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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#941

this was fantastic...i just loved it...

awww...maan hurt his own self because he has hurt geet...i wonder how will geet react to this...

continue soon n thnxxx for the pm...

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

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Posted: 14 years ago

#942

😲
Once again, splendidly written! I'm actually feeling very sorry for Maan. Poor thing (thank god he wouldn't hear me saying that) finally sheds his cold exterior. He runs after the girl, he reveals his emotions, and what does he get? A lashing out from geet (after the romantic moment 😍). He even dropped his gun!!! Maan changed back so quickly, realizing that she was fully taking advantage of his emotional state, trying to weaken him. It was kind of sweet (in a dark, macabre way(though im not sure that sweet and dark go together in a sentence)) how he hurt himself as punishment (though he portrayed it as leveling the score).

My heart just melted a little when i heard him say, "I'm not a monster" and i hated Geet a little, right then and there, when I read her response. I get that it will take her time to become accustomed to Maan, but i hate her for saying that. But i don't get why she's upset and his cold-blooded actions when she is the one who admires his ruthless gangster ways. Anyways, looking forward to the next update!

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Zooni Begam

@ZooniBegam

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#943

I'm in love with this sentence I'm not a monster!!! Hmmm I imagine how he would hav said it!!!
Nice awesome fab update!!!!!!
Love ur ff!!!!!!!
Do continue soon!!!

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582204

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#944

really enjoyed the update why such a short one? :(

you describe maan and geets thoughts and feelings so well i feel like i am in their shoes one after another lool

cant wait for the next part

continue soon

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Deeksha

@annie.shona

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#945

oh boy.. he loves her

he so loves her ..

but dumbo he is.. hurting himself..

lets see wot geet does..

btw nice update

continue soon :)

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Roshni

@* ~ Roshni ~ *

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#946

Sammy!!!😃 u leave me spellbound by ur updates all the time - ur a pure writing genius :D I love the way you describe everything and the way they're feeling - I can just picture the scenes so clearly in my mind and im trying to find time to read Irrevocably Yours again its on my to do list!😆

I loved this part - my fav! Had to repost it😳 you feel his desire to have someone's affection/touch and how lonely he is and how having Geet just makes him complete.

Wishing to wipe away the traces of longing and sadness in his eyes, she gently caressed the scar on his face. Maan inhaled a deep harsh breath and closed his eyes, basking and relishing at the softness of her touch. It felt like half his lifetime had passed since anyone had lovingly placed a gentle hand upon his rough, tortured and hardened being.
Realizing what she was shamelessly doing, Geet tried to retrieve her hand away from his face. However as soon as he realized she was withdrawing from him again, Maan held onto her hand and allowed it to remain rested upon his cheeks. Opening his eyes, Maan ran the tip of his fingers down her hands, removing it from his face - only to press a soft kiss upon the palm of her hands. Gasping in astonishment, Geet could do nothing but simply and mutely stare. He caressed her bruised wrist with astounding care, lifting it upwards for him to kiss it better. As if to soothe away the pain he had inflicted, Maan placed gentle kisses up her arm, causing her to shiver in response.
'Maan?' she questioned uncertainly.
Shaking his head, Maan pressed his body close to hers - removing any form of distance between them. 'I'm not a monster Geet' he whispered, inwardly begging her to believe him.
Beautifully written . . . honestly - hats off to you!😃 looking forward to next update!

Edited by * ~ Roshni ~ * - 14 years ago

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-Veritaserum-

@-Veritaserum-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#947

Awesome update
Thanx for the PM

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#948

he already cares for her, and what she thinks about him matters to him as well

what happened to the gangster? he is showing emotions for a girl

well then he truly deserves a punishment

it was a really nice update, reflected his emotions beautifully

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Maaneet4eve

@Maaneet4eve

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#949

I loved the update a lot... the way you depicted the scene was really mindblowing...

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princess163

@princess163

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#950

Originally posted by: _SiinnceMaan_

Oh look whose here now!? -___- Yes I declare you guilty. Utterly so. In fact the sanction I place upon you is to read my fan fictions and comment till death do we part! 🤣 Nah it's all good babe, I forgive you. But don't you dare do the disappearing act again! Haha I loved the emoticons - I was laughing my ass off until I came across your horrendous spelling of my name. Sameera? Please tell me you did intentionally to horrify me. Please tell me that you did not actually think that was the spelling of my name! YOU should be aware of my phobia by now! I need an explanation woman! And if it is indeed a mistake - then you better be prepared to write me an essay length comment in punishment! 😆😆

YES! of course that was intentional😛

I have known you for quite some time Sammy and i know your FASCINATION and LOVE for SAMEERA😆😛

Didn't you notice the caps that I specially used?😆