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Zooni Begam

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Posted: 14 years ago

#931

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Here my hugs to u!!!
Uff missed u alot!!!

Edited by zooni20 - 14 years ago

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Saba

@Eccentric.Being

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Posted: 14 years ago

#932

Hey Samira,

Superb Update.👏

The way u described Maan's agony, seeing the fear & repulsion in Geet's eyes was fabulous.

He was horrified to hurt Geet but he is gangster who don't like to be blackmailed as that's what experiences have taught him.

Geet's empathy & her acts had calming effect but here they go again on raging war.

His punishment to hurt her in guise of his bitterness was depicted excellently.

Loved Piano tune.

Continue Soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#933

maan is too good

hurting himself for hurting her

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Zooni Begam

@ZooniBegam

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Posted: 14 years ago

#934

Oops I forgot love the piano tune!!!
Awesome tune!!!
Hehe hope u would start the next chapter soon!!!
So here I'm playing a part in it!!!

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#935

part 10
wow that was different from other updates and also in Maan's behavior...
didnt expect Maan to turn out this emotional and sentimental...
the hard tough guy makes him more appealing...
Geet always does everything in overdose...
cont soon dear...

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vivacious_gurl

@vivacious_gurl

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#936

wow sammy... loved it...

Maan said Geet I am not a monster... wow.. loved geet's sarchy retort... maan is punishing himself for hurting her... hmmm... interesting... the dude has already fallen for her...

me likey likey the update... but sammy it was short...

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#937

awesome part...maan is punishing himself for hurting geet

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613528

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Posted: 14 years ago

#938

Ok so I thought of this really long comment yesterday night during my thinking time and now I've completely forgot. So I'm just going to fill this comment with my incessant ramblings :D So umm...how should I begin?

This whole chapter was very touching. Oh c'mon I'm not a mushy wushy person! Don't so this to me Sam, I don't know what to write! I'm just going to go through some other people's comments and get some ideas.

Well...uhhh...I really liked how he said 'I'm not a monster' You hear/see/read (?) Oh whatever...let's just say feel the yearning in his voice. The whole update was described well.

Maan is like an Emo. She should him a wound and he he goes all crazy "STAB ME WITH A KNIFE BECAUSE YOU HURT MY EGO! AAAGGGHHH!" OK now I'm being stereotypical right. Oh darn now I'm being hypocritical because I hate stereotypes -_-

Anyway...

What should I say now? Maybe I should just make my writining super huge so it looks like I wrote a lot...

Nahhh... I hate it when people do that. HELLOO! I'm not blind, and I can read. I do not need the writing to be all up in my face.

Okay well that's all for now. Good night and thank you for coming to the show.

Edited by Boogleton.Schiz - 14 years ago