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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
Wow awsome update slowly geet is coming close to Mann now the day is not far when shell tell him her feelings...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
it was very nice send me the link when u update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
superbbb
the way geet is possessive
she is jealous
i want to see how is the precap
omggg
what he is going to do
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
AWESOME UPDATE! I just loved it and it had me smiling the entire time. So happy about this new change & posessiveness in Geet and the bed scene was so cute! I seriously can NOT WAIT to read the next update. I'm so excited! :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
ahem ahem ... wow!! and geet thinks he is just his friend, i liked her reasons for staying in his arms
and what a reply to sasha..and whom she hugged? Adi?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heheee, geet ne sasha ki assi ki tassi kardi..
WHo is the handsome dude??
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
Congrats for new thread
awesome update
loved it
precap intersting
pls cont
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats on the new thread
update was very well written.
thanx for the pm and a wonderful read :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
wat an update ...:)


Originally posted by: itsreallyreal

Untold Emotions
Part 14

"Maan face me" Geet whispered tracing her hand along his arm. Maan had one arm along his side and the other underneath his head and he had no intention whatsoever of facing his wife. It was hard enough resisting her with his back to her and he would definitely lose it if he was forced to look into her deep dark eyes.

"Geet'uh no, go to sleep Geet, I'm really sleepy, subah jaldi uthna hai, you don't have college but I have to go to work" he muttered trying to pretend to sleep.

"Maan, main kab keh rahi hoon kay na so, I'm just asking you to turn around and face me'aur waisay bhi, I'm coming to work with you too tomorrow, you promised me remember" She persisted shaking his shoulder. When Maan didn't react to her words, Geet got up and went over him to his other side so that they were now facing each other. "Lo , here you don't want to turn around then don't, I'll come over" she smiled a big teethy smile.

Maan stared at her, she was very close to him, her feet were touching his and his face a mere few inches from his. He wondered if she really did want to sleep with him but then shook his head knowing that she would never give in so easily, then why was she acting this way. "Geet" he said stroking her face with his fingers. "Jaan, why are you doing this?" he asked in the least questioning manner possible not wanting to hurt her. "Geet, I love you and you simply cannot fathom how attracted I am to you in every way possible way then why are you'"

Geet interrupted him by placing her finger on his lips. "Maan, I know" she giggled when she saw him looking her all over. "But Maan, for the past month I haven't been able to sleep properly" she said suddenly more serious. "Maan, when you hold me, it makes me feel stronger, this odd feeling washes over me that tells me that everything is alright, Maan when I hear your heart beating, it gives mine courage to continue beating," she said placing her hand on his chest "when your breath falls on my skin and when your fingers gently trail over my body'it feels really good" she suddenly looked down, her cheeks turning a slide shade of pink. "Maan, I want to fall asleep in your arms'please" she finished off still looking down at his chest and not in his eyes.

And she doesn't love me Maan thought to himself and smiled.

"But Maan, if it makes you uncomfortable, then'" she started to move away from him.

"Geet" he said pulling her back towards him. Surprised by the sudden pull, she grabbed his vest for protections and shut her eyes tight. He wrapped his legs around hers, removed her hand from his chest and put it around his muscular body. He pushed her hair back over her shoulder onto the pillow, his fingers drawing patterns along her jawline. "Geet, multiply everything you said by a billion and then you will start to realize what I feel with you around me" he said quietly "Geet, open your eyes love" he whispered.

Her body was pounding to a new rhythm with the new found vicinity. His feet had pushed up her pajama pants while entangling her legs with his, the bare skin tingled where it met his. Her hand was clutching the cloth on his back and when he spoke his breath landed on her lips making her lips quiver. She opened her eyes to meet his and her heart stopped beating for a second when she read the raw desire and wanting in his eyes. She couldn't respond but her body was responding in its own fashion. Her arms went up and around his neck pushing their chests against each other's' as she held him really close to her.

"Geet" Maan exclaimed when he felt her full body pressed against his "you're not wearing a bra?" he asked mischievously. He saw her face go from a slight pink to a bright red.

"Maan, oh my God, you urgghhh" she said trying to pry herself off of him as she realized that he must have felt her going hard. He pulled her back as she tried to back off, he plastered her against him not leaving any space between them.

