FF FORBIDDEN LOVER (MG) PT 4 04/26/12 - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one sonaal just read this. please continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
update soon...You not updating the other FF as well...
Pls PM me in all your FF
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Hi dear..went through old pm n saw u updated...please pm wen u update. Lovely update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 2


Maan 18

Geet 18

Maan and Geet are meeting in a coffee shop'Maan looked disturbed'

Geet: Maan kya hua? Something is bothering you'

Maan never hides anything from her'he just couldn't'

Maan: Geet yesterday I got a call from my school principal that I got scholarship in an elite university here'

Geet: that's awesome news'then why are you so bothered'

Maan: I never applied to that uni'i mean I am not even sure if I want to go there'Geet was drinking her coffee as Maan said that'

Geet started coughing'

Maan rushed to her and patted her back and gave her water'

Maan: are you ok?

Geet nodded her head'

Geet: why don't you want to visit the college'I mean it's an amazing opportunity'

Maan: I know but this uni is visited by rich kids'and I don't fit in that world'

Geet: what rubbish'Maan you don't have to fit in somewhere'everyone else has tofit in your world...and which college is it?

Maan: xy university'

Geet: really'I can't believe it you got admission at the swme college?

Maan: same matlab?

Geet: I am going to the same one...Maan please join me na'I mean it will be so much fun'

Maan: hmm'I will think about it'I have to leave now'I can't be late for work'

Geet sighed: teek hain'bye'

Maan left from there'

Maan was working in pizza hut as cashier'it was his part time job'she admired that he wanted to do everything by himself'he always earned everything himself'he never asked his parents for money'and he topped always in school'he never accept any kind of gifts'with his smartness and hard work he can do whatever he wants but he's simple'like his father'Geet loved him for that'but she couldn't let him waste his talent'no one is going to order her future husband around'she only tolerates him working there because she bought the pizza hut and it was his'but of course Maan doesn't know that'and that with the uni wasn't not really a coincident'

Geet was on the phone now

Geet: Mr. Chopra here is Geet'Geet Handa'I talked to you about Maan's admission already'

Mr. Chopra: mam'I talked to him but he didn't seem to be interested'

GH: Mr. Chopra i don't know how or what you will do but he shoud get the admission and visit this university...or else i don't think that i am going to be a student there...and Mr. Chopra i don't think you want to have any issues with me...i just wanted to make sure you have understood me...

Mr Copra: yes mam...i will try everything possible to accomplish your wish mam...

GH: Don't try Mr. Chopra just do it...i want him there at any cost'

Mr Chopra: of course mam'

She cuts the call and went back home'

when they were at school Geet couldn't do anything so that they could go to the same school'but now everything was different'she knew how to get her way'it was a big help that her parents were so ignorant about her activities...he has to agree and then she can be around him'she will do the same courses'

Maan is planning to open a small construction company after finishing his studies but Geet wants him to become the most successful businessman'she didn't care about the money or prestige'it was just that her Maan have to be Nr.1 and she makes always sure he is'.

Edited by sonnal_17 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
lovely one
geet is always good in commanding position
thanks for the update

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Posted: 13 years ago
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please update pyaar aur nafrat also nw... if possible

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome...

geet loves him...that is evident...but what abt him...does he have the same feelings??

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Geet's so sweet
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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NOTE:

Hi guys sorry for the delay...i got so many PMs regarding my FFs...but i am really busy at the moment and i often visit IF with my iphone...and i can't write an whole update with my iphone...i forgot to leave a note...yesterday i posted a part of Forbidden lover...i have written that Part a long time ago and i forgot to post it also...i have so many things going on right now...so really very sorry...but i am not going to leave my ffs midway...but pls be patient with me...and pls don't wonder if you didn't get PM because i havent't PMd for a long time...i will update this weekend surly all my ffs...

with lots of love
sonnal
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww loved it
the way geet gets her way when she wants maan to be on the top is just awesome

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