The Gangsters Mistress M&G - 2nd Thread Link P.127 - Page 96

Very nicely done part.
I liked the exchange of emotions and dialouges between them. I'm glad u took their luv shuv a little slow. If maan is a gangster , he won't really start acting like a luv sick teenager in an hour.
I'm really hoping that geet wud take care of the wound he has inflicted upon himself in her name.

wow. that was definitely an intense scene..great job writing it!!!

Hayeee...

awesome!

Hey..Samira...thanx for pm.

I was busy in shifting so was offline...I read all remaining updates today.

All parts are wonderful...Geet is very smart and brave girl and Maan...he is so lonely,longing for love...after watching him as a ruthless murderer she hated him but after feeling his lonelyness she will surely try to sooth him with her love.

really nice update... maan is really lonely man and he just need love... geet still didnt know why maan had shoot that man... he punished himself for hurting her... waiting 4 next update... plz update soon...

Hey,

Awesome update as usual.
I loved the way you presented Maan's emotions, he's not that bad of a guy after all. He seems like a mystery...I love mysterious guys 😆

Anyway, do continue soon, I've been checking for an update everyday and finally found one 😊

P.S - ok don't wax her legs. I just hope Maan doesn't come across them.
I know your probably thinking 'she's so weird' seeing as its only fictional but the thing is when I get into a story I really get into it.
Its like I go to a different world. So if Maan does see her legs it will be Geet that gets insulted but at the same time I won't be able to get over it.

Weird right!😳

Ok enough of my nonsense you hurry and update soon😃

Awesome part.
Loved it.
Maan is a mystery

Updt soon.

Thanks for the pm.