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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#861

Marvee , hun , let me enlighten you with something . I've an intense ongoing corse of B-Ed where my morning 8 hrs are taken up by the Uni followed by projects , presentations & tutorials & after all this @ 8:20 sharp when I finished reading your update , I got energized for yet another 8 hrs of studying & making files 👏

Some people are born writers . Well you are defo 1 of them 👏👏👏

'Liking' posts like this are so underrated ; IF should really keep 'Love' tabs for these kind of updates 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Getting speechless is nothing new for me after reading your updates . So I'll keep it as per my vocabulary is taking me .

Lovely , sensuous & intense update that left me blushing like a tomato/cherry

☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Yet their love surfaced & re-surfaced over & over again . After on the verge of losing each other I think they really deserved this

Brilliant dear & thanks for pm

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Mishty Shah

@MishtyShah

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#862

Beautiful Update...is was soo romantic...!! 😳 Please carry on and can you do something like the morning after...I mean if it is possible because I want to see how you portray these emotions but it was a FAB update...😃

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-Deepzz-

@-Deepzz-

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#863

Phew...☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

The last update scorched my lap top ....Totally worth it 😛

I wonder what road the story with take now that they are together .

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nazsij

@nazsij

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#864

OHHH MYYY GODDD WHAT WAS THAT?THIS IS SO HOT YAAR...I NEED SOME COLD WATER OTHERWISE I WILL BE STEAM...super yaar...hot hot hot hot hottt...super...untold emotion ko naam mil hi geyi...super...maan ka teasing tho poocho hi math...cottage hur din sajana?wah kya romantic hai?loved it...awesomeee

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-Pwincess-

@-Pwincess-

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#865

Wicked update! Loved it! So glad geets finally confessed her love!! Can't wait for your next update! Please make it quick xx

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seema

@Seema_sg24

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#866

Superb, awesm part loved it

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Saru

@smallville

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#867

Simply breathtaking !!!
Awesome update !!!

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jenny

@ajenn

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#868

You should have gave us some warning before updating this.
Now am feeling extremely hot after reading this whole part.
I need FAN!!!!!!
Am blushing madly reading it. Just loved it.
I loved the whole act in the middle of lake.
Their swimming class was the best for me.
And it was really an sweet act by Maan to deco his cottage everyday.
He was madly in love with Geet and silently expecting her to confessing.
He hold on hope that they will celebrate their SR...
Loved the way Geet confess her feelings.
It was right on phase.
Her realization was amazing.
Btw why does Geet always wear black inner.
Can I ask for a different color. Some Hot, steamy colorful inner. 😳
Thx for such HOT update. Am eager to read the next part. When are u going to update.
Well now am going to read this again...😆

Edited by ajenn - 14 years ago