"Geet" he whispered sensuously in her ear "I love the effect I have on you" he said with a smirk as Geet wriggled in his grip only arousing him more with her constant movement.

Geet felt her face going really warm and even though she tried to stop, her body kept responding to his touch. "Maan" she struggled against his hold "Please let go" she said sternly. Maan loosened his grip immediately thinking that she was mad. But he relaxed when he saw the twinkle in her eye when she looked up at him, he could tell that she was trying to come up with something witty to say, a bahana for her response. "Maan, she said poking his chest with her finger'woh'yeah umm yeah so'I've told you before, you're hot okay" she said with a nervous grin "and no girl wears a bra at night" she added turning away from him and facing the other way.

"Geeet" he said as he circled her waist with his arms and pulled her back against him. "Okay, I'm sorry, I won't notice that you're responding to my so sensuously" he chuckled "Face me please".

"No" she said annoyed. Geet was so confused, God why can't I just be normal around him, stupid you Geet, you told him to come sleep with you ab bhugto, why does he feel sooo good all the time? Because he's your HOT best friend remember pagal larki she told herself.

"Geet, face me now or else'" Maan threatened.

"Or what" Geet challenged, "if you tickle me again, I'll tickle you back and then I'll make you eat mango acchar and I'll tell Sawera aunty to make you go with Annie to her girls' grad trip thing" she said menacingly.

"Fine," Maan declared "you asked for it!" He grabbed her shoulder and pulled her so that she was lying on her back. Her big dark eyes stared up at him in surprise. "Geet last time poochh raha hoon, will you face me and sleep, this is your last chance, after this, you'll be responsible for whatever happens and I'm not going to tickle you." He clarified staring right into her eyes.

"Nope, I'm not going to face you, kar lo jo karna hai" she said adamantly her arms crossed across her chest and her heart pounding at the prospect of what he would do. She saw him place his arms on both sides of her head on the pillow, his body hovering over hers. Geet's breathing was becoming quicker as she felt the heat radiating from him. She stared into his eyes and clutched the sheets in an attempt to control herself.

He lowered himself onto her taking in her smell. He knew he had to be careful to just tease her and not cross the line but it was so hard to keep his sanity when she was around. Maan undid the top two buttons of the shirt she was wearing, his fingers slowly tracing the revealed skin. Geet shook with his touch "Maan" she whispered holding his hand securing it against her chest.

"Have you changed your mind Geet," he probed

"No," she replied not wanting him to stop. Maan smiled at the desire in her eyes and kissed the exposed skin of her chest. His hands went beneath her shirt holding her waist firmly squeezing the soft skin with his hands.

"Geet" he breathed huskily against her neck "if you don't stop me now'I won't be able to stop after this" he was slowly losing control. She felt his hands going higher up her body, his thumb now grazing the softness just below her breasts. She knew she had to stop him but she simply didn't have the control in her to fight him right now. She wanted him much more desperately than she had realized, she wanted him all over her, she wanted to feel his skin against hers.

Maan could hear her rapid breathing and heartbeat underneath him, he knew judging from the way her body was responding and her now closed eyes that she would not stop him. He knew that she wanted him as much as he wanted her right now but he wanted her to know that this was not just a physical attraction. Holding his breath, not wanting to breathe in her sensuous scent so that he wouldn't lose himself again, he removed his hands from underneath her shirt and slowly lifted himself off of her.

Geet felt his body leave hers and she suddenly felt so empty. She opened her eyes and turned to him to meet his. "Maan" she said as she blushed. "You know Maan, I think your cologne has some sort of cocaine or something in it, every time I sniff it, I lose my mind" she said trying to ease the sexual tension that filled the air around them.

"Sure Geet," he said chuckling'he didn't have any cologne on. "Come here jaan, and go to sleep" He said as he pulled her close to him and wrapped the blanket around them. She snuggled against him, her head resting on his chest and her hand over his heart feeling it beat for her. He wrapped one arm around her waist and placed his other hand on hers. "Goodnight Geet, I love you" he said kissing her forehead.

