF since you started it, but each time I read an update, I am unable to comment...as much as I want to...i cant find the right words to describe how grotesque this reality is for many girls. I cannot accept in my mind that this happens in real life to real girls...and it makes my skin crawl. You have written about this super sensitive topic brilliantly...showcasing the brutality and the despair.

My heart goes out to Geet... Her mother should be HUNG for being absent all the time and taking so little an interest in her daughter.

As for Neel...he should be CASTRATED and then HUNG!! There is no punishment too severe for him...and I cannot abide by excusing his behavior due to a mental dysfunction.

As for Maan...when he finds out, I think this will break him...crush him to shambles on the inside...yet, he will forever remain strong on the outside for his Geet!!

next...next...next...

Even though I knew what was coming, I dreaded reading it. Now what is going to happen? I feel so sorry for Geet. Neel disgusts me. And Maan is away in college. Brilliantly written! Thanks for the update and PM!