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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congratulations on the 10th thread!! :O :O :D
You have some capacity to write! =) One word. Respect.
LOL.. No seriously.. We keep on getting pissed at CVs for showing us non-sensical things.. But when you actually sit to write, its not the easiest thing to do.. Very easy to get saturated (and lazy! :P SHSHSH! )
I don't comment on every part.. Because I read most of the fiction from my phone.. But this one I HAD to comment.. I was in the 7th when I used to watch Sanjeevani.. Hehe.. And the whole bit of Dr Juhi made me all nostalgic.. Its been so longgg to Sanjeevani.. Time flies!
The cutest bit was the Armaan Juhi conversation.. ! =)) Could totally imagine Dr Juhi Singh and a ten year old Armaan with the Sanjeevani tune playing in my head... !
PS: I think Shashank should really give Armaan a little more respect.. He's the to-be-son-in-law of the family :P
I also loved the bit when Riddhima quietly slips her hand into his.. And he doesn't turn around or even have to acknowledge it.. That moment actually defines Armaan Riddhima in brief for me!!
Keep up the awesome work.. =)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: zephyrr

Welcome to Thread #10 of The World's Oldest Story!! Woah.. We've reached double figures now!! I just hope that its not become far too long now.. Even if it has, I hope you guys are enjoying it coz that's all that matters..

Thread #10 starts on a serious note.. I myself haven't decided where to take the story from here.. But I hope you all like it.. And I do hope to end it at a happy place! 😊

But that's a long way to go.. Another 150 pages.. And I hope to write more parts in this one.. 😉😛
Till then.. Keep Reading.. The World's Oldest Story!! 😃


I WANT IT TO GO ON FOREVER!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

Congrats..😃!! Love it already..!!!

Cont soon!!! will give a good comment once the update is finished..
love,
Sanaa

Thanks.. But this part is complete.. Its got a tittle at the beginning and no 'to be continued..' at the end.. LOL!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Dhw@ni

Congratulations on the 10th thread!! :O :O :D

You have some capacity to write! =) One word. Respect.
LOL.. No seriously.. We keep on getting pissed at CVs for showing us non-sensical things.. But when you actually sit to write, its not the easiest thing to do.. Very easy to get saturated (and lazy! :P SHSHSH! )
I don't comment on every part.. Because I read most of the fiction from my phone.. But this one I HAD to comment.. I was in the 7th when I used to watch Sanjeevani.. Hehe.. And the whole bit of Dr Juhi made me all nostalgic.. Its been so longgg to Sanjeevani.. Time flies!
The cutest bit was the Armaan Juhi conversation.. ! =)) Could totally imagine Dr Juhi Singh and a ten year old Armaan with the Sanjeevani tune playing in my head... !
PS: I think Shashank should really give Armaan a little more respect.. He's the to-be-son-in-law of the family :P
I also loved the bit when Riddhima quietly slips her hand into his.. And he doesn't turn around or even have to acknowledge it.. That moment actually defines Armaan Riddhima in brief for me!!
Keep up the awesome work.. =)

Thanks so much.. I am so glad that you liked it.. (and everyone else who did too..).. I just hoped it didnt get too confusing.. almost everyone knew each other.. LOL!!
but you're right about Sanjeevni.. I was in school too when it was on air.. It was a brilliant show.. I started watching DMG only coz it was supposedly a sequel to Sanjeevni.. so i thought to include a few characters here..
Thanks again.. Keep reading.. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: belle_moi

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Hey! That was quite a part! I love u for bringing Rahul and Juhi in the picture! I adore them just as much as Armaan and Riddhima! And Armaan is sooo damn cute! Btw, congrats for the new thread! From now on toh per chapter u'll have one thread! Really enjoyed reading the part, the way I always do! You know, I am absolutely enchanted by the way you write! You are awesome! And I want you to update Shades Of Grey soon! PLEASE! I like the chapter headings u givr VERY much! Like even in Shashank redemption! The title u came up with was ingenius! Love u AND UPDATE SOON!
Love.
Antara:)

thanks for liking the part so much Antara..
And i completely agree that Armaan is just too cute.. He's Armaan ya!! LOL!!
Glad you liked Rahul and Juhi..
Thanks for mentioning the tittles.. They're something i put in some effort into.. you know.. creativity-wise..
About Shades of Gray.. The thing is i shouldn't have posted it.. coz i cant think on two parallel lines at the same time. and i dont have so much time to give to both stories right now.. but as soon as i get bored of writing TWOS!! i'll write Shades.. and i dont think that'll take that long a time.. LOL!!
Keep reading! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
Congrats on the new thread Zeph! :) *Goes back to read part*
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congo for the new thread...

n loved juhi armi interaction...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
WoooHooo!... Finally My wish Has Been Granted!... We gota 10th Thread!... WOW mannn!...

IF has got TALENT!... CONGRATULATIONS!...

Im blimin more excited and happy than you would be LOL!... If you remember I did say to you that your not going eniiwhr before the 10th Thread!... Here it is now!... THE OFFICAL 10TH THREAD OF THE WORLD'S OLDEST STORY!...

Im celebrating now!... Will ready and comment later!... ILY man!... <333
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
Wow! I dont care if theyhave not yet celebrated the New Year 2011...you are doing such an awesome job... the detailing is just amazing! Keep up the good work.
RT
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: DMG fan

Wow! I dont care if theyhave not yet celebrated the New Year 2011...you are doing such an awesome job... the detailing is just amazing! Keep up the good work.

RT

I'm so relieved someone said that!! 😃 😆
Thanks!!

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