"Goodnight Maan, I love'uhh I mean I love your cologne" she said mentally smacking herself for losing her mind so easily. They fell asleep like that in each other's arms.


Geet woke up to find herself in his arms. She was overwhelmed by a sudden adoration for the man
who held her so lovingly, how could he love her like this, so unconditionally. She felt him squeeze her tighter and she realized that he was awake staring down at her. "Morning Geet Khurana, how did you like sleeping with me?" he said winking at her.

"Theek tha" she said making a face "lekin you can do better than this" she said naughtily tracing her finger down his chest. She escaped from his grip laughing like a little child and rushed to take a shower and get ready for her first day as CEO with Maan. "Maan" she called out to him from the closet "main kya pehnoo, should I wear dress pants and stuff or jeans theek hain".

"Meray liye to tum kuch bhi mut pehno" he muttered under his breath as he headed downstairs and then yelled a bit louder so that Geet could hear "Kuch bhi Geet, just hurry up, I'm getting late".

"You can't be late Maan, you're the CEO" she yelled back and hurried to meet him. Her French vanilla was ready on the counter and he had made her a bagel as well. "But Maan, I don't drink French vanilla anymore" she complained.

"Uffo Geet, then what do you drink in the morning, coke?" he mocked her

"God Maan, you're impossible, I drink black coffee now" she replied with a smile as she quickly made two cups of coffee. Maan smiled to himself and they both headed out to the car.

As soon as they were in the car, Maan took his laptop out and became engrossed in some file. Geet moved closer and looked over his shoulder at what he was reading and started reading the details along with him. "That's a good merger Maan" she said startling him.

"Yeah, I was thinking the same thing but we would pretty much eat their company up'they would lose their name" Maan replied.

"Well, that's business Maan, you can't be worrying about others if you want to excel" she said sternly. Maan smiled seeing the hard core business woman in his wife. Office wale to gaye, ek main kum tha kya jo ab yeh bhi aa gayi hai he thought to himself and smirked.

They reached the building and the driver rushed to open the door for them. Suddenly Maan and Geet were surrounded by six very serious men dressed in black and Geet was taken by surprise. "Uhh Hi sir" she said to one of the guys "Can I help you" she asked kind of scared.

"Geet" Maan said laughing inside "they're the body guards" he finished holding her hand in his pulling her by his side.

"Maan, are you serious, body guards, hum koi jang larnay jaa rahe hain kya" she asked looking at him like he had just told her a joke.

"Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana, you'd better get used to this" he said with a crooked smile. They were heading towards the elevator when Geet grabbed his arm and pulled him down to whisper in his ear.

"Maan, yeh saaaraayy elevator main be aaayien gay, we're not going to fit" she said sceptically. Maan just rolled his eyes at her and pulled her forward into the elevator where two new men dressed in black waited. "Sheesh Maan, tum kahin don shon to nahi ho" she asked once they were in the elevator. The elevator stopped and they both stepped out without the guards. Geet thanked God that they weren't being stalked anymore. She held Maan's hand tightly slightly nervous after all that she had seen so far.

They walked into a very lavish looking work space and a silent hush took over the place as Maan walked in with Geet's hand in his. Everybody got off their seats and " Hello sir and Hello ma'ams" filled the silent air. Maan just nodded and walked towards a huge luxuriously decorated cabin.

Geet pulled her hand free of his, how rude she thought to herself, waapis hello bhi nahin kehta. "Hi Guys," she said chirpily greeting all the staff. "I'm Geet, Maan's wife" she said pointing at Maan who stood stunned by his cabin door.

The staff just stared back at her in shock not knowing how to respond. This was the first time anybody had every spoken like this without being told to by Maan. They then all looked over to Maan who was smiling slyly, he liked how she had declared herself his wife so proudly in front of everybody, his heart was beating faster but he kept himself in control.

Geet stared back at the petrified employees, they all looked well educated and dressed nicely but they were scared to death right now. "Ahem'alright then guys, you want to congratulate us, we just got married'well two months ago" she chuckled trying to relax the ambience. She realized that they were all staring at Maan in fear. "Oh my God, why're you looking at him like that, kha to nahi jaayega," she laughed and punched his chest lightly. A few giggles escaped from the crowd and Maan suddenly shot them a look shutting them up again.

A silent murmur of "congrats" and then everybody was back to work. Maan put his arm around Geet's waist and pulled her into the room. "Holy shit Geet, what in the world are you doing, you can't be that friendly with the employees" he exclaimed stunned by her behaviour.

"Why Maan, they work for us so it wouldn't hurt to be nice to them" she refuted back.

"Yes, Geet but that's not the way it works here" he said.

"Wow, you know this is actually pretty cool, Maan Singh Khurana my husband, the hard core hot and sexy strict scary heartthrob businessman," she said almost jumping with excitement "But I'm still going to be nice to them" she said sticking her tongue out, "we need at least one human running the company and the other can be a robot" she chuckled.

"So I'm sexy eh!" he smiled at her mischievously and advanced towards her.

"Haan toh, John Abraham is sexy too, I'm not in love with him" she replied moving back.

There was a knock on the door and Maan stopped. A girl came in dressed in a very skimpy black pencil skirt and halter top showing half her chest. "M.K." she exclaimed and flung her arms around him hugging him. Geet stood there staring, a new searing pain tore through her chest, one that she had never felt before in her life. This random girl touching Maan was burning through her and she was enveloped by anger.

"Hello excuse me," she said poking the girl's bare shoulder. "Who are you, what are you doing here and get your hands off of my husband" Geet said almost yelling at her. Both Maan and the girl stared back in awe.

"Oh hi, you're Geet" the girl said bitterly "I'm Sasha, the head architect here and'"

"Okay that's all I asked for" Geet said raising her hand in the air to stop her "and no I'm not Geet, I'm Geet ma'am, your new CEO and this" she said pointing at Maan "is Maan SIR for you".

"But M.K" she whined looking at Maan. Maan just stared at Geet with an amused smile on his face. He was really enjoying this, Geet was so jealous and so darn possessive, he loved it.

"Oye hello, what did I just say, next time I hear you call him anything but Maan sir, you're fired" she said sternly. "And Maan" she said turning to look at her smiling awe-struck husband "do you not have a dress code for this place, this is disgusting" she said looking Sasha over. "Go cover yourself girl, this is not a strip club, dress decently or go work somewhere else".

Sasha just stared back not understanding, how could this girl just go on like this and Maan not say anything. Maan had never allowed anyone to speak this long in his presence and now he just seemed to love every word that she was saying. "Now leave and get the file for the Mittal merger" Geet said sternly dismissing Sasha. Sasha left the room filled with anger.

Now that she was gone, Geet turned to Maan, her hands on her hips. "What was this?" she asked angrily.

"What Geet, she's just a friend and we were just hugging" he replied smiling his crooked smile.

"Maan, don't give me that, I don't want to ever see you near her again" she said pointing a finger in his face.

"warna" he said mischievously "what are you going to do".

"Maan, if I see you touching her again, I'm going to'I'm going to go out there and hug every single one of your employees." She fought back.

"theek hai kar lo" he said not believing her.

Right at that moment the door opened and a very good looking young man walked inside. Geet saw her opportunity and went to him and wrapped her arms around his neck.

Precap: "Shhh Geet" he said as he unbuttoned her shirt "this is your punishment"

Thank you all so much for the wonderful comments and for liking the story, I hope you enjoy this part too and that I haven't disappointed you.
Please continue to comment and like, I love reading all your comments.
Love you all,
Marvee

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Posted: 14 years ago
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First of all...CONGRATULATONS for the 2nd Thread Marvee...my this story continues on to many more threads like this...😃

The update was fabulous as always...Maan really loves Geet a lot which is why he controls himself around her so much so as not to hurt her anytime...he is a true gentleman...So finally Geet came face-to-face with teh hardcore businessman The Maan Singh Khurana-side of her hot best friend Maan😆...loved the whole office set-up...n that scene with Sasha...😆😆... wow... loved it more than anything😆😆...do write more such scenes between Geet n Sasha...would love to see that Sasha getting bashed up by this Geet😛😛...it would be really great...so now Geet hugged a random guy😆...Lets see how Maan reacts to that...but yeah seeing the precap I can assume his reaction😆...n can't wait to read more...so pls update soon😛

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